ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One*

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Ahh so my guess was right.

Beautiful how Khushi fought for their love against Arnav because her win would mean their win.

What a strong woman Anjali is. Wish she was like this in the show also.

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

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Edited.

= Part 1 =

The opening paragraphs brought back the memories of the episodes in the show.

But the chapter unfolded a very different story as I read further.

I liked the fact that Khushi was independent.

The fact that Arnav gave in to his desires was very beautifully written.

I felt that Arnav was totally thoughtless to have gone towards the pool side after he made love to Khushi.

Khushi's determination to make this marriage work , was
praise-worthy.

The ending was an interesting cliff-hanger.
The fact that Shyam is Khushi's brother , is very off-beat.

Thanks for the PM.😊

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

R.
Edited.

= Part 2=

Arnav trying to make the marriage work was praise-worthy.

The way Arnav apologised to Khushi , Khushi confessed her Love and Arnav couldn't tell it in words but he kissed her.. It was so infinitely sweet and beautiful.

Arnav getting anxious for Khushi was nice to read.

.. And the most wonderful thing in the whole chapter was the confession. 👏

Arnav, as a secret agent, is Awesome.
And he only told Khushi about it.

It was refreshing to read that Anjali is a strong woman.

Aman's perspective about Anjali was great.

Both of the chapters were extremely
well-written. It is a very off-beat take on the terrace scene.

.. And the banner is beautiful.

Thanks for the PM.😊

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Just read this over breakfast quickly. Only one word, awesome! Kash our Kushi and Anjali were this strong in the show. Wish they had spoken so openly instead of keeping secrets under pretense of protecting the others - misunderstanding is when they don't share and don't communicate. This Kushi made sure that this was not the case. This gave him a choice an hence the beautiful romance that ensued. Love it. Great way to start boring manic Monday!

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Natasha

@no_username

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

lovely update!!

love anjali...she is not "blind" like in the show...she is a strong woman...i admire her 4 her courage...😊

khushi knew arnav loves her even before arnav did...😆...after khushi said that she knew he loved her his reaction was quite funny...

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

The terrace did play an important role in this TS. Hence, the name chosen was just apt! ... And I really liked how Anjali had been portrayed as the worthy elder sibling here, who looks out for her 'Chotay', and needless to say, I absolutely adored the way Arnav-Khushi worked to save their relationship and how Arnav came to realize his feelings for Khushi... Now, will be waiting for the next installment :)

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Loved your Anjali. I wish she was not depicted as a spineless fool in the actual serial.
Wonderful story !!

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

That was an amazinggg update!!!

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fraser

@fraser

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Posted: 12 years ago

#389

Awsome n intresting
anji is smart here... She is no reckless that the point... Shayam is khushi foster brother,... Relive in terrace scene which i personally dont like in show... Aranv other work is jst justify all actions here