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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratess for New ss ...loved the concept ...
totally different and unique but having same love and magic ...
plzzz continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
interesting concept and prologue
pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
very interesting I'm very excited can't wait to read more
continue soon please and All the best for your new story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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"why i join you silly girls?" NK murmur

"you are our body guard bhai" lavanya his cheek

"please stop your this crazy friend "he murmur to Lavanya ,they all look at Khushi who was making jalebies keeping a stove out side the caravan.

"no one can stop her"Sheetal murmur


" i think she should open a langar " Lavanya whisper

"leave her, let's enjoy our self for free" Sheetal winked at them they all started playing games




Arnav was walking back from Shyam place , he was not convinced to kidnap girls as he himself has a sister , he was walking in his own thought when he bang with Aarav( Aarav a naughty boy who Arnav give tuition during exams) "What are you doing at this hour that too in cold " he hold his arm

Aarav was munching Jalebies he mouth was stuff and hands was full of it

"did you stole it from some shop?"Arnav pull his ear( in heart "who is asking ?" )

"Arnie bhai that didi is giving free to kids" he quickly gulp in

"who?"he look around

"leave my ear first then i will tell you "he munch more ,Arnav left his ear and try to take one from him

"no it is mine , if you want go there" he pointed at towards the park

Arnav look in direction he saw a kids standing around a stall ,he walk ahead ,Aarav walk behind him eating

" she will not give you " Aarav said

""why?" Arnav sneezed " give me a piece because of flu , i am feeling so bad" he sneezed.


"khatam, i finished all, wait i will get for you bhai" wipe his hands in his pants and ran


He hide his face with scarf and walk bit close .she was simply dress in a kurta pajama ,covering her head with a red woolen cap. her face was not visible or may be because of flu his eyes was watery .

"ok tell me what i should make tomorrow" she asked the kids while cleaning utensils

kids were screaming telling her their favorites

"didi sab khatam"Aarav asked her again

"yes why do you want more?"she wipe his face

"not me Arnie bhai want some" he pointed towards the trees ,Arnav who was standing next to tree hide behind it tree,she saw his shadow

"didi Arnie bhai has flu,can you give a small piece if you have any" he requested " i did told him you are making for kids "he said at once

"go give him this" she gave the paper plates to him.
"all " Aarav asked her
"yes all" she push him to go and give
"what you will eat didi" he asked her,she didn't reply

Aarav walk to him "one is your and one is mine " he picked one piece
Arnav sneezed and ate a piece" Shyam and Akash have mistaken, she can't be from a rich family"

"how it is?"he asked
"very delicious"he smiled
"didi bhai is saying it is delicious"he shouted

"oye" Arnav try to stop him
khushi smiled ,she was picking up the paper plates which kids has throw around. Arnav too started picking from his side
"please you go as it is really cold out" she said in a low voice as both Aarav and Arnav was close to her

"didi what you will make for us tomorrow?" he asked
Khushi look at Arnav who sneezed again their eyes met"everyone want pani puri, but i think that will make them sick ,i will make samosas"
"yummy,Arnie bhai you will not get tomorrow" he teased him
"kids & sick are my guest"she grab the plates from their hands,her freezing hand touch his,she quickly pull back her hand and ran back to her caravan without looking back.

"Arnie bhai leave me home" he pull his hand as Arnav was still lost some where
"hain chalo" he walked with him

When he reached home he found his Di and buaji talking
"where were you? I called Akash he said you left hour back"she waved her hand in front of his eyes ,he grab her wrist and look at the wrist watch
"jiju gave you that" he asked at once
"jiju "she made sad face

"my new friend Khushi gave me this" she smiled
"it is too expensive di" he look it closely"And by the way who is your new friend" he asked

"one of the girls who are visiting our town " she pull away her hand

"HMMM " he walked ahead "but why she gave you this?" he asked her

" i said your watch is so beautiful , she at taken it off and gave me" she smiled

"Di you return it back as it is too expensive " he said while going in his room

"Bujai what is his problem , he cannot see me happy" Anjali said sadly " you keep this as if i will take this to my home he will sell it like my other jewellery"



Arnav was looking at his hand when Akash called him

"so what you thought?" Akash asked him

"regarding what" he said absent mindedly

"what we talked about , as we have heard they are leaving tomorrow " he said

"they are not leaving tomorrow "he murmur

"how you know?,did you met them , don't tell me they recognized you" Akash asked him ,Arnav look at himself in mirror, only his eyes was visible

" i didnot met them ,i am not feeling well i will talk to you tomorrow " he cut the call



" I think his conscience is not allowing him " he look at Shyam

" i think we did mistake, he is not trustworthy " Shyam punch on the table


i need comments . as when i start new story i want my readers to tell me what they are liking




Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Wow khushi is so kind hearted..
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Khushi is such an angel.
Arnav's conscience is stpng him nw bt i thnk due d situatns he vl b kidnapping d gals isn't??
Okay i ws jus guessn
di i hpe u vl cntnue sn:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Aww. so sweet of Khushi helping the kids.
I wonder if Arnav would be able to kidnap her.
Loving this story. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
khusi is such an angel ... arnav by heart is a gem ... veru very unique story nadiaaa

carry onn ...

-sanchari/diya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
khushi is kind.
loved the concept.
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Wow im loving Khushi...shes just so nice!

Arnav aint that bad by heart!

This is really a unique and awesome plot Naddiya!
idk how i missed the prologue but anyway both prologue and chapter one was awesome!

Continue soon!

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