IPKKND OS - Rang (Colors) [Romance] - Page 11

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

That was just beautiful! I loved the emotions that Arnav was feeling in the beginning. Actually it made me teary eyed remembering there Holi last year.

The bedroom scene was just breath taking. Them coloring each other with there love.

And the end really made me so happy. Arnav coloring her tummy and wishing the baby a happy Holi was so wonderful. Really made me wish we could've seen a pregnant Khushi on the show.

Thank you so much for the PM!!

Originally posted by: A_BA

Such a beautiful update!! The way you describe all the things going on is just spectacular.

As always, you make it so romantic and also very unique.

I loved the part at the end when he colored her stomach and talked to the baby!!

Superb!
Yoyr writing style makes me feel as if the entire scene is going on in real.. Wonderfully written! 😳

P.S-: Sorry for late comment... I was inactive due to exams.. :/

Originally posted by: Humayra

HAPPY HOLI..
I'm sure koi bhi rang ka use ArHi jitna achcha nahi kar sakte ;)
Aww..they are gonna be parents :)

A usual just awesome n magical

Originally posted by: golpokobita

It was a blissful surprise! I don't have words to tell you how much I liked it.
There were so many things in today's story. Khushi's lovely sleepy talks.. arnav getting all colours for her, that white chiffon saree, that 300 rs loan... so many things! I loved arnav regretting last year's cruelties and khushi comforting him, as always. You brought back the whole one and half year's journey back!
But icing on the cake was the good news! Holi couldn't be better! And I felt all teary seeing arnav playing holi with the little one!

Thanksq for giving us such a lovely and content feeling!

Originally posted by: Rimz_k09

Hi! 😊

This is such a sweet OS. It reminded me of how much I enjoyed the whole week they showed Holi episodes. You made it extra special by making Khushi pregnant. Arnav's reaction to the news was adorable. 😃 Not to forget I really liked how you made Arnav repent for his last holi actions. It was a very sweet scene between Arnav and Khushi. 👏

Now I am waiting for your next OS. 😛

Thank you for the PM. ⭐️

Hello loved the theme. HEY I am really sorry for commenting Sooo late. But I was extremely busy. I was waiting for the moment when you would write about khushi announcing her pregnancy to our dear arnav babua. This OS made me tear up. I was reminded of their turbulent past. Arnav has most certainly redeemed himself. Khushi has forgiven him wholeheartedly. There is no bitterness in their relationship. The lovemaking was flawlessly written as usual. The symbolism was impeccable. Loved the use of red color. Arnav 's reaction was beautiful take care . Lots of love cj the greatest oli is such an important occasion for arhi

@blayde: Nyc OS!!!!😊

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Absolutely beeeauutifuuul ! Loved it, it was sexy, sensuous, seductive and sweet, they really have come a long way, she is his everything, I loved how you described what she is to him...and love her news at the end, loved how he put colour all along her body ...

Please write more...thanks for the pm!