ARSHI SS: Heart's A Mess NOTE* PG 146 15/4* - Page 39

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Posted: 13 years ago
I love your updates. All of the are perfect. I hope you feel better soon.
I love that little by little they are getting to know eachother. I love how arnav is hopeful about their relationship. He usually is the one detached. so to see that is I think very fresh idea. I love it.
And finally I love the fact that you write your stories for you, not for people also you appreciate feedbacks, you're not fased when its less. I think that's commendable.keep up the awesomness:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!! You updated again!! Thank u thank u so much!!!

Awesome update...

As you said.. their relationship is realistic...

I love that,..

Cant wait to read the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
You have updated chapter 8 as well! Noticed it after posting a comment on chapter 7. The update was adorable, Arnav wanting to cook breakfast for them when he doesn't even known how to cook was so sweet and goes to show he wants to spend time with her as much as the time permits due to the busy schedule both are entitled to. Arnav has already started thinking of having kids with Khushi I see😆 the way he disclosed that was very convenient😆

Khushi dictating Arnav how to scramble eggs and prepare toast was a nice scene and kind of domestic as well😊 Khushi is an orphan right, but she doesn't want reveal that as yet. Arnav's invented way of thanking is really cute. Again you have ended the chapter on a very sweet note, the way Arnav carried Khushi and settled her in the bed was a perfect closure to the chapter😊 again eagerly waiting for the next update!


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Posted: 13 years ago
Just came across your ff. Loving reading it. Love your Arnav. Khushi i a sweetheart, such a dedicated doctor. I myself had an open heart surgery a short while ago and developed all the complications possible. I have a very rare heartproblem and am still in and out of hospital. So can definitely relate to your Khushi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww he was so cute waiting for her this long
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was a great update
he came to see her as soon as he got back
and he even waited for her to finish her shift
he is great

so is Anjali a heart patient?
I thought Arnav was the one sick
can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update!
Not one of the best but definitely perfect for the time...
Loved it!
Making breakfast eating together sigh...this is just beautiful!!!!;D
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one plz pm e wanna readmore
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Posted: 13 years ago
unres-ed my post on page 57 :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi there ,
I came across this fabulous story today and gosh you are briliant.
From the first chapter till the latest update the tempo was full on.
Especially the first meeting between arnav and khushi I swear I was having a brain freeze wondering which one of them will bow down first and it was such a refreshing change to see arnav taking that step.
Then all the cute moments between them along with the date and after filed with really intelligent humour were great to read.
Finally in the latest update can't believe he waited for her all those hours. No wonder khushi is overwhelmed considering her past.Turns out arnav will be her opening to good times!
Please do pm me your future updates.
Thank you

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