Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan...ff part 28(p.150) - Page 27

wowwwww

soo cuteeeeee...awsomeeeee

it was perfect....

continue soon... 👏

wowwwwwwwww

tussi great ho yaar!!!!
it totally made my day.>>>im still smilin...lol 😊 😳
very cute>>>
continue very very very very ...sooon!!

Wow, this is great, I'm later responding....I have shivers now yaar! 😳 😳 😳

wow
that was great
continue soooooon 😊
i want to read the next part
😆

😳 luved the ending..and the narration part of it in ur ff is really mindblowing 👏

i cant help but say th u r 1 of da most talented writers i have ever cum across. 😊 ..hav u ever considered a career as an aurthor or a journalist??i promise 2 b da 1st 1 2 purchse da 1st book u write 😃

Originally posted by: puba

That was awesome...really really cute ending 😊 .

thanks jaan!!

dc

Originally posted by: ladoos

pppperrrfect! sure was worth the wait. thanks a lot for such a lovely part! but i do want to know what happpened in between...from after he beats the guys up and holds her again and then to her shivering...

hmm... you've been eating lots of ladoos I bet cause you're super sweet!!😳... ok, I'll have to do a flashback sequence then...thanks!

dc

Originally posted by: abhita

*Sigh*
chooooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
;-D

can u imagine the massive smile on my face?... I look like a duffer!!😆

thanks!

dc

Originally posted by: hibos1

oh,....it was so awesome,.....you are such a good writer,.....there are 2 things I wait for everyday,....one is the update of KAA and the other is your fanfic update,...u made my day today,...how I wish u cud write endlessly and we could read endlessly,..I know I sound so selfish,...waiting eagerly for the next morning,... wonder ho they are going to react,...

aww.. so sweet😳.. too bad I can't update everyday, I certainly wouldn't mind.. but just wait until this school stuff is done in December... I'll try and have an increase in frequency!... don't worry hun, you're not the only one.. trust me😉... thanks!!

dc