virman ff PYAR MEIN KABHI KABHI #2 chap 27 pg 135 - Page 63

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashishi

oh ok ok thn chill mar n take ur time:-D

maine chill kia na toh sab chillange mishu... 😆
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Arey its ok ur tired so u shud take a rest.that wud b btr 4 u
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NEXT UPDATE IN FEW MINUTES...!!!!!!!!
EXTREMELY SORRY FOR THE DELAY...!!!!!!
DARE ANYBODY SAY THAT IT WAS SHORT...!!!!!
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JUST UPDATING...!!!!
SUMTHING IMPT CAME UP...!!!!
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nain plz update fast.i am feeling sleepy.
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link to the previous chapter
CHAPTER 24
virat was all angry after the phone conversation, he returned home and was going to his room when viren called me. virat turned around trying to control his rage against viren, his own brother who loved him like a father, his own brother who has become the third angle in his love story, his own brother who was everything for him.
virat : haan bhai...
viren : tune sharab pi hai...
virat : thodi si...
viren : accha sunn...
virat : hmm...
viren : yaar i need your help... actually its manvi's birthday tomorrow n i am afraid i dont have time to prepare for anything special... i wanted to throw a party but i have an important meeting which cannot be postponed. can u help me...??
virat : sure bhai... u dont worry... i will manage everything...
viren : thanks and goodnight...
virat : goodnight..
virat entered his room and closed the door with a bang. he sat on the bed and rest his head against the headboard.
virat : how can i forget manvi's birthday...??? how can i...??? noo... i cannot forget her birthday.. i love her... yes...i love her more than anything... i need to make manvi believe that i remembered her birthday and i am sorry bhai, what if u are unable to reach to the party tomorrow... manvi would really feel bad but no stress, i will be there for her and that party will be my style... happy birthday manvi...
scene shifts
viren called manvi to wish her on her birthday...
manvi : hello...
viren : baar baar din ye aae.. baar baar dil ye gaye.. tum jio hazaron saal ye meri hai aarzoo... happy birthday to u... happy birthday to u... happy birthday to manvi... happy birthday to u...

manvi : thank u soo much mere filmy hero...
viren : your most welcome meri filmy heroine...
manvi : exact on 12... woww...
viren : have i ever been late in wishing you...???
manvi : hmm... lemme think... no...
viren : see... your to be husband never fails to wish u on time...
manvi : i am soo lucky... thank u for being in my life...
viren : dare u say that again manna...
manvi : what...???
viren : that u are lucky... infact i am lucky to have you... dont forget, viren is lucky to have manvi...
manvi (in tears) : hmm...
viren : hey... no getting emotional today...
manvi : i love you... i wont be able to live without you...
viren : arrey its a matter of only 10 days meri jaan... phir...
manvi : phir...???
viren : phir hum tum ek kamre mein band ho...
manvi : hehe... okk... thats cool...
viren : cool...??? no.. that would be hot...
manvi (blushing) : okk now goodnight... mujhe neend aa rahi hai...
viren : neend nahi, tumhe sharam aa rahi hai...
manvi : haawww... ye kisne kaha...???
viren : tumhe nahi ta...
manvi : pta hai... chandigarh's best lawyer viren vadera said so...
viren : bingo...
manvi : viren everybody is looking at me and giggling...
viren : sab wahin hai kya...??
manvi : haan...
viren : bahut maje aa rahe honge na...???
manvi : unko...
viren : hehe... okkk...
shaurya snatche dthe phone from manvi and said ' i love you too viren ji... "
viren : saale... tu bhi na...
shaurya : saala... no you can too call me jiju if u want...
viren : accha jijaji... ab main phone rakhun...???
shaurya : kitna kamina hai na tu... manvi ke milte hi mujhe bhool gaya... yaad hai hostel mein kaise...
viren : tu bhi na... meri shadi hone se pehle hi cancel karwaega...
shaurya : hehe... toh fir mujhse panga mat lio...
viren : bilkul... goodnight jija ji...
shaurya : goodnight...
scene shift
shaurya : here is your mobile saali sahiba...
manvi : what were u guys talking about...???
shaurya : maya... manvi sach mein badi ho gayi hai... apne jiju ke saath KBC khel rahi hai...
maya : hehe... let it be shaurya... give her the gift now...
manvi : gift... wow... but di already gave me one...
shaurya : oh hello... this is from your jiju darling...
manvi (hugged him) : thank you jiju...
shaurya : god bless you mavi... keep smiling...
manvi : baki logo ke gifts kahan hai... dabbe...???
dabbu : didi main toh bhool hi gaya tha ke apka birthday hai aaj...
manvi threw a cushion at dabbu and started running behind him...
manvi : tu mera birthday bhoolega... kutta...
dabbu : did... please main thank gaya hoon...
manvi : di iss dabbe ke liye kuch thoosne ko le aao...
maya : mannu... stop it na... he is a kid...
manvi : okkk... jaa tujhe maaf kia...
everybody gave gifts and their blessing to manvi and were leaving when manvi stopped maya n shaurya...
shaurya : manvi we already gave you soo many gifts... what do u want now...??? dont hyper our husband wife time... (putting his hand on maya's shoulder)
manvi held shaurya's hand and placed it around her shoulder and looked at him " but i am your one n only saali sahiba... "
shaurya : ohhh... yeah... what about dabbi...??
manvi : let him be ...i will kill him... he gave me nothing...
maya : mannu...
manvi : okk...okkk.. i forgive him... he is just a kid, i know...
shaurya : so why did u stop us...???
manvi : lets open the gifts...
maya : you can oen it tomorrow mannu... it already late...
manvi : no... i want to open it right now...
shaurya : i agree... that would be fun...
maya : like jiju like saali...
manvi : woh toh hai...
manvi opened the gifts while maya and shaurya sat in front of manvi admiring her and praying to god, to fill her life with all the happiness in the world.

manvi : woww di... what a nice watch...!!! but why did u gift me a watch...???

shaurya : thats my choice... n by the way, u are getting married into vadera's so u seriously need to keep a check on time... thats why a watch for u...
manvi : haha... very funny...
maya : open that gift... lets see watch your jiju gifted you...
manvi : as if u dont know...
maya : yes... i dont know...
manvi : uff...!!!
manvi opened the gift and her eyes pooped out...
maya : what is it...???
manvi : I-PHONE...

maya : okk... what...??? shaurya u never gave me one...
shaurya : thats for my saali sahiba... exclusively...
maya : but i am your wife...
shaurya : okk... take this...

maya opened the gift that shaurya handed over to her...
maya : woww... same gift... thank you...
manvi : my jiju greatest...!!!
maya : thank u shaurya...
shaurya : anytime chaudhary sisters... 😃
manvi : you made my day jiju... i love you...
shaurya : i love you too...
maya : nobody loves me...
manvi : awww... we love u di...
shaurya : yes we love u di...oops wifey...
the trio bursted in laughter...
the next morning, virat got up and smiled to himself... he was all ready to plan a birthady party for the love of his life. he left home early and told viren not to worry as he would handle everything... whole day long virat prepared for the party, invited all the people whom viren told him to... later in the day, virat called viren to make sure manvi is coming...
just an hour before the party
virat : all set... you will love it manvi... like always...!!!
viren : i doubt...
virat : bhai...??? u...??? i mean u had a meeting... right...??
viren : yeah but i managed to wrap it up early... i cant miss my manna's bday party chote...

virat smiled but from within he was angry and not liking the fact that viren actually made up for the party.
viren : u know when i was about to leave, i found that all the tyres of my car were punchered...
virat : what...??? how...??? (he said to himself... " i did it bhai... i did it with my own hands but it didnt stop u from coming...)
viren : donno... let it be.. i took a taxi n came here... nothing more important than manvi...
virat : yeah... ( "shitt... damnit.. " he said to himself)
viren : but virat u did a mistake... actually it was my mistake...
virat : exactly ( "mistake of loving my manvi..." virat said to himself )
viren : what...??
virat : i mean whats the mistake...???
viren : manvi loves lilies and all i can see around is rose.. red rose..
virat : but girls love red roses...
viren : dnt worry but from now remember that manvi loves lilies - white or pink... whatever shade but it should be lily...
virat : hmm... why dont u get ready bhai...???
viren : yeah...
viren left to get ready and said that he would return soon whereas virat was taken into the past...
*** flashback ***
virat : manvi...???
manvi : hmm...
virat : get up...
manvi : lemme sleep... please...
virat : manvi if u dont wake on the count of five, i will join you again in the bed...
manvi : no i am getting u... see i got up...
manvi got up and sat on the bed and was rubbing her eyes...
virat : see what i got for u...
manvi : what...???
virat : a beautiful red rose... u love it... right..??? i know u will love it...
manvi : yeah... i will love it...
virat : idiot say u loved it...
manvi : i loved it...
*** flashback ends ***
virat : u never loved red roses... u never love them... i forced it on u... i forced you to love red rose because i liked them and thought u love them too... main tumhare baare mein kuch nahi jaanta... kuch nahi... ye tak nahi ke that u love lilies... ye maine kar diya... jisse pyaar kia, kabhi uski pasand na-pasand jaane ki koshish hi nahi ki aur tum... tumne mujhe kyun nahin btaya... kyun...??? you will have to answer me today...!!!! anyhow i will get answer to all my questions sweetheart...
viren bought manvi to the party venue and manvi was stunned to have look at the decoration...
viren : what happened...???
manvi : u did this all for me...??
viren : no virat did this... (running his fingers into his hair)
manvi : i thought so u would have taken lilies instead...
viren : i know baby... but virat was unaware u see...
manvi : i know... (thinking about how virat used to assume things n never bothered to ask her anything or even try to know about her likes and dislikes)
viren : lets go birthday girl...
manvi : lets go...
the thing that manvi saw was virat who was approaching towards her with a bouquet in his hands. he came and stood in front of manvi and viren.

virat : wish u a very happy birthday manvi...!!!!

he gave the bouquet to manvi and kissed her cheek.
manvi was shocked to see the audacity this guy had, he just kissed his brother's fiance n that too in the middle of a party...
viren : ahem ahem...
virat : i was just wishing her... (looking at viren n trying to be casual as if nothing happened)
viren : but we dont wish like this in india virat...
virat : oh cmon bhai.. lets cut the cake...!!!
viren : ok... manvi lets go sweetheart... its time for cake cutting...
manvi : hmmm...
manvi moved with viren trying to avoid any sort of eye contact with virat.
viren : hey guys may i have your attention...
virat : bhai i want to sing something on this occasion only for the birthday girl...
everybody started hooting for virat and virat smirked and the lights were dimmed.. manvi was standing with viren and her hand entangled with his.
Kyun dooriyan..hai darmiyaan (virat was looking at manvi and his gaze was burning her body...)
Badh jaane de nazdeekiyan (manvi tightened her grip on viren's hand)
Har saans mein mehsoos kar (virat was moving closer and closer to manvi n viren)
In saanson ki madhoshiyan (with passion clearly visible in his eyes and audible in his voice)

Tera nasha aise chadhe (glaring at manvi)
Tera nasha zidd pe ade
Tera nasha aise nachaaye
Jhoom jhoom jhoom jhoomta hun
(asked other people to join the dance floor)

Tera nasha mujhko hua
Tera nasha hai khwaab sa
(putting his elbow on viren's shoulder and looking at manvi)
Tera nasha aise nachaaye
Jhoom jhoom jhoom jhoomta hun main

Bus teri aankhon se
(he winked at manvi...)
Peena hai jeena hai
Aise hi mujhe...
(he turned around and started moving towards the bar)
Rehna nahi hai
Ab hosh mein Hosh mein...
(he gulped down a shot and turned again to meet manvi's eyes which were fixed on him...)
Zulfon ke saaye mein (looking at manvi in a way that it was melting her heart...)
Mujhko chupaale Humesha ke liye
Bhar le mujhe tu Aagosh mein
(tears brimming in his eyes thinking of the times they were always together...)

Tere siwaa jaaon kahan (he went n asked manvi for a dance... viren asked manvi to join virat)
Tu hi mere dono jahan (he took her to the dance floor and held her with all the emotions he ever felt for her... his touch was a mixture of all those emotions...)
Pehlu mein tere khudko paakar (he was pulling her closer by every passing minute...)
Jhoom jhoom jhoom jhoomta hun

Tera nasha mujhko hua
(his one hand was protectively holding her hand and virat's other hand involuntarily made way to manvi's hairs... her hair... how much he loved to play with them and twirl it around his fingers )
Tera nasha hai khwaab sa
Tera nasha aise naa jaaye
Jhoom jhoom jhoom jhoomta hun main
Khwabon khayalon mein
Uljhe sawalon mein
Tu hi tu bassi
(virat looking into her eyes as if trying to read what all was going on in her heart and mind)
Tu aarzoo hai
Tu justujoo justujoo
Tere ishaaron pe

Chalti hai rukti hai (leaning close to her and lips inches apart..)
Saansein yeh meri
Rehna tu aise hi rubaroo


Ab toh meri aadat hai tu (he suddenly pushed manvi with a jerk and with a jerk only pulled her back into his arms thinking about how much he had suffered)
Aadat kya jaroorat hai tu
Tujhko apne dil se lagaakar
(blowing air on her face...)
Jhoom jhoom jhoom jhoomta hun

Tera nasha mujhko hua
Tera nasha hai khwaab sa
Tera nasha aise naa jaaye
Jhoom jhoom jhoom jhoomta hun main


due to the dim lights virat took manvi forcefully with him to one of the rest room adjoing the party hall... he pinned her to the wall and held her hands very tightly signalling that he wouldnt let her go no matter what...
manvi : chodo mujhe... kya kar rahe ho...?? chodo...virat...
virat : main tumhe pagal lagta hoon...???
manvi : kya kar rahe ho... jaane do mujhe... (trying to free her hand from his strong grip)
virat : ye nahi ho sakta baby... aur kuch chahie...???
manvi : kya...???
virat : i am not letting you go...
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Edited by naina927 - 13 years ago
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PMS WILL BE SENT LATER~~~~!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow am the first one yipieee finally 😉
awesome awesome update 👏👏

yaar mujhe yeh virat nai pasand i dnt like him😭
viren manvi ki ziada care karta hai uski pasand na pasand and its selfless love manvi ko ziada importance milti hai viren se aur virat he is selfish rude ziddi manvi ko hurt karta hai and i dnt like it ...its not love its madness just coz she left him he wants her bke he is just trying to own her bke and i hate it ...aur manvi woh kisse pyaar karti hai seems like viren uske saath ziada comfortable hai ...😭

i want to like virat plss usko sudhar do na and manvi ka POv clear karo...woh actually mein kisse pyaar karti hai
next update plzz plzz jaldi karna 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..~! i was eagerly waiting for u to update...Loved it...Love Virat now every step take by viren to express love will make him more determined to bring back Maanvi in his life...Maanvi i swear she is middle of two...God cant wait to know who does she choose...which m sure is long way to go..as a reader i would want her to choose Virat...but then we will wait as the wait is fruitful n interesting...~!!! Waiting for next Naina..~!

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