Virmaan : Ek jid Ek junoon : 1st thread : NOTE-144 - Page 69

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Posted: 13 years ago
I m done in my college...
I m just come out from my college...
I updated in some hours...
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-21
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Maanvi scared nd hide her self nd cover her face with her hands with glass broken sound..virat broked the window glass nd opened the door lock nd angrily opened the door..maanvi turned nd before she get something he caught her wrist by left nd pulled her out of car..bcz of her heavy nd full sleeves dress she didn't hurt..he dragged her out of car nd closed the door with loud noise..she try to puss him away but he used his straight nd pinned her against the car nd hold her both wrist on her both either sides forcefully..
M-without looking at him struggling to free herself-virattt...chhodo...
He tighted his teeth nd just looking at her angrily..nd waiting when she tired all of this..
M-virat..suna nahi maine kya kaha..chhodo mujhe..she try to free her hand..
She gathered her all strength nd try to puss him back wiche make him angry..he hold her wrist tightly nd pussed her back angrily nd sticked with car door..with this she hurt with broken glass piece which half hanging on corner..she feel pain on her lower back..near her waist..
M-close her eyes as she feel glass piece make cut on her waist-ahh..yelled in pain..
Tears slips from her eyes..virat saw her tears but he thought that she cries bcz of his action..he loose his grip on her wrist nd free her hand..she feel his hand removed..she opened her eyes nd looked at him with tearsy eyes..
She pulled her face back as she saw him leaned closer to her face..he come closer to her face angrily nd placed his both hands on car near her sholder on both either sides..
V-passinotly nd full of anger-kyu?..ab ye asu kyu?..mom k samne to bahot zashi ki rani ban rahi thi..ab ye Dar kyu?..he said with crussing his words nd try to not saws his anger in more action..specially on her which hurts her..
M-gulped nd tighted her fist on her dress..she scared to see his blood shoted eyes..
V-come more close to her-bolo na..kyu Dar rahi ho?..jab janti ho mujhe aur mere nature ko phir kyu?..kyu mom ke samne woh sab kaha?..main tumhe mom se milvana chahta taki woh tumse mile aur unhe yakin ho jaye ki main galat nahi hu aur nahi mera pyar..pichle 5 saal se tumse pyar karke Maine koi galti nahi ki hai..aur nahi apni life barbad baad kar raha hu..lekin tum..tumne...stoped nd turned his face to other side angrily nd again gave her more deadly glare..
M just looking at him nd try to make herself strong..
V-irritate with her silence-chup kyu ho..bolo..he shouted angrily on her nd leaned towards her..
With this she closed her eyes nd pussed him back forcefully by her hand..
M-shouted-kyu ki tumhari mom sahi hai..she also shouted but not as loud as he..he manage to stood nd looked at her surprisely nd shocked but still angry..
M-angrily-samaj te kya khud ko?..na hi main tumari nokar hu aur nahi tumhari koi personal property..ki Jo tumhe pasand hai vahi pahenu..jo tum chahte ho vahi karu..koi patthar ki murat nahi hu ki man kiya aur jabar jasti apni mom k samne rakh diya..
He just staring at her..she become confident nd brave then before..she starts learning to refuse his things..
V-maanvi..he said angrily to stop her..
M-but she cut him-maanvi kya?..kya kaha tumne mujhe?..ki tum mujhe apni mom se milvana chahte the..kyu?..kis liye?..for ur kind information..tum bhool rahe ho ki meri apni ek family aur apni responsibilities hai..jisme tumhare liye koi jagah nahi hai..
Virat getting more nd more angry..
V-stepped towards her-ye tum sochti ho main nahi..he said angrily..
M-main sochti nahi..main janti hu aur manti bhi hu..aur shayad yahi baat tumhari mom bhi samaj ti hai..aur bahetar hoga ki tum bhi samajhlo..she said in warning tone which make him out of control..
She abt to turned he turned her forcefully nd pulled her back towards him by her waist..within second he pussed her back nd her back hit with car..he leaned close as he wrapped his one hand around her waist..her body crussed between car nd his body..she try to to free herself nd starts pussing him away by her tiny hands on his chest..
V-stop it..shouted
m-stopped nd looked at him..but still her hands on his chest..
She gulped as his face come close to her..his anger reached at his out of line..
V-more passinotly nd more angrily-bas..bahot ho gaya..mujhe nahi uchi awaz pasand hai aur nahi dhamki janti ho na..specially tumhare muh se..
M-gulped-kyu?..kyu nahi sun sakte?..jab dusre se uchi awaz se baat kar sakte ho ya jabar sakti kar sakate ho..to main kyu nahi..she said angrily but in low voice..
He saw her confidently looking at him..
V-just shut up..mujhe tumhari gyan ki baato main koi intrest nahi hai..main kya kar sakta hu ya nahi ye mujh pr hi chhod do..aur agar Maine kaha hi tum mujhse ase baat nahi karogi to nahi karogi..he said angrily nd pulled her close with him by her waist..with this his hand tighted around her back which make her hurt on her cut on waist..bt he didn't knew this...
M-hiss lightly in pain-ssshhh..she didn't want to saw him her pain..
She just feel angry by his behaviour..
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continue...
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for stopping on wrong place...
I will try to continu soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsum update khushi...
Luvd manvi's sherni avatar...
Itz high time...plzzz revealbthe reason y everyone is against their relation..
N hwz virat gonna react when he knws dat he unknowingly hurt her...
M absolutely luving dis passionate virat...
Plzz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg wat a superb updt...i litrely got goosebums...this time virats passion, anger n love cross all limits...the dialogues was so amazing...bang on...plz plz plz khushi updt next part today also...i cant wait any more
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome yaar too good...
Pleasee continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update Khushi.. Virat's anger crossed all the limits.. Poor Manvi.. She is hurt.. Please Khushi update the next part if you get time.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm... now pls reveal the truth... nd continue soon...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..~! Love Virat's anger here...waiting for the next..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
virat to gusse mein pagal ho gaya hai bt i love manvi with so much confidence...
Awesome update...

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