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Posted: 13 years ago
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After hearing this sia feels the ground from her feet is slipping she & kavya take her bike & drive it like maniac's to reach the place…just as riya is been taken she tells the doctor that amplicillin has fast cidal effects on the bacteria & that this could save all they patients suffering with Xora2 poisioning… the doctor administers the appropriate dose to riya & everyone else but as the quantity of toxins in riya's body is very high she is shifted to ICU…seeing riya in ICU everyone breaks down & sia starts fighting with her love roshni di & god ji…

Sia(in her mind): kya god ji! Aap ko help karne ko kaha tha riya ko aapke paas bulane ko nahi & didu aap bhi inka side le rahi ho ? dekho main aap dono ko warn kar rahi hu ki agar riya ko kuch hua na toh main aapse hamesha ke liye katti ho jaungi…

Shree: hey durga maa! ree ko plz theek kar do na plz plz wo toh meri best friend hai na plz…

Seeing the love of the team any god would melt… the doctors announced that the toxins had been flushed out of Riya's body but still she wasn't responding to any medicines & that was a matter of concern to everyone…

Sia: doctor, can we meet her maybe we could talk to her & try…

Doctor: yes you certainly can meet her but only one person at a time

Sia(going inside & controlling her tears): chal na ree bas hua yaar ab uth ja dekh warna wo dono kc I mean khadoos company mujhe kha jayenge… aur fir aadi usse main kya kahungi hai toh mera fake hubby but apni salisaahiba se sabse zyaada pyaar karta hai…(no response from riya) oye uth na chotu-kavya ki jodi nahi banani?

(Still no response she leaves the room & starts crying)

Shree: kya ree tune uss bio specimen ko rula diya yaar… chal na ab uth bhi jaa warna samjhe ya samjhau fir hume work, responsibility & discipline pe ek lecture suna denge…

After everyone's trying arjun enter's the room…

Arjun( with moist eyes): riya kya hai ye immaturity ki bhi hadd hoti hai…(moving towards her) ab tum bhi chali jaogi na mujhe chod kar… door rahne ko kaha tha hamesha ke liye door jaaane ko nahi…(suddenly the monitors show a +ve response)…

After 4 hours riya is out of danger & she is getting consious …

The team enters & sia is the 1st to speak out…

Sia: kya ree sab ki jaan nikal di tune aur mere dept. pe kabse haq jamane lagi ha? Jhansi ki rani banna mera dept. hai tu rehne de & next time aisa koi solution sochna jisme khudh bhi safe rahe & sabko bhi baccha le…

Riya just smiles…she is physically present but mentally thinking of how arjun was holding her after the incident…

Shree: ree kahan kho gayi woh sia tabse tujhse kuch pooch rahi hai??

Riya: ha shree kya hua?

Sia: chod ree tu rest kar hum sab bahar hai..

Once outside shree & sia are debating that who will stay back…

Sia: main rukungi yahan tum jao robot waise bhi shakl se pata chal raha hai thodi der mein battery down ho jayegi…

Shree: oye specimen woh meri best friend hai isiliye main rukunga & that's final…

Sia: nahi main rukungi…

Seeing them fight arjun speaks up

Arjun: tum dono jao main yahan ruk jaata hu kal subah dono aake mujhe relive kar dena …

Sia-shree:okay…(In their minds ) ab ye hui na koi khaas baat…

Arjun sits down in the room & starts reading the diary since riya is in deep sleep & the doctor's have said she won't stir for another 4-5 hours…

Date: 15th october

Dear diary,

Aaj meri & arjun ki shaadi ho gayi hai. Ab main mrs.roshni arjun rawte ban gayi hu… ek taraf is baat ki khushi hai toh kahin ye darr bhi ki agar woh wapas aa gay toh main kya karungi? Kaise arjun ko usse bachaungi? Kya kahungi main arjun se, bhai se sia se? pata nahi ye darr kab mera peecha chodega bas isse door hona chati hu apne pyaar arjun ke saath khulke zindagi jina chahti hu…

Roshni…

Date: 31st december

Dear diary,

Aaj maine usse dekha woh wapas aa gaya hai aur shayad mujhe dhundh bhi raha hai… main apni jaan ki parwah nahi karti par mujhe bas arjun sameer bhai aur sia ki chinta hai… woh mujhe paane ke liye inhe kuch na kar de … bas iss baat ka bahut darr lag raha hai… pata nahi bhai ya arjun ko agar main ye batau toh sahi hoga ya nahi par sia who zarur mujhe samjhegi… mujhe sia ko dheere-dheere sab batana padega ab wahi mere jasbaaton aur faisloon ko samjh payegi…

Date: 17th may

Dear diary,

Aaj usne mujhe dhundh liya hai aur ye bhi kaha hai ki agle do dinon mein woh mujhse mera sab kuch cheen lega… darr lag raha hai par yeh tasali bhi hai ki bhai aur arjun safe hai kyunki who yahan nahi hai… bas ab chinta hai toh sia ki mujhe usse kissi tarah khudh se sabse door karna hoga… tabhi jaake main haarke bhi jeet paungi…

Roshni…

As he finished reading a few pages with moist eyes he could see Riya trying to sit up he immediately rushes to her…

Arjun: riya kya karne ki koshish kar rahi ho…

Riya: sir wo paani…

Arjun(making her sit & drink water): main yahin tha awaaz de deti riya immaturity ki bhi hadd hoti hai tumhe zyada khudko strain karne ke liye mana kiya hai na doctor ne…

Riya: sorry sir who mujhe laga aap busy hai…(noticing his eyes are moist) sir kya hua aap ro rahe the kya?(realising what she said)(to herself) tu toh gayi riya ye tujhe kha jayenge kya zarurat thi kuch bhi bolne ki?

Arjun(making her lie down): riya so jao zaruri nahi har sawal ka koi jawab ho… aur ha agar kuch chahiye hoga toh mujhe bula lena… apne aap koshish mat karna main yahin hu…

They both fall asleep in a while…

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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
great update...
loved sia and shree's concern for riya...
yayy she finally responded to arjun... glad she is okay...
arjun almost crying on reading diary... :( feeling bad for him but loved his concern for riya...
continue soon...
wow me first to comment... yayy
Edited by devildiva21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
nice update
finally she responded to arjun & is safe now😊
somebody was behind roshini from the beginning😲 sik?
loved arjun's concern for riya😛
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
wow nice update...a very good update on frndship:)
seriously shree and sia concern for riya was damn gud and touching...
Aww she gt up listening to Arjun voice nice:)
Nice update overall:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Awesome 👏 glad riya is okay 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
amazing update :) loved it
the team was so worried for riya
thank god she is fine
finally riya responded to arjun
loved shree and sia's nok jhok
glad that arjun is staying in the hospital with her
and he was reading roshni's diary
felt so and seeing arjun like that :(
loved his concern for riya
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

The next day sia & shree wake up & reach the hospital…

Sia: good morning riya! Ye dekh main kya leke aayi hu…

Riya: hmm khushbu toh acchi aa rahi hai… hai kya isme?

Sia: khichadi hai ab hospital ka khana toh bahut zyaada hi bimaaro types hota hai isiliye main tere liye khichadi leke aayi hu…

Riya: accha kiya tune waise bhi teri mom ki yaad aa rahi thi…

Sia is feeding riya both arjun & shree are observing them from a distance…

Shree(whispering): kal tak ree iski mom bani thi aaj ye ree ki mom ban gayi…kya dosti hai dono ki?

Arjun(not realising whom he's saying it to): ha dono hai he aise ek taraf sia jo kissi ke bhi mangne par apni jaan bhi de de aur ek taraf riya jo sabko khushiyaan batne mein believe karti hai… hai he inki jodi itni pyaari…

Shree(pinching himself & mumuring): ye arjun sir ko kya ho gaya hai ye jo hamesha riya-sia ko daante rehte hai aaj unki tareef kar rahe hai kya baat hai bhai? Lagta hai aaj suraj ji west se nikal aaye hai…

Arjun(after realising what he said to shree): shree isse hum dono ke beech mein hi rehne dena warns tum samjh gaye ya samjhau?

Shree: samjh gaya sir…

Just when sia has finished feeding riya & is giveing her the medicines both arjun & shree enter…

Sia: arjun sir aap aur shree jaa sakte hai I will be here ….

Shree: nahi sia tum aur sir jao main yahan rahunga…

At this moment the doctor enters to check riya so their fight is temporarily intrupted…

Doctor: ye kaafi better hai aap ek week baad inhe le ja sakte hai….

After the doctor goes…

Riya: ek week how will I survive? Yahan sirf deewaron ko ghoor-ghoor ke bore ho jaungi main upar se deewarein bhi itni boring hai…

Sia: toh theek hai na I get you some books baith ke unhe padh lena…

Riya: ye accha idea hai aur tujhe toh meri pasand bhi pata hai…

Sia: ha pata hai shaam ko jab dinner laane jaungi toh le aaungi…

Shree: nahi tum abhi jao dinner leke aa jana tab tak hum movie dekhenge…

Riya: ye bhi accha idea hai…

Sia: nahi tum jao… main aur ree yahan baatien karenge…

Arjun gets a call from rathore & so he excuses himself & takes it… after the call…

Arjun: tum dono chalo mere saath we have a work n tum dono ki chutti ki application ko reject kar diya hai….

Sia-shree(together): but then ree ke pass kaun rahega?

Just as they speak up tanvi enters…

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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Tanvi: main hu na tum log jao…

Sia: ok bhabhi aap ho toh no fear kuch lage toh you definitely have me on speed dial…

Tanvi: ha baba now go… bye…

Riya is confused on who is tanvi & what is she doing here sensing her confusion & awkwardness she speaks up…

Tanvi: pata hai riya tum yahi soch rahi ho na ki main kaun hu n sia mujhe bhabhi kyun bula rahi hai? n main yahan kya kar rahi hu?

Riya: ha…

Tanvi: well I m Tanvi Sameer Rathore tumhare rathore sir ki wife & sia mujhe bhabhi isiliye bulati hai kyunki woh rathore sir ki behn hai jaise ab tum bhi ho…

Riya: oh isiliye rathore sir ko jhansi ki rani ki itne fikr rehti hai aane do usse bahut daantungi itne baadi baat ussne mujhe nahi batayi…

Tanvi: ok-ok maar lena usse…but fihaal apne chief ki purani photo's dekhogi?

Riya: ofcourse bhabhi…

They both are going through the college pictures of sameer, arjun , tanvi, roshni & sia…

Riya: bhabhi matlab arjun sir bhi aapke saath the college mein…

Tanvi: haan riya woh roshni, sameer aur main ek hi class mein the & sia humse chotti thi par tabse sabki jaan thi usme… madam thi bhi toh best, college band ki lead singer, basketball team ki captain & apni batch ki topper…

Riya: sia ne kabhi bataya hi nahi mujhe ye sab…

Tanvi: hmm sia aisi hi hai apni tareef ko unsuna karne ki aadat hai bahut ziddi bhi hai sirf tumhare arjun sir & uski roshni didu hi usse samjha sakte hai…

Riya: matlab wo arjun sir ki wife ki behn hai??

Tanvi: ha riya…

Riya(in her mind): toh usse baat krni chahiye shayad wo sir ko firse muskurana shikhane mein meri help kare…

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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
great update :) loved it
awww sia brought khichadi for riya
how sweet of arjun he was complementing both girls :)
finally riya knows that sia is roshni's sister
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
nice update
liked riya sia bonding
wow arjun complement them😊
riya tanvi convo nice
i really want to see that album yaar lol😆
update soon

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