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Posted: 13 years ago
PAGEEE 40
ILL STOP NOW
WONT BOTHER U ANYMORE
JUST GONNA WAIT FOR THE UPDATE
SORRY AND THANKSS❀️
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Posted: 13 years ago
please update please update please update my honey bunny di,,,,
please update
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Posted: 13 years ago
aaliya ji update karo naaa ,,,, kaho ... ... please karo naaa
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Posted: 13 years ago
Didn't even know this one existed lol so will reach it and get back to it sooner than later :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
YAYY i cant wait till u update Alyy :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for continuing!!!
i really hope i get to res first on my fav storyπŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ah, okay!

So its been really long that I have actually posted here, because I had eventually no plans of continuing this oh so boring FF anymore. Trust me if you can, I was so upset that I actually forgot all about this FF as no one seemed to be bothered too and I was not an idiot sending like 100 PM's to people for some 10 responses!

But, if you read this and liked it, thanks Marziah (Jeevi7) ❀️

She really spammed this worthless story like hell and made me smile so much..i love you this much girl! Like i read all of your scrap and I was hella busy and I couldn't reply to all so sorry!
Actually I wrote a long one, but it got deleted unfortunately and how much do I hate writing it all over again! Gross, but anything for you my love as you have done a lot to this storyy!

WOHO, SO THIS IS SPECIALLY FOR YOU MY LITTLE SPAMMER, MARZIAH! I LOVE YOU!

Also, thanks to Aaliya(krystu05) for bugging me to continue this ASAP!

Part 6:

It had been exactly three days and he had not been able to push her out of his mind. He could not think about anything else. He replayed her images over and over again in his head. She was just so freaking cute. Her smiles and her eyes kept Viren occupied throughout the day as he kept daydreaming about her.

He constructed fake dates with her in his head- it was blissful!

Viren had stopped visiting Manvi's profile because Jeevika looked better in real. His calls to Manvi had tripled over the last three days because he wanted to hear Jeevika's voice in the background somewhere. It just kept ringing in his head since that day and no matter what he did, it stayed there. He kicked himself for not taking her number that day!

Anyway it was one day when Manvi was pissed at him because he apparently kept mentioning about her sister in everything he said.

"Viren, one more word about her and we will never talk again" she said.

It was the millionth time that day that he had picked her name up in a conversation.

"I don't want you near her again. Do you get me" she continued.

"But why? It's not as if I am hitting on her."

"No, but you were staring at her. I don't want a guy like you hovering near her"

"Did she notice?"

"I didn't ask her"

"Did she say anything about me?"

"I din't ask her that either,' she said, ' Viren, any other girl in the universe, but not my sister! For heaven's sake. She is too simple for all your games, Viren. And you know my parents…'

'Games? Anyways, fine. We will not talk about her"

"Better" she said.

No matter how had he tried, he could not change Manvi's perception about him being a flirt and a guy who just slept around. It was so unfair.

"And Viren your not adding her on Facebook"

"Why not? Now, what's wrong with that?"

"Just like that. I don't want you to go about liking every picture of hers, like you have done in mine…"

"Umm, you noticed?" He asked.

"Obviously Viren. You liked every picture of hers in my album."

"Oh okay, but-"

"Nothing doing. No adding her on Facebook" she said this sternly, and they did not talk about it further.

The very next moment, he sent her the friend request! The more Jeevika was treated like a guarded princess, the more he was drawn to her.

Soon he realised how painful the wait was for a friend request to be accepted on Facebook. And this was the prettiest girl he had ever seen. The girl Viren had a crush on. On facebook and in real.

He looked at the laptop and waited. His eyes grew weary and tired, but he could not take his eyes off it.

And then a message came

Jeevika Chaudhary: Are you sure? J Didn't Manvi ask you not to add me?

Viren tried diverting his mind now, because he himself didn't know why was he doing that. After almost a while, he went to the message screen and after thinking a lot composed the message!

Viren Vadhera: We don't have to tell her J

It wasn't witty, it wasn't smart, but he had to reply! He looked at his watch and it was still ten in the night. She would be awake, he guessed.

He waited and almost immediately did the reply come. And their chat started from there through Face book messages!

Jeevika Chaudhary: You don't but I have to. She is my sister! And she doesn't have nice things to say about you (:

Viren Vadhera: She is just possessive!

Jeevika Chaudhary: I am sure she has reasons J

Viren Vadhera: Will you add me already! J

Jeevika Chaudhary: *runs to ask Manvi if she should*

Viren Vadhera: nooo! *dies*

Jeevika Chaudhary: *JERK*

A little later, he got the noticifiaction he had been waiting for!

Jeevika Choudhary accepted your friend request.

And he had not even spent three minutes on her profile that his phone rang, crap! It was Manvi. Quite obviously, she had noticed that friend request!

"VIREN!!" She almost screamed on the phone.

He had to just distract her, or she would have sucked him in through the receiver and goggled poor Viren up. He had seen the lizard side of her, and it was not pleasing, Not at all.


LIKES AND COMMENTS PLEASE!


Edited by little.angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

**UNRES**

im first wohoo
OMG my favourite story is updated FINALLYYYπŸ˜ƒ you don't know have happy I am Aaliyaaa..Love you sooo much for continuing this SUperb story just for me❀️ You are the best! Again soo sorry for bothering you so much 😳 you don't know how special this story for me is and how much i love it, i cant express it hehehe. I don't understand how people don't like this story??? its the best story dude!! I really really really hope people read this and shower you with lots of Likes and Comments so we get updates regularly, oh how i wish my this dream came trueπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ Your such an amazing writer Aly..i love your style of writing, its so unique and i find your writing so calming...everytime i read your updates i want it to be more so it never ended and i could go on and read till i get bored of reading but i don't think i will ever get bored of your stories and KarinasπŸ˜† Your the sweetest girly ever, thank you so much for dedicating this Update for me!
Coming to the update, i know it was really short but better than nothing right? As long as you gave an update thats enough for me. I loved every single bit of it. Viren is the cutest hehe Manvi as always is annoying even here hahah no offense but she is just in Virens way. Loved Virikas lil convo message on FB, wish it was longer tho heheh but its okay im sure u will give us a longer one next time :) Overall the update was AWESOMELY Written, and it was Super Duper Update!
I love you so much Aaliyaa❀️ Thank you so much again for continuing this story. this story is really close to my heart,i dnt even know the reason behind it haha i just know that i love it and i always wait for ur updates :) Actually the wait was worth it cuz u gave us such a small and sweet update...Thank you and sorry for bothern you again and again πŸ˜ƒ
Lot of love❀️
Big HugπŸ€—
-marziah😊
Edited by jeevi7 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
reserved πŸ˜›
***UNRES***

AND YOU SAY THAT I DON'T LIKE THIS STORY

🀬

HURT YOURSELF RIGHT NOW 🀣, no just kidding I love you too much for me to say that!
Okay I just read this 50 times right now, because its entertaining and better than chem!!!

Firstly Viren is mine and only mine 😑
Dare anyone take him from me
He daydreams dates just like I do πŸ˜†
I daydream what I would do and where I would take Tacker had he come to LA to meet his long-lost love, MEEE πŸ˜†

Manvi is damn funnny πŸ˜ƒ
I love her role in this story, actually lol
I love Viren being so impatient and wondering if Jeevika noticed anything 🀣
He is a keeper πŸ˜›
The facebook part was probably the funniest!!! Not wanting him to like all the pictures πŸ‘
My Viren would not only like but comment on every picture 500 times!!!
But he sent the friend request!!!
BADBOYYY
And then he tells Jeevs that they don't have to tell Manvi anything
Goddd why are you so damn perfect aly baly clay? ❀️



you are just perfect in every way!
I love you babesss ❀️
Edited by Kays94 - 13 years ago

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