Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 52

Awesome update ...loved it 🤗

Amazinf Update Maxine

👏Just awesome..
"Backless choli..Minimum coverage...Maximum mileage..."👏
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Ab Delhi dur nahi...&Delhi is thousands of miles away and in between "Ki Jiji tere Jethji deewane, kya karein, yeh flirt karna bhi na jaane!"..

And the inner voice of Aakash and Monorama's shade...just mindblowing...I have a cramp while laughing out loudly...

Maxine.. you are hilarious.. Akash's entry with his bahuria.. and Maathe with eye makeup.. she does have scary makeup.. you have brought up some facts from the show that was just funny..like Shyam's irritating background music..

I think I died, became an angel, and now am typing this comment! That was hilarious! And the not-so-subtle digs were sprinkles on top of the icing of a very rich and delicious triple chocolate cake. [ I must be hungry...] This update was pure brilliance!

Loved their phone conversation. Hum apke hain kaun? Too funny. What was Arnav doing though? Also love Anjali in his story - much better than the poojarin in the show. Look who wants to start the rituals backwards now? Guess he will be getting more actions than our hero. I want to read about flirty Asr - those bedroom eyes are so hard to resist. Let's go to Delhi!

And Maxine strikes again! What a thoroughly entertaining update. I almost fell off my bed while laughing. This was witty and extremely hilarious.The vidhi-purvak vivah twist for Payal and Akash. Shyam's daiyya ho and Anjali's sleeping arrangements.Haha. And Mamiji's eyeshadow, the Raizada young ones being Pavlov's dogs. KumudSundari, and her Goddess of Knowledge/Moon Man. Hahaa. That little bit of twisted geography and parallels between Kumud's network woes and backless cholis. I'm so glad you guys are doing a version 2.0, and with some of my favourite writers on board. This is one of the best FF/collabs out there. Brava!

Kumud lives in Ratnagiri. It's on the Konkan coast of Maharashtra which migrated to Gujarat and floated up to the deserts of Rajasthan during the last Monsoon. It's currently stationed at Delhi near Chandi Chowk. Aur koi sawaal Sanka Devi?"

"Nahi Buaji," said Khushi looking puzzled. She didn't know cities could change states and terrain with so much ease. "Neither does Sanjay Leela Bhansali", sighed Kumud, stuck in poor, old mobile Ratnagiri, once famed for Alphonso mangoes, now an arid desert with nary a working internet caf, forget Broadband. It was like her backless cholis. Minimum coverage, maximum mileage. She hoped Khushi's gotas would add some spice to her wardrobe. God knows she needed the help to entice Mr.Goddess of Wisdom Moon Man.