SS :A Night in the Rain:ArHi-Part 4b pg 43 updt

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nataliya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

👏bravo,plz make the ending a hapi one

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annieK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Love an separation , the agony and the ecstasy ...full of emotions ...well depicted .

Nicely done dear .

Do continue soon ..

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: jakhushi
Ek updatiya de de thakur 😉😆

had a mad weekend...will updt by today or tomorrow 😳

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mishti_17
Oh that was amazing.. Khushi has her own set of insecurities.. Not that I blame her, anyone in her place wud have done the same...

And thank god Priya, someone said that "The story has NOT run its course and there is lots to be explored" 😆 warna I dont have very good memories attached with "Story has run its...blah blah" 🤣

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan
Priya thanks for updating. Brilliant is all I can say. So issues are more complicated between them then I thought. Hope they work through them together. It is scary to face our insecurities and fears but for them to have any relationship they are going to have to confront their past and talk it out in the open. They both are going to have to open up to each other and go from there. Looking forward to the story unfolding. Thanks for sharing with us.

Thankss swtzz for the bold - maybe can pick some cues on that 😊

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Avni Raju

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

wow amazing ...thanz for the PM

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shybabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Dearest Priya...

Yes, Now I get my internet fixed and then I land up here...you know I was waiting as well..and the wait was all worth it...

Complicated is the perfect adjective used...and the definition of complicated is even more perfect for their situation...

Absolutely well written piece...Take your time to write down the next one...its always worth the wait my dear..Absolute pleasure reading this part..😳

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honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part IV : prologue

"To burn with desire and keep quiet about it is the greatest punishment we can bring on ourselves."

- Federico Garca Lorca

The only memories I have of my father - is the warmth of his hands --- when I ran to sit on his lap, those hands cuddled me in his lap -- as if to shield me from the pains of the world...

Today...when Ar..nav...came and stood infront of me...there was only silence...we stood staring at each other -- for seconds...for minutes...maybe hours...time - it didnt matter...but we knew the distance of 1 year,3 months,15 days...each moment that had passed as a lifetime in between that...right or wrong - today it didnt matter...he wanted to say something...but he didnt...i wanted to run away again...but couldnt...my tears I tried holding them back...even they betrayed me...we just stood...in silence...in longing...in pain...we didnt argue...i didnt shout at him...he didnt throw the pinching words...

And then...slowly...he put his hand on my head...I stood frozen...the warmth...the sense of security...the shield...and the shadows of my childhood...all that I remembered of having and then loosing a father came stinging back...

Father...and at that Word ,it struck me then -- it also punched me at heart -- he could never be a father to our child any more -- whom we lost...all for his fears of a father that had damaged his childhood...

I stepped back...he kept on looking at me -- I was blinded by my tears -- his I couldnt even see...and then I ran away from that place...

I had heard his piercing call from behind --- Khushi...Khushi...

Slowly she closed the diary...

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"Khushi...the visas have come...time to get the tickets done..."

"Shantanu...i need some more time...

"But...we dont have time...you know that...a week at the most..."

"Please...just few days.."

And she slumped down on the chair...this time there were no tears...

"I have to learn to live without him"...she said almost to herself..

Shantanu turned the sand-clock kept at his desk.

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His finger traced the veins of her hands upwards...playing delicately with the lace of her skin...his nimble fingers removed the strap of her beach dress...Arnav looked into her eyes and smiled...the smirk reminding her how he had forced her to get into that dress...her cheeks were still flushed red...her breathing heavy --- he dragged his legs up slowly,entwining to hers...as her slight frame arched to fit his embrace...his lips brushed her cheeks..."its a dream Khushi...our togetherness...".he whispered, as she kissed the tip of his ear...

The sun glistened on his back...and the grains of sand kissed their bare skin...when suddenly a high wave came and splashed on them...

"Khushi...",

he woke up with a start...the afternoon sun glared at him...he hadnt realised when his nap had become so deep..

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Thanks for appreciating the SS...its my first...so the sweet words mean a lot...

Havent read any SS on forum yet and am not familiar with the discipline of updating -- so apologies for not being very prompt -- I can write only when the story or character speaks to me...

A small upate...hope if you reading this, you liked it -- a longer one to follow soon...once Arnav and Khushi decide where to go next from here...😳

PART4b :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/81204496

Edited by honeypriya - 13 years ago

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beena nadkarni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

will be back❤️ ...aayela itni jaldi what a treat 👏 Sweetheart at work will take my time to enjoy your hard work.

Priya your short update bought back some beautiful memories of IPK. Arnav's descriptive dream very well written, I could visualize this scene acted by Barun/ Sanaya . I am curious to see how you unfold the story. I enjoyed reading ...waiting for the next update.

Edited by beena14 - 13 years ago