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Posted: 19 years ago
oh man that was awesome@!!!
you cant leave it hanging there!!!!1
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Taz234


u guys r so cute demanding updates!!!😃...But aaj kal itna type kar rahi hoon ke ab ungliyon mein dard shuru ho gaya hai!!!😆😆...But don't worry won't make u guys wait that long...next part up 2moro!!! Can't do it today...really sorry...still typing it amidst all the disturbance i'm having!!!!😆

hi my two sweeties ( tniku and tazu😉) how have u been? main to abhi abhi college se aai hoon aur study karne ki jagah yahaan per updates dhoond rahi hoon! lolz hehehehehheheheheeh

tazu baby, take a paracetamol and do the update lolz hahahahahhaha unglyon me dard khatam ho jaae ga! hahahahahahha btw r we the 16th or the 17th today???

and tinku darling, kaisi ho??? yaar i think we both like the same FF! hehehehehehehe😆 im asking for an updtae todayyyyyyyyyyyyyy! i wanna read some romantic moments between my jai baby and bani sweettie! hehehehe😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: pakiza_srk


hi my two sweeties ( tniku and tazu😉) how have u been? main to abhi abhi college se aai hoon aur study karne ki jagah yahaan per updates dhoond rahi hoon! lolz hehehehehheheheheeh


tazu baby, take a paracetamol and do the update lolz hahahahahhaha unglyon me dard khatam ho jaae ga! hahahahahahha btw r we the 16th or the 17th today???


and tinku darling, kaisi ho??? yaar i think we both like the same FF! hehehehehehehe😆im asking for an updtae todayyyyyyyyyyyyyy! i wanna read some romantic moments between my jai baby and bani sweettie! hehehehe😉



hiiiiiii guys....i am bck....yaar taz...paku teek kare hai...take a paracetamol....and get started yaar...lolz us two are not showing no sympathy 😆 ....tum bhi kya kaho gea....kin saee pala para hai 😆 ...me and paku..are experts at demading for updates...... 😆

yaar paku...yes ur rite...i have the same fav ff's as you 😆 😆 ..lolz i wanna see some jai bani scenes toooooooo

update karo yaar...... 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: TINK



hiiiiiii guys....i am bck....yaar taz...paku teek kare hai...take a paracetamol....and get started yaar...lolz us two are not showing no sympathy 😆 ....tum bhi kya kaho gea....kin saee pala para hai 😆 ...me and paku..are experts at demading for updates...... 😆

yaar paku...yes ur rite...i have the same fav ff's as you 😆 😆 ..lolz i wanna see some jai bani scenes toooooooo

update karo yaar...... 😭 😭


Hey tinku and paku...hope u don't mind me callin u that...tum logo ko khush rakhne ke liye hi to itna waqt laga ti hoon update karne mein...thoda to sabar karo yaar!!!😆😆😆
U guys are so sweet though...both liking my ff together...both demanding!!!😊

Paracetamol toh kab ki le li...aaj kaafi lamba part bhi likha...smoke seems to be coming out of my fingers now with all that typing!!!!😆
But u'll have to be patient...i have a little editing here and there...if i'm not done today and don't post then u can hit me!!!

As of now i am in the middle of writing a JB moment again...it just made me laugh!!!😆

Edited by Taz234 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Taz234

😆 😆😆 mujhe pata hai tum khana nahin order kar rahi thi...so was the last part "spicey and hot" as u requested...ya phir kuch aur dimaag mein hai😉???

Jab se Jai bigda hai mere to dil or dimag dono he bigad gaye hai😉

Acche ideas to ab aate he nahin hai😳

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Taz234


Hey tinku and paku...hope u don't mind me callin u that...tum logo ko khush rakhne ke liye hi to itna waqt laga ti hoon update karne mein...thoda to sabar karo yaar!!!😆😆😆
U guys are so sweet though...both liking my ff together...both demanding!!!😊

Paracetamol toh kab ki le li...aaj kaafi lamba part bhi likha...smoke seems to be coming out of my fingers now with all that typing!!!!😆
But u'll have to be patient...i have a little editing here and there...if i'm not done today and don't post then u can hit me!!!

As of now i am in the middle of writing a JB moment again...it just made me laugh!!!😆

chalo ab main bhi aa gayi hoon! ab update kardo! lolz hahahahahha

tinku jaanu me back! how have u been? yaar im desperate for jai and bani! poor guys cant seem to be happy!

tazu plz jaldi se update kardo yaar! kitna wait karwaya! though that is true that u do very good upfates when u do! 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
haila dear i'm addicted to ur ff, i read it just by once 😃
u r too good 👏
when r u updating it?! i want more jai-bani scenes, jai in ur ff is really, funny, cute, smilly,... n bani is too good 😊
pleaz continue ur mindblowing ff soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

haila dear i'm addicted to ur ff, i read it just by once 😃
u r too good 👏
when r u updating it?! i want more jai-bani scenes, jai in ur ff is really, funny, cute, smilly,... n bani is too good 😊
pleaz continue ur mindblowing ff soon 😉


Thanx hun...u read my ff! 😊 😊U read it one go...god that must have taken for ever seen as though most of my parts are very long!!!

But nice to know you enjoyed the JB moments...plenty more to come!
and do keep ur comments coming luv to here from ya!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
tazu darling, when r u updating?????? u said u will
i hope it will be today, hmmmm why not now??? lolz 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thank u guys for ur lovely comments on the last part………. 🤗 u guys found it really romantic na!!! I'm touched!!! Keep all ur comments comin in luv to hear from ya! 😃

Taz

Part 20

Jai and Bani are continue with their little private moment in the corner when Aditya cuts in.

Aditya: Arre Jai! Subah ka kaam baaki tha jo ab poora kar rahe ho (Jai and Bani move apart)

Jai: Yaar Adi….kyun mere pyaar ke dushman bane phir te ho..koi aur kaam nahin hai kya!! Har waqt galat time pe entry maarte ho!!! Kitna mazaa aa raha tha!! (gives Bani a very passionate look!! 😉 )

Aditya: Sorry…lekin meri galati thodi na hai ke har waqt tum kahin pe bhi shuru ho jaate ho….ab mein toh sirf tumko bulane aaya tha…sab log tum dono lovebirds ko dhoond rahe hai…aur tum yahaan corner mein pata nahin kya kya kar rahe ho (gives a cheeky smile…Bani begins to walk away feeling all red gain!! 😳 )

Bani: Mein...mein chalti hoon aap log bhi aa jaye (Jai stops her…by grabbing her hand!!)

Jai: Arre Bani tum kahaan chali…Aditya tum jao…mein aur Bani aate hai. (Adi walks off..shaking his head)

Bani: Phir se aap ne embarrass kiya na…(smiles 😊 😳 )

Jai (holding his ears): Ab nahin sweetheart…okay…(puts his arm around her) Chale Bani….(both are about to walk back in when Jai stops again as he sees Saahil's depressing face again 😔 )

Jai (mutters to himself): Bani ko toh pataa liya ab in dono ka problem solve karna hai…(sighs)

Bani: Kuch kaha aapne?

Jai: Woh Bani kal raat jab mein balcony se chhad kar aaya toh Saahil bhi mere saath tha…woh neeche mera intezaar kar raha tha…jab usse Rano kitchen mein milgayi…woh usse phir sorry bolne chala gaya, hotel mein jo kuch hua uske liye…lekin…(Jai narrates the entire episode to Bani)

Bani (laughs uncontrollably 😆 😆 ): Aap bhi na!!! Kaise behave karte hai…yakeen hi nahin hota….(continues to laugh 😆 😆 ) Tabhi subah se Rano ka mood kharaab hai…lekin daal aur chaawal!!! Bechaara!! Kal do baar kitchen mein phas gaya…(laughs! 😆 )

Jai: Yeah… but I guess it wasn't as bad as the haldi and aatta fight we had..(narrates that episode too!)

Bani (hysterical 😆 😆 😆 ): Tum log shayad kal paagal ho gaye the!! I'd love to see the photos that were taken…

Jai (looking at Bani): Oh god Bani….jab tum aise khul kar has ti ho na…mera mann karta hai ke main…(moving close to her again 😉 )….yeh jo tumhare gaal mein dimples parte haina…haiiii 😉

Bani (moving him back…but laughing 😆 ): Ab chaliye..bahut ho gaya! (Jai smiles and both walk back in towards the rest of the family)

Masi: Arre munna, Bani kahaan the tum dono?

Jai: Woh Masi….(looks at Bani)

Masi: Rehno do…kuch mat kaho…maine poocha hi kyun!! (Bani red again! 😳 )

At that moment Aditya shouts at the top of his head: Good evening everyone! Kyunki yeh ek sangeet function hai yahaan par khoob naach gaana hona chahiye..toh shuru kare?? Aisa karte hai..saari lights ko kam kar dete hai aur ek spotlight ko ghooma te hai…jis kisi pe bhi spotlight ruke gi usse ek badiya sa gaana suna na hoga uske liye jo uske dil ke bahut kareeb hai…aaye dekhte hai woh pehla shaqs kaun hai.
The lights are dimmed and the spotlight moves around everyone…andhere mein Jai is upto no good again kissing Bani around the neck…tickling her!!!

Bani: Stop it will u!! (giggling 😆 )

Jai: Andhere mein koi nahin dekh raha!!! (continues to tickle Bani 😉 )

The spotlight continues to go around and finally stops on…..Anu!

Everyone: Come on Anu!!! 👏

Anu:
Chunri lehar aayi
Paayal chankayi
Choori khankayi
Liya bechainee ka rog…hooo
Laga laga laga re…laga laga laga re…laga laga laga re…( doing the same dance as sushmita)
Laga prem rog
Laga laga laga re…laga laga laga re…laga laga laga re…
Laga prem rog

Rohit (joining in):
Tumse milke dil ko mera jaane kya hua re (trying to be Salman…but kahaan Rohit aur kahaan mera Salman!! 😆 )
Laga laga laga re…laga laga laga re…laga laga laga re…
Laga prem rog

Everyone gets in the mood with this peppy number..a lot of cheering and clapping going 👏 👏 👏 on…the song comes to an end and the spotlight moves around and stops on Aditya!

Aditya (all excited 😊 ): Wah! Ab meri baari!! Kya gaoon?? (Then looks towards Jigyaasa, who is giving one of those "Puhlzzzzz" looks, rolling her eyes 😕 )

Aditya:
Mehbooba ho mehbooba! (Going over to Jigyaasa!!! 😆 )
Mehbooba ho mehbooba (Jigyaasa giving one of those "I'm gonna kill u!" looks!)
Mehbooba ho mehbooba..oooo (dancing crazily around her…making her walk off…but Adi peecha chodne wala nahin tha! 😆 😆 )
Gulshan mein phool khilte hai…jab sehara mein milte hai (grabs her… 😃 )
Gulshan mein phool khilte hai…jab sehara mein milte hai (..spins her around)
Mein aur tuuuuuuuu (….holds her in his arms and pretends to kiss her…but she pushes him back! 😡 )

Mehbooba ho mehbooba! (Jigyaasa walking off very, very angry) 😡 😡
Mehbooba ho mehbooba! (Aditya continues to follow her..really ticking her off!!) 😡
Mehbooba ho mehbooba ooo! (Finally Jigyaasa storms off…unable to take Adi's antics and drags Ranveer off too (yes guys he's still around but like always in the background!))

A lot of cheering and clapping!!! 👏 👏 👏

Aditya: Yaaa!!! How was that guys!!! I'm good na!!!

Jai (shouting): Haan lekin tumhaari mehbooba sun kar bhaag gayi!!! (laughing) 😆

Lights are dimmed again and the spotlight moves around once again…this time it stops on Pia (Yikes ab yeh kya karegi!!! 😕 )
Pia, continuously looking at Tarun (yeh Pia ki toh mein!!!!! 😡 ) moves near him and starts singing:

Pia:
Mujhe ko hue na khabar..chori chori chhup chhup kar
Kab pyar ki pehli nazar..hai (constantly looking at Tarun…making him feel a little uncomfortable)
Le gayi le gayi…dil le gayi legayi
Le gayi le gayi…dil le gayi legayi

Pyaar ki pehli pehle…is aankhmacholi mein..hai…(dancing around Tarun now making him blush!!!)
Pyaar ki pehli pehle…is aankhmacholi mein (everyone is beginning to notice Pia's intentions with Tarun)
Bin soche jaa baithi mein naina ki doli mein…(stopping in front of Tarun and winking at him!! 😉 )

Ab jao mein kaise ghar (Tumhe toh mein dhake maar ke nikaaloongi!! 😡 😆 )
Chori chori chhup chhup kar (continues to dance around Tarun..who eventually finds it too much and walks off in another direction..far away from her as possible…good thinking! 😃 )

Kab pyaar ki pehli nazar hai….(Pushkar looks on at her…thinking probably "what did I ever see in her")
Le gayi le gayi…dil le gayi legayi
Le gayi le gayi…dil le gayi legayi (finishes her dance ..thank god for that! 😆 )

Everyone claps…(why I don't know! 😆 😆 )

So now the light is moving around again….its going around and briefly stops on Jai…who is a little busy nuzzling…and is almost caught…but Bani hits him so hard with her elbow …he snaps out of his romantic mood quickly. The light moves around and stops on Tarun!

Jai (shouting): Hey Tarun…kiske liye gaana gao ge…tumhaare dil ke kareeb kaun hai??? (laughs) 😆

Tarun: Arre hai na..jaan na chahte ho kaun?? (Pia looks on in excitement as Tarun is looking towards her…..nahinnnnnnnnnnnn!! 😡 😡 😡 )

Tarun (starts singing):

Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai…Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani (looking towards Pia…I'm gonna cry!! 😭 😭 )

Woh Hai Koi Kali Ya Koi Kiran…Ya Hai Koi Kahani (starts walking towards her!!!)

Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon…Kya Use Main Keh Doon (extends his hand out……..)

Pretty Woman (Dadi grabs Taruns hand from behind Pia!!! Woo Hoo!! 😃 Luv u Dadi!!! 🤗 Both start dancing!)

Hey Pretty Woman (Pia all upset!! Ha ha! 😆 )….Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman

Pretty Woman…Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman…

Pretty Woman…Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman (twirling Dadi around then letting her go and grabbing Masi)

Ho Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai…Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani (dances with Masi)
Woh Hai Koi Kali Ya Koi Kiran…Ya Hai Koi Kahani
Use Jitna Dekhon Utna Sochon…Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman…Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman…Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman…Tum Bhi Kaho Naa O Pretty Woman (wraps up the song by dancing with both Masi and Dadi…ur so sweet Tarun can I dance with u too?? 😳 )

He gets a roaring sound of applause!!! 👏 👏

Ab phir se light ghoom rahi hai aur ab phasa apna devdas Saahil:

Saahil 😔 (looking at Rano):
Tadap tadap ke is dil se aaha nikal ti rahi…. mujhko sazaa di pyaar ki
aisa kya gunaah kiya toh loot gaye…haan loot gaye…
toh loot gaye hum teri mohabbat mein…(continuing to sing but interrupted but Aditya)

Aditya: Arre beta…hum loot gaye yeh gaana sun ke!!!…Yeh kaisa gaana gaa rahe ho…kuch accha happy song gao na…(looks at Saahil's depressing face 😔 …Jai starts laughing but gets another blow from Bani 😆 )

Bani (whispers to Jai): Bechara…sab aapki wajah se…kitna upset lag raha hai…(Jai gives a cheeky smile 😃 )

Aditya (to Rano): Rano beta…chalo…Saahil ke badle tum gaa lo, iska to mood kharaab lagta hai….come on everyone…give Rano a hand!!
Everyone clap…cheer her on. She looks at Saahil…gets more angry and sings:

Rano 😡 :
Bekadar Bekhabar Bewafaa Balmaa
Bekadar Bekhabar Bewafaa Balmaa 😡
Na Main Tujhko Maarungi Na Main Tujhko Chhodungi (Saahil getting a tad bit scared! 😒 )
Aahista Aahista Tadpa Tadpa Ke O Pathhar Dil Main Tujhko Todungi (Saahil really scared now! )
Bekadar Bekhabar Bewafaa Balmaa
Bekadar Bekhabar Bewafaa Balmaa

Jai: Ooooooooh she's mad…real mad!!!

Aditya (interrupting Rano) Yeh ho kya raha hai tum dono ko…kaise gaane gaa rahe ho

Jai is laughing uncontrollably..holding his stomach! 😆 😆

Aditya: Hey spotlight ko ghoomao… (the light wanders around)

This time it stops on none other than Jai! Jai is still laughing but stops once the light is on him!

Jai😲 : Hey its me!! Lekin mein kyun gaoon…I'm the groom…I don't have to!!

Aditya: Oh yeah…yun toh bade acche gaane gaata hai…ab kyun nahin…yaad haina tumhara woh NO NO NO ENTRY!! (laughs 😆 ) Come on Jai!!!

Everyone cheering him on! 👏 👏

Jai (whispering to Bani): Kya kehti ho Bani? Gaa do? Ya phir ek private performance pasand karogi?? (winks 😉 )

Bani (shy): Aap bhi na…gaa dijiye…lekin Aditya uncle Jaisa mat gaaye ga….varna Jigyaasa auntie ki tarah mein bhi bhaag jaoungi!!

Jai (shouts): Hey guys!!! I'll sing??? Kyunki ab toh meri Bani ka order hai ke mein gaoon!!! Lekin mein Aditya ki tarah nahin gaonga kyonki agar meri Bani bhaag gayi toh mujhse bardaasht nahin hoga! (Everyone laughs 😆 ).

Jai starts thinking of a song…takes a while then looks at Bani…who is smiling sweetly.

Jai (sings):
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge (Smiling at Bani 😊 )
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge (Bani completely floored…main bhi bahut jald girne waali hoon!!! 😳 )
Maine Socha Na Tha
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge (walking around her)
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge (picking up a flower from a nearby bouquet..)
Maine Socha Na Tha (…handing her the flower….Haiiiiiii… 😳 😳 .Jai mein behosh hone waali hoon!!!)

Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen (arms out to Bani….awwww!)
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen (Jai spinning around!)
Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen (walking around Bani…again)
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen (….looking very sweet)
Maine Socha Na Tha (arms folded, shaking his head! Your too good Jai!! 👏 )

Dil Ki Daali Pe Kaliyaan Si Khilne Lagin
Jab Nigaahein Nigaahon Se Milne Lagin
Dil Ki Daali Pe Kaliyaan Si Khilne Lagin (Jai puts his one hand on his heart… ❤️ )
Jab Nigaahein Nigaahon Se Milne Lagin (…..looking deep into her eyes then extending his other hand to Bani….)
Ek Din Is Tarah Hosh Kho Jayenge (…Bani giving her hand to him…Jai pulls her close 😳 )
Paas Aaye To Madhosh Ho Jayenge (Both look passionately into each other eyes 😳 😳 )
Maine Socha Na Tha (Bani shyly, lowering her gaze…Jai smiling 😊 )

Bani(shyly, unknowingly joining in):

Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge (continuing to look into Jai's eyes)
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha

Jagamagati Hui Jaagti Raat Hai
Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Barsaat Hai
Jagamagati Hui Jaagti Raat Hai
Raat Hai Ya Sitaaron Ki Barsaat Hai
Ek Din Dil Ki Raahon Mein Apne Liye
Jal Uthenge Mohabbat Ke Itne Diye
Maine Socha Na Tha

Jai and Bani (Sing together and waltzing…Hai! 😳 ):

Ek Din Zindagi Itni Hogi Haseen
Jhoomega Aasmaan Gaayegi Ye Zameen (Jai twirling Bani around…awwww! 😳 😳 )
Maine Socha Na Tha

Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge (both completely lost in one another)
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha (Both smiling at one another)

Jai:
Maine Socha Na Tha

Bani:
Maine Socha Na Tha .

The song ends and there is a huge round of applause for both Jai and Bani. Bani is feeling all shy and has come out of her romantic moment with Jai…blushing she hides her face in Jai's chest. Jai holds her tightly and softly kisses her forehead….clapping and cheering continue! 👏


How was that guys? Long na?????? Got a kind of mushy towards then end…I was crying almost 😭 …such a romantic song between Jai and Bani….haiiiii! 😳
Taz

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