Vignettes- 18. Hai re Nandkishore! Thread 1

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

Wow Aparnaji 👏

Superb you have mixed fun, laughter and emotions so beautifully in this update...

Loved the fun at the entire family had at poor nanheji's expense. I love the way you give importance to all the characters be it Payash, di or Dhruv... You blend them so effortlessly in your story 👍🏼

The explanation for the almost hug at the hospital was so beautifully written, i like the way you give closure to so many things in this vignettes.

Once again a lovely update and thanks for the PM

Liza

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

this was amazing
but poor NK.. he is suffering and every1 enjoying the drama!!
i loved part where you wrote about akash that he knows his bhai like a open book
ARNAV & KHUSHIs convo was awesome
i always wanted them to talk about that hospital hug
thank you for writing this

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

Awww...seeing NK and Pooja in the position was a deja vu for Arnav...loved how he needed to see his wife and beg forgiveness for an error he had committed...
Eagerly waiting to see what NK does and what ASR has in store for him.

Edited by Hriju321 - 13 years ago

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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

Sweeet!

NK aur Pooja ka scene pakka? 😃

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#435

lvd d update
thanks for d pm

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

Loved it! The fact that you used the same type of emotion an similar scene for NK and Pooja made it real for me. Thanks do the PM and update soon.

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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Marvelous !! The way the old scene was brought up and incorporated in this story was truly fabulous ...

Are you sure you are not the runaway writer from the sets ?

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

what a brilliant heart touching update!!!!

the beginning of the update was so darn hilarious!!!!

NK going on and on about how his Nannav is beyond furious with him which actually is not true😆

payal being there with her 'straight face ' in front of him😆

then what really made me sad and curious was why was pooja crying after the call...

her pain was so brilliantly expressed and NK sweetheart forgetting about his resolve went ahead to help her...that was so awesome!

then Arnav witnessing this and him having an intense urge to see his lovely wife!!!!

His anxiety and desperation to see his wife was so brilliantly explained👏

while i was still having my confusion as to why pooja was crying...i instantly got the answer when Arnav thought about the same scenario with his wife a long time ago...which made him go crazy just to see her...!

your way of reasoning as to why Pooja was crying was so fantabulously explained👏⭐️

And the last part between Arnav and Kushi was soo... i cant even describe the feeling!!!!

it felt so nice!!!! such magical love between husband and wife!!!

where the husband telling his wife as to how much it pained him see her cry when she was in a critical most stressful situation... the wife responding to her husband's words with a loving hug and resting her head against his chest...!

these loving moments between husband and wife is so heart warming!!!

the way you made the connection with the past was fab!!!

so NK and pooja is it?😉

uff!!! i just cant get enough of this!!!

you are really a brilliant writer!!!

and i really go gaga over your writing always😃

please continue soon!!!!

and just out of curiosity...

are you a pro writer?

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abavi

@abavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#439

Whats cooking here? How did Nannav know that Pooja was seeking support from NK for a similar situation like the hospital wala one? When I started reading this story initially - after the near fallout between NK and Nannav- I thought there is gonna be a lot of emotional stuff... then you surprised us with a light hearted humor stuff... Here I was looking for a light hearted drama and you throw a emotional one at me... Good one again!

Hope you get free soon... I am feeling kind of bored and tired to sit and write my update- its been a while now... there is so much to write... I dont get the mood...

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#440

Fantastic update! I loved how you made the connection between Pooja/NK & Arnav/Khushi.

Arnav reliving that hospital hug through Pooja & NK was just emotional for me. That was one of my favorite scenes and I had always wished that Arnav had later on told her how badly he had wanted to be there for her that day. Thanks for fulfilling my wish!