Virmaan : After marriage-2 : 3rd : part-149+note - Page 53

Originally posted by: Crazyvirmanfan

Aww so emotional, i can't wait to know what will happen next ..

Keep up the good work and continue soon :)

thank u so much...
I will try to be soon...

Originally posted by: Sia12345

Nahi nahu nahi hw cn u stop here? Hw? I wanna read the nxt part like nw

i knew...
I Will updated soon..

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Emotional update.. Both are trying to hide their pain from each other.. I hope baby will be fine.. Cant see them in pain.. It really made me cry😭.. Awesome update Khushi😊

thanks...

Ooo myy godd..So much pain out there. Both cn feel each othrs pain..Bt strugling to hide their own pain from each other.Bt i think n feel k virat ka pain jyada h coz manvi ko smbhalne k liye puri fmaly h bt virat ko koi nhi smbhal skta, siwaye manvi k, Manvi ko apna bcha khone ka dr h, bt virat ko to manvi or baby dono ko khone ka dr h.N usne baby or manvi me se manvi ko choose kiye.Awww.. He love her so much.Bt manvi esa kyu nhi kr sakti..Jbki use pta hai uski ek smile virat ka drd pal me dur kr skti h..

Superb update kushi..really loved it...it was soo emotional.. 😭 ..the way u described it was awesome...looking forward for next update... 😊

Originally posted by: JESMY

VERY EMOTIONAL YAAR
CONTINUE SOON

bt hope u liked it...
I will continu soon..

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Superb update kushi..really loved it...it was soo emotional.. 😭 ..the way u described it was awesome...looking forward for next update... 😊

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thank u so much...
I will updated soon...

Originally posted by: Aashalovevirman

Ooo myy godd..So much pain out there. Both cn feel each othrs pain..Bt strugling to hide their own pain from each other.Bt i think n feel k virat ka pain jyada h coz manvi ko smbhalne k liye puri fmaly h bt virat ko koi nhi smbhal skta, siwaye manvi k, Manvi ko apna bcha khone ka dr h, bt virat ko to manvi or baby dono ko khone ka dr h.N usne baby or manvi me se manvi ko choose kiye.Awww.. He love her so much.Bt manvi esa kyu nhi kr sakti..Jbki use pta hai uski ek smile virat ka drd pal me dur kr skti h..

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thank u so much for lovely comment...

Great update.
u put the words in such a way, that we can really feel the scene's intensity.
u r really blessed with this talent.
pls update the next part sooon
if possible 2 episodes per day (more is also welcome)
i know i am greedy, but what to do, the story goes very interestingly.that's why.
plz,

Sorryyy...
For late...
I m sorry...:|
nd
what a update!!!!!!
U killed it...
So much pain...nd so much love...
Both r awesome on that place...
Both proves true meaning of virmaan love...which was missing in serial now...
Awesome one...
Virat who loves her more then his life...he cannot see her in pain...he tries his best to be strong in front of her...nd he succeed bt in night...when he saw her crying nd broken... He cannot handle his feeling nd not acted...
He brushed out his pain nd hugged her with full of love... He cannot saw her in pain... Its awesome...
His words... Make feel his pain nd his care...he didn't want anything then her health and her happiness...her presence in his life was enough for him...he just want to see her happy with her trade mark smile...
Bt now she was in pain nd hurt by him...which make him feel worse...
Nd
how can i fagot maanvi...
The happiness of his life...
She first broked with his changing behaviour nd his sudden decision of baby...she believing him continuesly...no matter what he said..what he behaved bt she still believing on him...he didn't not say bt she can feel that...
Nd when she knew everything she just want to be with him...she knew how he feel with hiding all that...she want that he share his pain with her..she tries bt he didn't...when in night...she cannot controlled after thinking abt what he said to viren she broked...
She knew that its not his fault..bt still he feel guilty nd apologies to her...she feel more guilty...
As u said in pm...all rocks...
Plz
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continue soon...
Love u... Nd loved ur updates...
Big vala huggy...
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U r n awesome writer...
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request-
plz Can u send me ur story or play which u wrote for ur college play compition?...
Plz...