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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yay i am in the best mood possible...i am sorry i am late but i am so happy because yesterday i won the best writer award in my school...woo hoo... So i guess most of the credit goes to u guys cos if ut wasnt for the people who encouraged me in my writing i would have never even tried so thanks and here is the first part...



am i really alone?

"crunch...crunch..." the leaves ruffled under his feet while he walked along the path. the path had not been maintained for years neither had the house. he looked at the massive structure from afar.he heard so many stories about this area. it was supposed to be haunted by several evil spirits. the house had once been an orphanage where the children were tortured by the owner. the house caught on fire and everyone died in it...including the blood thirsty owner. It is said that she yearned to hear cries of pain when she was alive and now her thirst for pain has only grown deeper.she is said to roam the halls of the house craving for her victims to scream in pain for it is like music to her ears. She imprisons her victims and they are never allowed to leave the house till the end of eternity.what kind of idiot will come here you ask. well there is always reyansh singhania. they say he was born without fear while other say he is born without brains. if you ever ask him he will say it is because of his never ending curiousity.

" they all say this place is haunted but all i see is overgrown grass and a house badly in need of a renovation. anyway i have to go inside and get a picture and prove to swayam that this place is not haunted."he said in an indifferent voice as he looked at the property from outside. he felt at his back pack for his camera and water bottle. " if i am going to stay here over night i have to have my daily neccesities" he grinned as he felt for his can of beer in his pocket. he was about to enter when he saw someone lying on the ground next to a tree. he could see lightning flashing and could sense that it was about to rain. Instinctively he walked over to the person as he drew closer he realized it was a women. he drew even close only to discover the most beautiful and mesmerizing women he had ever seen.he felt his heart beat fast. he bent over to look at her face. she was wearing a pair of jeans and a plain t-shirt. Yet she looked like god had stopped to carve the most beautiful women ever when he made her. her face was simple and innocent yet she was so seductive. he stared at her for a while when he realized that he needed to help her. still in a state of admiration he grabbed a bottle from his pocket and emptied it's contents. She woke up with a jolt while rey stared at her shamelessly." what the hell is wrong with you" she yelled at him. he broke out of his trance and realized that it was not water he had poured on her it was beer." oh my god i am sorry i thoight it was water..." he was cut off in between his apology." think... you need brains to think which apparently you lack completely".rey was taken aback by her outburst." hey atleast you are okay now the least you can do is thank me.." he said in a 'i have just been insulted manner'." okay fine thank you". she replied in the most sarcastic tone possible.rey was completely amazed by her looks and attitude but hid it." whatever ...i am leaving anyway i got side-tracked by you". He said while the girl stared on." where are you going?"she asked in a genuinely confused voice." towards my next adventure". he said while pointing at the dilipadated house. the girl dropped her jaw indicating shock. " are you insane...i was right you do not have any brains...dont you know this place is haunted.." duh...thats why i said adventure...anyway if you are so smart what are you doing near this haunted house unconcious".he stressed the word haunted to indicate sarcasm.the girl knitted her brow together showing that she was thinking. rey could not help but smile at her purity." honestly...i dont remember... all i remember is my car broke down and i walked down here and then nothing..." rey got serious." you must have hit your head pretty bad. " no sooner did he finish his sentence that they heard a loud and screeching scream. it was terrible the girl had gripped rey in fear while rey clung on to her secretly enjoying the moment. The girl came to her senses and apologized to him."its fine everyone gets scared of thunder. "the girl stared at him in confusion." that was not thunder it was a scream...a scream of pain" rey chuckled at her. " you girls get scared so easily anyway see you ...i am going in." the girl held his hand protectively." if you are going i am coming too". rey laughed." are you crazy...you got so scared over thunder and now you want to come with me...no chance.." the girl rolled her eyes at him." listen it is almost 1 am at night i have no idea how to go home'it is going to rain and i cannot be alone at night.so i need someone with me". rey's eyeballs popped out at the last line." you need me?" he repeated making her blush. " are you gonna take me or not?". Rey smiled triumphantly like he just hit the jack pot." since you are begging i will do it." he exclaimed . she smiled at his words ." so shall we go ?"she questioned him ." before that my name is rey...and you are ?" he said while holding out his hand. " taani" she said reciprocating his handshake. They were unsuspecting individuals whose life was about to change...

Okay guys i know this update wasnt exactly scary but i promise the next update will be.. So pls hit like and comment if you enjoyed my bakwas.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Res
unres...
Yipeee me 1st ⭐️ ⭐️..
You got best writer award 👏 yay i am so so happy for u , u deserve that u truly write so well ⭐️..
Coming to the update it was awesome , i loved it as an intro, the way u described the sound of leaves on his entry, to create that scary atmosphere was commandable, n then the way u described his chara"coz they say he was born without brains... Bt its all his curiosity, there was 1 more sent b4 that , i dnt remember n cant copy paste as i am from cell, what i wanted to say was the way u portrayed the sarcassm by playing with words, i loveee such writings..
N then intro of taani and a tinge of soft romance added to the beauty of the chapter... What to say fab job!! Fab!! Do update fast
Edited by disismeenu4u - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
wowww loved it dr great update plzzz do continue it soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
this was soo good!
update asap!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Reserved!

Yet to read it! Congrats on the award! You really are a fabulous writer!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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FOR YOUR AWARD YOU DESERVE DIS YOU ARE AWESOME WRITTER

now come to update..
It's too much intresting...
TaaREY first meeting intresting and awesome update
rey is born without fear but ppl said he is born without brains lolz 😆
and taani is kuch gadbad types 😲
it's very intresting update next part soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

Res
unres...
Yipeee me 1st ⭐️ ⭐️..
You got best writer award 👏 yay i am so so happy for u , u deserve that u truly write so well ⭐️..
Coming to the update it was awesome , i loved it as an intro, the way u described the sound of leaves on his entry, to create that scary atmosphere was commandable, n then the way u described his chara"coz they say he was born without brains... Bt its all his curiosity, there was 1 more sent b4 that , i dnt remember n cant copy paste as i am from cell, what i wanted to say was the way u portrayed the sarcassm by playing with words, i loveee such writings..
N then intro of taani and a tinge of soft romance added to the beauty of the chapter... What to say fab job!! Fab!! Do update fast


thank you so much...i love reading your comments and ya i am like seriously very happy about the award but all the credit goes to those encouraged me and u r a big part of it di...so thank you once again
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Avc380



<font size="6">FOR YOUR AWARD YOU DESERVE DIS YOU ARE AWESOME WRITTER</font>

now come to update..
It's too much intresting...
TaaREY first meeting intresting and awesome update
rey is born without fear but ppl said he is born without brains lolz 😆
and taani is kuch gadbad types 😲
it's very intresting update next part soon


thank you so much u guys are awesome 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice yaar..n many many cngrtz dr 4 ur award..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update, nice intro... pouring beer instead of water ws funny... n waiting for ur nxt update...

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