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Posted: 12 years ago
DIII...UPDATE JALDI...SUSPENSE IS KILLING!! 🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey friends!!! m back with the next part !!! i am loving all your reactions and it is encouraging me so much!!! thank you so much my dear buddies!!!

k now here we go...




PART3

A new day… a new morning… she woke up stretching her arms so as to ooze out all her tensions with a smile on her face… adjusting herself after a long but not so peaceful sleep she emerged out of her cozy blanket and as always moved towards the gallery of her room giving a wide yawn… but as soon as she stepped forward near to the door of the gallery…

'SPLAASSHH'

All the water came over taani making her wet from top to bottom… as if she just jumped into a pool… and the other side stood Sharon giving a wide grin and 'you lose' look to taani… but the next which occurred made her burst into splits..

'SPPOOSHH'

Water came out from taani's mouth just like a dolphin… she gave Sharon ' you are gone now' look and stepped behind near her bedside and she picked up the jug…

'SPLAASH'

Both of them were dripping in water… Sharon gave a shocked glare to taani… and then both burst out laughing grabbing the pillows from the bed and now commenced a pillow fight after their water war…

After turning the whole apartment to a battle field they both went and got ready to leave for college. But as always taani was late so Sharon left alone for the college. Taani hurriedly dressed up in her cargos and tees and grabbed her side bag rushing outside. She walked towards her car and found its tyre punctured which made her realize that it is puncture from yesterday… they mere thought of yesterday brought back the memories of the last night… of those engrossing eyes… she just shook her head trying to prevent herself in going back to those strange thoughts. She looked at the flat sleeping tyre and gave a sigh. "Wow... What a nice start… "

She started tossing the stones while walking on her way to the college as it wasn't very far away and she didn't mind skipping a lecture.

A little faraway, she saw a lady crossing the road… and 'SPOOOF' came a Porsche just about to hit that lady but thankfully it didn't hit her and went past her. Though that lady was saved but she out of fear and shock tumbled and got hurt. She was bleeding… taani saw all this from a distance and rushed to her but stopped midway seeing the car halting at a distance… someone came out from the front driver seat… she could see only his back… he was wearing a black shirt with a half jacket which were dashingly going with his blue colored jeans. He was standing with his one hand in his pocket and the other one holding the car's door… he was intently watching his victim, he stepped forward but like something struck him he just swayed his head from there towards his car… that's when she saw his face.. his face reflected magnetism and royalty... a fantastic personality which every girl dreams of… she immediately recognized those dark brown hazel eyes which had conquered her mind, has now a master in front of her… her trance drifted when she realized he was gazing the car bonnet instead of helping that lady. He clenched his fists tightly and started to get back to his car. Taani was horrified as it she didn't expect him to leave that lady in such a condition and she shouted…

"hey you!!!! Were are you leaving her… she needs medical help." Taani rushed forward to the lady and helped her to get up.

He turned and just kept staring her. This time his eyes didn't reflect any emotion but just coldness. He without uttering a word again turned but this time taani's anger knew no bounds. She went up to him not realizing the closeness between them and she spoke..

"are you deaf or blind? I m talking to you... You can't leave this way… and u will HAVE to help her…" she pointed her index finger towards him in sheer annoyance. The reaction which came was unexpected. He just gave a smirk, held her wrist and pushed her back. She felt her blood gushing down from head to toe and she was totally puzzled with the happening. He still smirking, spoke..

"u better stay away… don't you mess with a devil… it can cost you something very precious… " he left her flabbergasted in the midway of the road without even glancing back to his victim…

She was hell annoyed with him but seeing the situation she helped the lady to get seated on the nearby bench and fortunately someone from her family looking for her came and took her. The lady and her relative thanked and left. But taani was muttering under her breath…

"let him come once more… I will… I will… yea… I will throw his ego on the floor and smack it like an egg." She was hell angry and kept on muttering what not only she knew. She finally reached the college and obviously late. She was walking and muttering under her breath and so crashed into someone. She looked up and saw a frowning Sharon in front of her with Vicky and neha following her behind.

Sharon clicked her fingers in front of taani and gestured 'what?'. taani frowned and spoke…

"just met with a devil…"

Sharon's frown left and she was amused by the answer. Neha stepped forward and nudged taani saying, "do you like devils?" and their came a short laugh from Vicky who turned his face on seeing taani's angry glare. she gave a loud sigh in annoyance. Sharon spoke..

"right now… its not devil… but its vp sir and we are already late for the student's council meeting. So lets leave… you remember or not?"

Taani slapped her forehead and spoke in a single breath… "oh freak!! We will be assigned our assistants!! Your ACS and mine AGS!! How could I skip this… lets leave!! Come on!!" she rushed pass leaving all of them amused.

Taani and Sharon entered the cabin in a hurry and saw vp sir glaring them in anger. He shot sarcasm…

"you came? I thought I will have to wait for another day as per your wish!"

Taani and Sharon spoke together with their heads down… "sorry sir…"

Vp sir shook his head and said… "whatever… I need to tell you miss Sharon raiprakash , your ACS has still not been assigned but miss taani shekhawat your AGS will be arriving in some moments."

Here other side a Porsche arrived at the campus gate and halted… he came out swiftly and led his way inside the campus, walking straight towards the vp sirs cabin, leaving each girl of the college drooling over him and his attitude while each boy was going possessive over their girlfriends!

He knocked and got inside the cabin. Taani didn't turn but the voice caught her attention.

"yes sir…" this voice had enormous power to make any girl drool over her.

"yes… so miss taani shekhawat. Here's your new AGS. Meet him… reyaansh singhania… the only heir of singhania empire… our new student… help him in his duties… and you may leave now."

Taani nodded. She and Sharon turned and saw him. Sharon smiled and left the cabin while taani could just utter…

"YOU!!!"

He came closer, gave a smirk and whispered " it will be a great experience to work with a devil…" his faced as well as voice still had a coldness… she couldn't help but look into his eyes but soon came out of her trance…

He spoke again, "welcome to the devil's den…" he left the cabin and taani stood annoyed and frustrated.


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phew... done... sorry friends this might be a little boring... but next updates se storyline shuru ho jaegi.. to use update karne ke liye muje apne guts jutane do... hehehe 😆 coz i am really scared... lolzz


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Posted: 12 years ago
finalllyyy!! gosh!! itna lamba intezaar kissi ne nahi kiya hoga... *sigh*

RES!! ab running to read the update =)

unresd 😃

well update was scary... i mean im clueless to whats next... 😕
rey and devil...so not happening...y r u planning to make us hate him? 😭
but well... porsche and rey...can so imagine d scene 😳

and taani bechaari... 😆
its gona be a fun...but also scary journey? hai na?

but well...i loved d start...it was so funny... 😆
i love shani ki bonding 😉

and dis time no swayam? 😲
main expect kar rahi thi ki kuch toh reveal hoga...

aap na bas suspense hi build karti raho 😛 😡
humme toh taras khani nahi hai...huh! 😛

but im excited bout d next part...the reyaansh singhaniya d devil <-- u have no clue how difficult it is to imagine him in dis way... 😔
so basically, the devil wid an angel...exciting...

but ab bhi mujhe samj nahi aaya ki why i will regret... 😕
i guess got to wait for the next part...

updattee veryy veryy soon...sab kaam vaam chor ke bas update likhte jao, thik hai? 😉 😳
hehe 😆

🤗

Edited by Mohit_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey my sweet dear friend toshi --
👏👏 amazing update dear ,

😲😲😲it was a really unexpected turn , taarey were strangers and just met now ,

but i loved d update from starting 2 d end , i loved and enjoyed it fully dear😊😛😉

but it was short 😆 actually i found it small as i was really enjoying reading it dear

plz update soon , very excited 2 read further ,
Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omggg worth the wait lolzz par itnaa achcha update kush kar diyaa partner tune😳😳 yaar superbb work yaar👏 ⭐️⭐️and taarey o gosh mazaa ayega😉 😆😆😆 nd yeh dialogue😛
"let him come once more… I will… I will… yea… I will throw his ego on the floor and smack it like an egg."

hayee rabba iske liye 👍🏼 loved the update very much misstee😊 very excited nd plss update asap yaar i'll be waiting😳

Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ishe bolte hai
intezar ka mitha fal
dh19 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
rey and devil ...no way dear...
do cotn. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..loved d startin part! Water fight!! hahaha,,,i was laughin!! and thn the devil is in!!! cant wait for the next update!! excited excited!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow...read all in 1 shot...
n itz awesome...just loved it...
plz update next soon
n thanx 4 d pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres my comment on page 22😉

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