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I liked the way Arnav tried to analyse Khushi's conduct around him.
So the gift was a pen; the detailing and the thought behind it is enough for us to know how much Khushi is into Arnav. 😳
And the first word he wrote with the pen gifted by Khushi was her name! That piece of writing was so symbolic and sweet.
The dance! Oh yeah the dance; the whole description of it- your words, the characters swaying on your words and the ambience that you had established was just surreal.
To Arnav that was possibly one of the most intense but poignant moments he had shared with a woman.
Need we say more!😉
That the dance was followed by a night walk only heightened my expectations to the inevitable.
And the kiss! The blow by blow account of the kiss was so gorgeously sketched that it was difficult to not be benumbed by it.
You wanted a feedback to the description of the kiss; well here it is: You couldn't have delineated the kiss in a better way; everything was good...the play of words, the response of the individuals portrayed through your writing, the recital was almost poetic; just awesome!👏 There's one regret however; I wish the chapter hadn't ended so soon!😳
Edited by Eccentrica - 13 years ago