A Gift - Last Chapter Updated on pg.16! - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazinggg updateee!!!! i loved ittt... veryy emotional updateee!!!!! aww..poor virika and her birthday went ths way... overal superb updateee!!!!


Karina... a msg from ur fb frnd..thts me... :P i will be liking and commenting ur updates only on fri nd sat as i hv no work on these days... ok? thnku so much for understanding me... thnkuu dear!!! :D u r doing a great job...all ur updates be it os/ss/ff ... fantabulousss!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Amazinnnggg!
It was full on bollywood style, but I loved it
Seriously! The way you put Jeevika's feelings into words was beautiful..
It couldn't get better..
Hoping to read one more chapter to this awesome story..
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Yay viren is found and yay bcz u decided to add an extra chapter:-) ohh plz make viren do sumthing spl for jeevika for her 1st bday.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
AWESOME and BEAUTIFUL update dear👏👏

thank god viren is fine...😊 and that jaiswal argghhh...😡
he kidnapped viren...soo hate him...!!!

happy that our jeevika found her love viren in that small hut...!!! the way jeevika hugged him and make that hug tighter awww that was lovelyyy ...😳

and in the hospital viren feeds jeevs first awww that was cutee...😊
our perfect virika...
as jeevs said everyday and every moment with viren is a gift for her ...just like that ur every story and every update is a gift for all of us...😊

thanx for the pm...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
karina the update was fabulous!!! 👏
virika's emotions potrayed so beautifully...
loved it!!!
jeevika hugged viren tighter...😳
awesome!!
viren feeding jeevika
fantastic update!!!
well i want another part very soon...😃
love
aaliya🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
wow...i luvd her spirit...she ws so anxious to find viren...u described her feelings vry well...finally she found him, the love of her life...viren felt so guilty 4 ruinng jeevs b'day...lovely update...awesome...& viren told her he would make that up to her...so eagerly waiting wht he'll do now...update nxt part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
wooow

jeeevika is so daring yaar

ans such an awesome gift its viren himself
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Viren is such a loving n good husband he wanted to see jeevika happy even though he was in a bad condition😊
And jeevika is also loving n dutiful wife who wanted her husband a lot.😊
Loved the ending Virika scene A lot especially viren feeding jeevika😛
And jeevika saying that viren is her beft gift😳aww,
Tanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
Please update soon!
And yes definitely one more chapter!
Thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Holyy crap Karina! I didnt expected the next update this fast!! lol
But me really happy that you got the 70 likes this fast
Really wish you get that much likes for Heartbeat and WE Found Love this fast, so we get an update so quickly too!!! 😕
The update is absolutely very beautifully written Kays
Me like filmy stuff sho sho much hahha
Thanks God my Virenji is fine, was so worried about him
Stupid Jaiswal just wanna go and kill him for kidnapping Viren!
Ahh i just loved Jeevikas emotions towards her hubby
Really liked the last scene of Virika together <3
Yayy we get another chapter or maybe you could change it to FF?😆
jks jks thanks so much for giving us another chapter Kays
Love yaaa❤️

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