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Nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

arnie didnt found its kumkum...confusingg

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Arthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

B*****d raina... I hope someone makes him pay for this...
pata nahi kitne logo ke sath usne ESA kiya... Kamina...
Arnav is a god fearing nice chap...
But now will kuShi's famly accept her after knowing what she is doing there?????
god I just hope they dont hurt her more...
lovely updatewaiting for more

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lareefab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Muaaahzzz for the comments

@nisha: maybe Arnav likes her or may be it's for time pass

Kushi introduced herself as kushi to Arnav and not Kumkum as per part 2

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kritash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

lovely.
liked it very much.
nice update.
want to know how she become a call girl because she is not a prostitute who lives in brothel house and forced to have sex. she is willingly doing this because of her condition.
this is my view.

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aishwarya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

poor khushi😭

awesomee update dii😊

waiting for d nxt part😊

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moonlight2630

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Very nice update
Poor Khushi feels bad for her.
Raina is such a ghatiya Insaan .
Arnav is so sweet n nice like accha bacha.
Update soon.

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suwin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

poor khushi...😭
nice update..
thank you.

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lareefab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

PART 4

Arnav was on his bed, thinking of Kushi and smiling away

He was wondering what was wrong with him, "why does she come into my mind so often, what is wrong with me?"

"Ahem, ahem" Anjali walked in

Arnav was surprised that he did not even notice his sister walking in

"Di, if you had called me I would have come na" said Arnav

"Achcha? But what if I said that I had been calling out to you and you never heard me??" giggled Anjali

"Ya, right, stop joking Di, how will I not hear you calling out to me" brushed off Arnav

"this is exactly what I'm thinking too Chote, I have been calling out to you so many times and you never responded, I was too worried and I walked in to see you smiling over something" Anjali said

"What The, did you seriously, I'm sorry Di" replied Arnav

"Achcha Chote, what is it that you were smiling so much over? What is it that's in myChote'sthoughts that brings a smile on his face,aisakyahainchote, that you did not hear me out or didn't even notice me walking in?" Anjali queried

"It's nothing Di" replied Arnav

Arnav laid his head on his sisters lap and she felt his heart

"who is it Chote?" Anjali asked

"Kushi" replied Arnav

Anjali caressed Arnav's silken hair and said "Kushi? Then I'm sure she is going to bring us so much happiness just like her name"

Arnav looked at his sister and smiled, Anjali kissed her brother's forehead.

********

The breaking of a vase was heard amidst the pin drop silence at night

"Who the hell do you think you are?" a man shouted out

"Just chill okay, I had to go out suddenly, it was an emergencyRaina" replied Kushi

"Luckily, I hadchameli'snumber,warnaI would have lost my face amongst the entire crowd, I would have looked like a fool" repliedRaina

Kushi walked away and sat on the sofa

"you were not able to entertain my crowd, at least you could entertain me now,Ya??" smirkedRaina

Kushi walked towardsRainaand brushed her hands overRaina'shair

A chill went downRaina'sspine, he heldKushi'shand and pulled her closer

"what's this spell you have put on me? it's so damn difficult to let go off you" saidRaina

"when I left you that night, I've been coming to you even more, oh Kushi" saying thisRainakissedKushi'shair

~~~After the unfortunate Incident~~~

Kushi walked into the office pretending nothing happened and Living carefree.

Raina looked at kushi from his cabin and was disturbed by kushi's behaviour.

A guy walked upto kushi and tapped her on her shoulder,kushi frowned at first and then realised raina looking at her and was annoyed at the fact that the guy was making a move on her,she changed her expressions and looked at the guy with pure lust and brushed him off.

*** the next day kushi walked into office in a completely different look.

The girl who used to wear salwars and kurta to office was dressed in jeans and tops.

Everyone around office was surprised at kushi's new look.

Kushi's buddy walked upto her and queried on her new look.

"Arey kush you look hot, why this sudden change?" Asked Sheila

"I have turned a new page in my life Sheila, i have changed completely" replied kushi.

"U take care girl" replied Sheila.

Kushi walked upto raina's cabin and sat opposite his chair

Raina was stunned at the beauty. He got up from his chair and walked upto kushi and was about to touch her...

"Ah ah raina, I'm too costly for you to touch me free of charge, you gotta pay me if you wanna touch me" said kushi

"Kushi what do you..." before raina could complete kushi broke in and said

"Kumkum, call me Kumkum, coz kushi died that night" replied kushi

Saying this she got up and went out of raina's cabin ane headed home.

***at home kushi sat on the floor with her head on the bed and crying out her pain.

"Forgive me Devi Mayya, but i had no other way, i will revenge raina for the destruction, and i will make sure he falls on my feet, i will make him cry out for me whenever he needs me and i will make him pay me for every moment i spend with him until he begs on the road" kushi spoke in anger.

"I will remain a prostitute to this man until i destroy him" said kushi.

****end of flashback****

"Come to me Kumkum i need you now" raina spoke in ecstasy

"What's you sum raina?" Asked kushi

"but before that you must drink this sweetheart" saying this kushi made raina drink something that he fell asleep and the bundle of cash fell off his hand

Kushi picked it up and walked out of the room.

<<<<<<sorry guys i know it's a short update, my mind is not in a thinking mood, i hope url liked it and it answers all your questions ;-)

Love you all.

Part 3

Edited by lareefab - 12 years ago