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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghasinha

when r u going to update???????


i will try soon...where i live there is a snow storm 😔
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CHAPTER 14

MADHU: What do you want?

Mr. Avinesh started to walk towards Madhu, he circled around her whispering "What do you think I want Miss Mallik".

Madhu stared back at Mr. Avinesh with a piercing look " how would I know, I don't really enjoy guessing games so you might as well just say what it is you want."

Mr. Avinesh started laughing as he started to come closer to Madhu; so close that Madhu can now feel his breath on her neck.

Madhu: Mr. Avinesh I will advise you to maintain your distance, my patience is running thin.

Mr. Avinesh can clearly see that Madhu was very agitated and getting extremely angry.

Mr. Avinesh: Calm down Miss Mallik. I will not deny that I have an interest in you, but I will make it so that you will come to me willingly. And as for what I want in return for the 20 lakts I don't quite know yet, so I've decided that you will give me 3 wishes.

Madhu: What? 3 wishes? Do I look like some genie to you?

Mr. Avinesh : (devilish smile) Don't worry the 3 things that I will ask of you will not be damaging to your dignity or self-respect.

Madhu is now confused as ever while Mr. Avinesh was having the time of his life.

Madhu: So what are the 3 things that you want me to do?

Mr. Avinesh: I don't know yet. When I feel that I want something from you at that specific moment I will tell you. Don't worry I will never tell you to go kill or die or anything like that. It will be things that you're able to do.

Madhu: So you're saying for the 20 lakts all I would have to do is to grant you 3 requests; and that these requests will not injure my dignity or self-respect.

Mr. Avinesh: Yes. Do we have a deal?

Madhu was now thinking long and hard. She really needed the money to save Trish but could she trust Mr. Avinesh? He did say that the 3 things he would ask of her would not go against her dignity or her self-respect. Madhu felt that she had no other choice.

Madhu: We have a deal.

Mr. Avinesh came close wanting to caress Madhu's face but she stepped back and turned before he could.

Mr. Avinesh: Hm. Well I guess we need to hurry to make to Mumbai by midnight.

Madhu turned to face Mr. Avinesh. She walked up to him and looked into his eyes,

" Mr. Avinesh let me make this clear for you. I don't care if you have an interest in me. All I care is the 20 lakts for my sister. I will uphold my end of the bargain but let me far warn you. I do not intend to be anyone's 'toy" and if you push me I will push back. So as long as you know where you stand lets head back to Mumbai. Oh. And one last thing, I absolutely have no interest in you."

Mr. Avinesh was now driven to prove Madhu wrong. He will get her. And she will submit. The harder Madhu was to fight him the more he longed for her.

Back In Mumbai

RK: Bittuji, do we have any information at all to whom might be helping Madhu.

Bittuji: No chief.

RK: Well I guess we will know in another half hour.

Bittuji: Chief, why did you ask to meet them here?

RK: This is a special place Bittuji. A place that Madhu and I will never forget. The game that I thought ended here will once again begin here. It's only fair to see all the players' right?

Bittuji: Yes chief.

Suddenly RK gazed upon Madhu walking towards him. She was so beautiful, no longer wearing her traditional clothing but instead a simple western white button shirt with rolled up sleeves and denim jeans. The night wind was blowing her beautiful black hair and the rays of the moon glistened her flawless skin. But then he saw the male figure walking side by side with his biwi. RK in shocked. What the hell, Mr. Avinesh??!!. Now RK was starting to put things together. Of course only Mr. Avinesh would have the means to hide Madhu without Bittuji being able to track her down. But why? RK thought.

Madhu walks up to a stunned RK.

Madhu: Good evening Mr. Rishab Kundra. And I believe you already know Mr. Avinesh.

Mr. Avinesh: Good evening Mr. Kundra.

RK: Well this is quite a surprise. Mr. Avinesh I thought you were quite a busy man, didn't know you had time to play with other people's wives.

Mr. Avinesh: hahhha did I miss something? I believe this is Miss Mallik not Mrs. Kundra.

RK was very angry inside but of course he was always good at maintaining his composure.

RK: Well that was all your doing was it not?

Mr. Avinesh: It was a business transaction with Miss Mallik for her cooperation in my new film. What she did with the 40 lakts is not of my concern.

RK: Film?..the same film that I signed on.

Mr. Avinesh: Correct.

RK: I find it odd that you would personally pick Miss Mallik to star in your most precious film. I don't remember her ever acting.

RK found it very difficult to address Madhu as Miss Mallik. It was killing him inside, but this was now a game among 3 and he was sure going to come out the winner.

Mr. Avinesh: Ah yes. What drawn me to Miss Mallik was her beauty at that night of the house party. And as for the acting I personally set up a place on my private island for Miss Mallik to train with the best teachers.

RK could not fathom the thought that his biwi has been on a private island with another man. He looked at Madhu and saw a smile on her face. Madhu was enjoying this whole debacle between Mr. Avinesh and RK. She could tell that RK must be furious with her but was unable to show it in front of Mr. Avinesh. The very place that RK had hurt her was now the place that she could see anguish in RK's eyes.

Madhu: Enough of the explanations. Here is the 20 lakts. Where is Trishna?

RK: Impatient are we now. Don't even want to catch up on things EX-BIWI? Well Trishna is still waiting at the RK mansion. You can go and get her.

Madhu: Fine. So I guess this is over?

RK walked up and whispered into Madhu's ear " Over?...it has just begun EX-BIWI"

Madhu looked back at RK and smile whispering back in his ear " oh EX pati-dev it never really ended."

Mr. Avinesh: Miss Mallik would you like me to take you to RK mansion to pick your sister?

But before Madhu could answer

RK: That is not necessary. I will give her a lift since it is my house.

RK walked up close to Mr. Avinesh and gave out his hand " have a good evening Mr. Avinesh we will probably be seeing more of eachother". Mr Avinesh extended his hand to RK and RK than pulled Mr. Avinesh just close enough for him to hear " do not try to steal something that does not belong to you."

Mr. Avinesh was not deterred by RK's threat instead he retorted back "Finders keepers Mr. Kundra."

Mr. Avinesh: Well Miss Mallik it is up to you if you would like me to escort you or just go with Mr. Kundra.

Madhu stared back at the two men.

Madhu: Oh. I thought you two would never ask seeing that you were so busy deciding for me.

Madhu slowly walked towards the two men and faced Mr. Avinesh " Mr. Avinesh you can go ahead and return home. I am not a child that I need you to escort me. Besides, once I get my sister I will return with her to the chawl."

RK was delighted to hear that Madhu was going to return to the mansion because Trishna was no longer there. He had instructed Bittuji to let her go once Madhu arrived to meet him. He will now have this chance to punish his biwi for her bad behavior.

RK: Then it's settled. Shall we EX-BIWI?

Madhu could tell that RK was more than delighted that she had chose to go back with him, as if he had won this round with Mr. Avinesh.

Madhu nodded goodbye to a very disappointed Mr. Avinesh and walk towards RK

" Do not forget who your opponent really is EX-Pati dev".

RK : AHhaaan.

In the car RK could not stop starring at Madhu. She was quiet. She didn't even once take a glimpse at him even though they were sitting so close together. But for right now RK will remain silent too. He will not unleash until he is able to get her alone in his territory. But for now he will sit next to her and breath in her jasmine scent. Everytime the wind would blow through the window and her hair would softly brush against his face, he wanted to just grab her and hold her tight and to yell at her for making him go insane.

Madhu was starring out the car window to purposely avoid RK's gaze. Thanks to her acting lessons she was able to control her body in order to hide her true feelings. Madhu was very nervous. He heart racing as she can feel RK so close. It just reminded her of the night at the ball how he pressed his lips against hers. She knew that she needed to hurry and get Trishna and get far a way from RK as soon as possible.

As they finally arrived at the mansion RK pointed that Trishna is waiting in the entertainment room. As Madhu walked towards the entertainment room RK suddently locked the door behind them. Madhu then fractically looked around to see Trishna nowhere in sight. But by the time she turned around to face RK he had grabbed her hands and pinned her against the wall.

RK: How dare you! And with Mr. Avinesh!

RK squeezed Madhu's wrist even tighter and pushed his face even closer to Madhu

" You are mine BIWI!!"

Before Madhu could even say anything RK had pressed his lips hard upon hers. He was so strong that the kiss was draining all her strength. She tried to struggle but that just made him tighten his grip. His kissed started to make her feel as if he wanted to ravage her; Madhu now lost all control of herself. She was no longer fighting back. And as soon as RK could feel no more resistance his kiss began to soften but Madhu grabbed RK's hair and kissed him passionately. RK's desire now taking over started to kiss down Madhu's neck, kisses so strong that Madhu lifted her neck and gave a moan that drove RK crazy. As RK started to unbutton Madhu's shirt Madhu grabbed RK's collar and whispered " Hmm'so you did miss me Ex- pati dev'but I think you should stop! Because don't you dare forget those words of that fateful night. Let me remind you " how could I superstar RK ever fall for a simple chawl girl."

Madhu softly pushed RK off of her and smiled. It was nice seeing you again Ex-pati dev. But I think I should return home. It's not appropriate for an unmarried woman to stay over a man's house is it?

Madhu's words stung RK. She was bitterly reminding him that she no longer was his biwi, but instead Madhubala Shamsher Mallik.

RK grabbed Madhu's waist and pulled her towards him " nothing can ever free you from me, not a contract, not even your Mr. Avinesh. But for tonight lets put our fight on pause. We can continue this tomorrow."

Madhu: Tomorrow? What makes you think you will see me tomorrow?

RK: Did you forget that we will be co-stars in the future? I think we need to work on our chemistry ( devilish smile)

Madhu: And how do you propose we do that?

RK: I can't ruin the surprise now can I biwi''

Madhu still in RK's arms gave him a goodbye peck " well, I thought our chemistry was pretty good just awhile ago, but if you think YOU need to work on it then I guess I'm willing to help."

As RK bid farewell to this Biwi " ahhh'.biwi biwi'I can't wait till tomorrow, lets see how long you can distance yourself away from me."

Madhu starring out the window of RK's car " pati-dev, the more you want me, the more I'll make you suffer. I can't wait for your first move tomorrow."

Back at Mr. Avinesh's mansion, sitting alone in the dark crushing broken glass in his hand" so the game has begun, you did not choose me Miss Mallik but that will soon change'I swear to it!!!"


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Edited by amieo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh man this is intense! Two men fighting for the same woman! This is so exciting. fantastic update! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank god madhu chose RK and hope she continues to choose him and not Mr Avinesh he can go to hell and come back for all I care I only care about RK and madhu choosing each other over anyone
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update... but i think madhu have to choose avinash over dat stupid rk
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm now madhu also know rk's feelings. 3 of them playing their ganes, but cactus don't know rk. noone can defeat him., cactus can try hard nyc update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohhh god I think I found my another fav ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely updt...very nice... I hate Avinash...hope he rots in hell...how dare he make a move on Madhu...she only belongs to RK and no one has the right to even see her... forget about getting interested...bloody moron!!!... hope to see rishbala in next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update.I hope that jerk Avinesh fails in his plans to separate Rishbala.He would definately try to use the 3 requests to break them apart...his plans should backfire badly and end up bringing Rishbala closer

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