Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 2) - Page 73

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Posted: 13 years ago
So I love how Khushi didn't take any of Arnav's crap. I'm proud of her for that every girl should be strong and independent. I was actually hoping for an argument between these two to happen soon. It was just great to read it kind of reminded me of a tennis match with all the bickering ;) thanks for the update and I'm liking this twist that you have going on here. I want to know if she's had the limp from birth or if it was a freak accident.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wooaahh anonymous what a twist!!

Bit in a girl like khushi one cud often overlook the fact that she limps
Khair here we are to see how you Wud do that with arnav!!

U almost even showed how mesmerized arnav was with khushiz doe like eyes, maybe the more he notice her the more he ll fall for her

But that again all happen at a slow pace!!

Gosh jus when I thot this can not get any interesting you came and gave us this biggg twist!

Wohhhooo khushi gave arnav back as well as she got!!
Lol never backing out even after hearing abt his anger

But whats with arnav, how can he taunt about her wedding day n that jerk of a fiancee

Yayeee I was never happie abt someone limping bit after knowing that this was the sole cause of shyam fleeing away I was kindq happiieee... Bach gaye khushi!!!

You are a fab writer!!!

And this was an amazinggg update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg I feel so bad for khushi. Im intrigued how arnav take things forward.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i didn't even contemplate what will be the reason for khushi's broken marriage but now it makes sense of what you wrote in the beginning about khushi having so many things on her mind but smiling making others happy!
i love how you described arnav's temper his work place ethics and all it was good to see other business rather than fashion
now i want to see rather read how arnav's changes his behavior towards khushi not because because he sympathizes with her condition at some level but she is genuinely sweet to be with ...
there is lot to write about but busy for now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really a beautiful update!! I won't say poor khushi ! She's fighter n arnie, hope he at least says sorry!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved update. Khushi is handicapped? Well written conversation of arnav and Kyushu
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb...

I never guessed it. Kudos to those who did...

Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ...fianlly dey talked ...!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res

Edited-

This chapter was interesting. I figured that Shyam jilted her because of something like a disability, but I never thought of such a big twist!!

Okay, starting off with the few paragraphs on Arnav. Why he needs to prove himself. His emotions. How nobody really knows him and he wants it that way, but inside in a part he doesn't know, there is a deep yearning to love and love deeply. Be there for someone and allow them to be there for him.

He doesn't want much of material things, but he understands their power, courtesy of his mother. So, he makes money. More than enough of it. He never wants to be vulnerable in front of anyone and the first step towards that is to not let anyone know who you are or what you feel.

He feels inadequate, but he convinces himself that he is not as he is successful businessman who speaks the language of power. As Arnav said on the show, he understands the language of money and deals, not of emotions. Not because he doesn't want to, but because he is not able to bring himself to trust anybody that much.

I think I have said this before, your Arnav in MKM II reminds me of Khushi in MKM I. The yearning for all those things that happens in a normal household, that he has never experienced.

His mother has done quite a number on him as he believes that Khushi is also manipulative and seeks to free people from her clutches.

I like how he likes Buaji, for who she is. The Spanish inquisition aside, I think she is more of a mother to him than Sumer's wife ever was.

Love how Khushi understood that Arnav was pissed and said that his father called only after trying his number. She understands how possessive Arnav is of his father even if he doesn't allow himself to acknowledge it.

Khushi has to keep people happy. Remove their sorrow. So, she apologizes for Arnav being asked to marry her.

Arnav of course, lashes out!! The line about her being sure of Sumer's love for her.. Is there a twist in that line?

Khushi's reply was below the belt. Although she was provoked, but still..

Arnav was no less.

Love how he stopped her fall, despite not liking her. Your Arnav is a man of principles. I like it..

Khushi limps. That was a huge twist.
I now get the Ladoo deal. Why everyone is extra attentive.

I can't wait to read more..

Please update soon..

Waiting!!

Thanks for the PM..
Edited by --BumbleBee-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg this was an awesome update. I loved the tension at the dinner table...how she was trying to be nice and how he was obviously not. Everything fit perfectly together and then BAM. She has a limp? why? and wow..hope Arnav feels bad now.

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