Chup Chup Ke 3!!....P. 36 - last update - Page 23

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amiee thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
I READ ALL OF IT IN ONE DAY WOW ITS GOT ME HOOKED ON FOR SURE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK šŸ‘ šŸ‘
PLS CONT SOOON.......
CAN U PLS PM ME WHEN U DO UR NEXT UPDATE
THANKX A LOT.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Thanks guysšŸ¤—...........and amiee.....welcome aboardšŸ˜‰

Now.......coming to the point.............I'm so annoyed, irritated and just plain angry right now!😔

Some of you know I've had problems with my USB....first it had a virus, then it corruptedšŸ˜’...........so I transferred all my work to my MP3 and I've been using that for a few weeks.......

It was working fine until today!..........no idea how this happened, but I was working on the next part last night............after I saved it I went to sleep and was about to post it now but found out that the stupid MP3 had just deleted everything for some reason!!šŸ˜•

Argh............why me?!😭

Thankfully my work was saved on my computer so my coursework is safe.........but you guys are gonna have to wait a while for the next part.......sorry guys!

~Nibbles!šŸ˜›

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Posted: 19 years ago
it ok 😭
We can wait take your sweet time and give us a good part with little bit of masti and romance. šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
We will be waiting. cont. soon. 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sorry 2 hear the badnews. Please do continue soon. I really like your ff. can't wait. šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
šŸ¤— Awwwwww ! Nablu hun ! its okiee ! we all understand ....! 😭 😭 😭
happend everytime......but u know u hvaee to make a backup of all coursework files..and make sure yu keep i consistent like keep it doin everyfre days for longer courseworks....! šŸ˜›
hun ! i have been waiting ever sooo eagerly for the update !!! but its all kool ! takee ur time and do update ! 😭 😭
šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago

I will update soon..........promise guys!!

Soon as I get all my coursework under control......

BTW.............For all those who know sweetu aka Sudha...........a little message from her............her computers corrupted so she can't come on I-F, but she'll be back soon!šŸ˜›

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey nibbles
its ok.. take ur time..
but continue asap..
and please make it long thanks
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Posted: 19 years ago
it happened with me tooo i know how it feels šŸ˜•
take ur time and give us the biggest and most romantic update how abt 2 parts šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago

Thanks for waiting guys!!

Ok..........I was meant to ahve enough time to write this up.......but I just got kinda caught up in things!!

This is a little rushed so sorry for the lame part.........I'll try to update again tomorrow!šŸ˜›

BTW...........This is dedicated to Sudhu, Jiggu, and Shafu........if they ahdn't frequently pestered and blackmailed me, I wouldn't have updated today!!šŸ˜³šŸ˜†

B: How about this one?

Pia looked up from the magazine she had been flicking through and pulled a face at the beige churidaar Bani held in her hands…

P: Yeah…if you're planning to go to a mothers meeting…

Bani raised her eyebrow as Pia sighed and moved her out the way, before rummaging through her cupboard…after a few minutes she gave a satisfied smile as she pulled out a light black sari, with a small amount of silver handiwork on the pallu and border…

B: But Pia, are you sure?

Bani looked at it sceptically as Pia thrust it in to her hands…

P: Believe me Di…it's perfect…you'll blow them of their feet!

B: But the blouse…it's all doris and…

P: And I'll tie them!!…now come on before you get late for that meeting…jiju will be here soon!!

Overriding all of Bani's protests, Pia pushed her sister in to the bathroom and shut the door…

P: I'm just going to check on Abhay…I'll be back soon!

*******

10 minutes later…

Pia quietly closed the door to the nursery behind her, careful not to wake Abhay up who had just fallen asleep…checking the time, she was about to make her way back to Bani's room when she was stopped by Raashi…

R: Pia…Have you seen Bani aunty anywhere?

P: She's in her room Raashi, getting ready for that Puna meeting with jiju…actually, I was meant to helper with the doris of her blouse…you know how Di is!

Suddenly Rasshi's eyes fell on Jai who had just stepped in to the house, the phone glued to his ear…immediately a plan flashed across her mind and she gave a grin as she stopped Pia by taking a hold of her arm…

R: Wait Pia…I have an idea!

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R: Hey Jai uncle!

Jai looked up from his mobile and gave a warm smile to Raashi as she walked up to him…

J: How are you feeling?

R: I'm fine uncle…I just needed a favour…actually, Bani aunty needs some help and everyone else is busy…I would have gone, but all those stairs…you know what Ranveer is like…so if you could…

Jai grinned and patted Raashi's cheek…

J: Of course…Ranveer's already having a bad day and I love my life to much than to get on the bad side of him…

Raashi laughed and watched Jai as he took the stairs two at a time towards Bani's room…congratulating herself on her brainwave, Raashi headed towards the kitchen to celebrate her victory with some much needed chocolate ice-cream…

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B: Pia!…Uffo…thank God you're here…help me with this please!!

Jai slowly closed the door behind him, and couldn't hep but stare as he saw a half dressed Bani standing in front of the mirror, while struggling with doris of the blouse…her hair was thrown in front of her right shoulder, giving him a full view of her back, and the sight of her bare waist in the reflection of the mirror caught his attention…

B: Pia…?!

The sound of her voice broke Jai out of his reverie, and he inched closer to tie the two doris…as he removed them carefully from her hands, his fingers brushed against hers and Bani froze as she felt a tingling sensation throughout her whole body…holding her breath, her eyes shot up, only to drown in his, which were looking at her intently…his close proximity caused a blush to creep up her neck, and with his cologne overpowering her senses, Bani soon found herself leaning slightly against him with her head tilted back, lying on his shoulder…

Not once taking his gaze of her, Jai leant down and nuzzled her shoulder gently as his fingers curled around her arms, moving steadily down wards until they found the bare expanse of her waist…

Bani felt her heart pounding against her chest as his lips trailed softly across her shoulder before moving up the column of her neck and coming to a rest inches in front of her face…her hands clutched the lapels of his jacket as his roaming fingers burnt her bare skin, and his warm breath caressed her cheek…

Trying to steady herself, Bani attempted to move away, but as her face turned, she felt her breath catch in her throat as his lips clashed against hers, with a deep fervour which left her mind reeling…

He broke away, gasping for breath as his fingers trailed down her neck and softly circled her shoulder, which had somehow become exposed…with a moan, Bani ran her fingers through his hair and pulled him closer, drawing his lips against hers and gladly allowing her body to be pulled in to him by his eager hands…

*ring - ring**ring…*

At the sound of his mobile ringing, Bani seemed to come to her senses and pulled away…her eyes were open wide in shock, and pushing Jai away, she ran in to the bathroom and leant against the closed door, breathing heavily as the past few minutes flashed across her mind…

Trying to control her heart beating wildly against her chest, Bani walked over to the sink and glanced at herself in the mirror…her hair which had been neatly combed was a mess, her cheeks were flushed, and her blouse had somehow come loose…with shaky hands, Bani let the tap run and allowed cold water to wash over her skin, with only one though running through her mind…

B: God….How did that happen?!!

D: Bani Puthar…good you came down…here, have breakfast!!

Bani gave a small smile and took a seat between Raashi and Mausi, trying her best to avoid Jai's gaze even though she could feel it burning through her…

B: Raashi…is there a spare car I can take with me to the meeting?

Raashi put down her cup of chocolate milk and pretended to look confused…

R: Why Bani aunty?…Aren't you and Jai uncle going to the same meeting?!

Anu took a seat in front of Bani and giggled…

A: Don't worry Bani mami…our Jai uncle doesn't bite!!

B: He does more than bite…

Bani thought wryly…but wisely chose not to say that out loud…instead she focused on her breakfast, but couldn't help feeling a little apprehensive about what would happen later on…

*********

J: Damn…

Bani got out of the car and hugged her arms as she walked up to Jai…

B: What happened?!

Jai slammed the hood of the car shut and ran his fingers through his already dishevelled hair…Bani had to look away to stop herself from starting something…

J: Not sure…will need a mechanic…but at this time…

His words were interrupted by the mad ringing of Banis mobile…noting Raashi's name flashing on the screen. Bani turned around and answered it…

R: Hi Bani mami!!...how was the meeting?

B: The meeting was fine Raashi…but the car just broke down and I don't think we'll be getting home soon!!

Raashi found it extremely hard to make her voice sound normal when in reality she wanted to jump up and down with happiness…

R: Oh…umm…that's bad Bani mami…is Jai uncle there…I might be able to help you…

A little confused, Bani turned round and handed the phone to Jai who had been leaning against the car watching her carefully…a little flustered by his gaze, she turned away and pretended to gaze at the trees…

A few minutes later, Jai hung up and reached in the car to take out his mobile and after locking it; he gently took a hold of Bani's elbow and started walking…

B: Wait…Jai, where are we going?

J: Ranveer and Raashi have a small farmhouse nearby…we can spend the night there…

Bani simply nodded and allowed herself to be led by him, secretly enjoying his grasp on her arm…

******

Half an hour later…

Bani ran in to the house, closely followed by Jai who was soaked to the skin, just like her…she shivered as her sari stuck uncomfortably against her waist and closed her eyes, a little afraid at the sound of thunder outside…the frequent flashes of lightning were the only things that brightened up the dark house for a few seconds…

Brushing the water of his face, Jai walked up to a light switch and tried to turn the lights on…Bani heard a small 'click', but nothing happened…

J: Looks like there's no electricity…I'll just go and get some candles…

Bani opened her mouth to stop him, but before she could say anything, he had brushed past her in search of candles…

A few minutes later, and Jai had still not returned…shivering, Bani pulled her sari tightly around her and jumped at the sound of thunder…gulping, she called out for Jai…she couldn't take this any longer…

B: Jai..?

Jai…Jai…Jai…

The lone word echoed around the empty hallway, but no reply came…fear clutching her heart, Bani took a step deeper in to the darkness and repeated his name…

B: Jai!!

Still no reply…

Not knowing what to do, Bani hurried in the direction where Jai had headed a good 15 minutes ago…

As she clambered up the stairs, she froze as she heard a loud creek behind her…a few seconds later there was another rumbling of thunder and Bani frantically Bani rushed up the remaining steps and ran blindly until she hit something solid…before she fell down…

J: Uff…

Bani opened her eyes and looked at Jai's face illuminated by the moonlight…she was lying on top of him while he was on what seemed like a bed…

Worried, Jai placed a hand on her cheek…

J: Bani…what happened…

Blood pounding in her ears, and her breathing ragged with fear, Bani shut her eyes tightly and buried her face into Jai's chest…

Lame I know!!.............sorry guys!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
lame?! LAME?!! nibbles...that was AMAZING!!!!!!!! šŸ‘ for a change, i can actually stand pia!

and jai 😳 that was awesome hun!!! loved it! 😃

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