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shivi77 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: desigirl_taarey

loved it all

esp loved the song and how you portrayed thier feelings thru the song
and the end! omg rey hit by the car just when he remembers!
cnt wait for the next update

thanks i m glad u likd the update and even the song selection...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
[QUOTE=vibhaaa] i read all parts. shivi u re a amazing writer⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.
made me seechless. it was so touchy n emotional. u should write a book. we re ready to buy it. u re gifted such a talanted writing n imaginatin.
last part was😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭.
finally rey in india n he have flash back.
hate kriya😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
taani feeling her hearbeat.
the song was perfect 4 taarey .
finally taarey met.
hope rey is ok n he get his memory back.
cant wait to see taarey togather.omg omg
pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update ASAP.
thanks 4 pm me ndo pm me.
omg omg ...
such a heart touching comment and trust me if i ever write a book or something then u ll be the first person to whom i ll hand over the copy personally...
luv u for such an amazing and inspiring comment
i cant explain it in words that how lucky i m feeling ...thank u so much
😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
Nichuss thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
3 people life affected...


hmmm...intresting ...

will check all chaps n comment back..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awsome story loved each and every update very much i read it all today & really wondering wat was there in that 'E-mail' wich changed their lives poor taarey has to go through a lot but but but finally they met loved it and rey's memory is back 😊 and also met with an accident 😭 how much more they hav to suffer. N ya i hav sent buddy request pls accept n pm me ur next updates pls cont.soon want too know wat happens next?
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Posted: 13 years ago
i was jst having tears in my eyes..jst luvd it...plzz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
didi wen vil u update next chapter???cant wait ...plzz update asap..plzz plzzz plzzz didi..
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Posted: 13 years ago
res(i'll read all parts in one go n then comment)
unres
i read all your parts now!
you are an incredibly awesome writer
i loved all your updates
finally taarey has come face to face n taani atleast knows that rey was never at fault its just that
kriya!😡 i mean how could she do that yaar?iss ff ki kriya pe to mujhe d3 ki avp se bhi zyada gussa aa raaha hai even shivam bhi isse accha tha(though i m a truly lavin fan 😳)
you expressed the pain so well i mean i was so involved reading it u know i never like something which is too sad or something but now after reading this ff i really adore the way you have shown sadness.
just a suggestion -plz viaan ke liye koi heroine le aao he was always there with taani throughout,never cheated her,taani ka usne bahut khayal rakha n on top of it taarey aaj uski wajahse mile ,wo chahta to wo advantage le sakta tha uss shaadi ka but he didn't ,i actually felt bad for taarey but still i felt more bad for him
i think he deserves true love 😊
Edited by nuckts - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Your story is outstanding , supereb... No words..
Thanx for pm i read all part ... All are super awesome..

This story is very emotional..
Selfish kriya 😡
taarey love story is very emotional..
Plz post next part and pm me plz..
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 3 n 4

"MERI ZINDAGI MEIN TUMHARI PLACE KOI NAHI KE SAKTA. MERI GF, MERI WIFE, MERE BACHON KI MOM SIRF TUM BANOGI TAANI ,ONLY U ."

wow... just waiting for the day in D3...

when rey says this to taani...

future tho bathadhiya...now...the real confession...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys i must say here comes the most awaited chapter 10...
feel the love

CHAPTER 10

TAANI LOST HER SENSES. THE PERSON FOR WHOM SHE HAD PRAY EACH AND EVERY MOMENT OF HER LIFE WAS IN FRONT OF HER ,BLEEDING LIKE HELL, UNCONSIOUS.

HE WAS THE SAME PERSON WHO LEFT HER ON HER WEDDING DAY BUT SOMEHOW HER HEART BLEEDED SEEING HIM IN THIS CONDITION.

SUDDENLY SHE GOT OUT OF HER DILEMMA AND RUSHED HIM TO THE HOSPITAL WITH THE HELP OF HER DRIVER.

SHE KEPT HIS HEAD IN HER LAPS , AND WAS CONSTANTLY TALKING TO HIM.

TAANI:REY, KYA AAP MUJHSE ITNI NAFRAT KARTE HAI KI MUJHE DEKHNA HI NAHI CHAATE?

BOLO NA REY!!!

PLS REY OPEN UR EYES''''.

SHE WAS WEEPING BADLY , HER BODY WAS SHIVERING AND SHE WAS DEEPLY TERRIFIED AND TENSED ABOUT WHAT WAS GONNA HAPPEN.

SHE REACHED THE HOSPITAL . REY WAS MADE TO LAY ON THE STRETCHER .

HE WAS RUSHED TO THE THE OPERATION THEATRE. BUT IN THE MEANWHILE HE DID NOT LEAVE TAANI'S HAND.

THE DOCTORS STARTED THE OPERATION AND TAANI WAS UNDER A SHOCK.

SHE COULD NOT BELIEVE THAT HOW CAN GOD BE SO CRUEL TO HER?

SHE PLEADED TO GOD FOR MERCY.

HER EYES LOOKED DROWNED IN PAIN AND SORROW.HER HEART WAS BEATING VERY FAST AND SHE WAS COLD LIKE A DEAD BODY. HER SOUL WAS CRYING.

SHE FORGOT WHATEVER REY DID TO HER AND WAS JUST PRAYING FOR HIS LIFE''''''..

SHE WANTED TO SEE HIM FINE AND IN HIGH SPIRIT''''''..

SUDDENLY HER PHONE RANG.

IT WAS VIAAN''''''''''

SHE PICKED UP THE CALL BUT COULD NOT SAY ANYTHING'''''.

VIAAN:HEY TAANI WHERE R U?

TAANI COULD NOT CONTROL AND STARTED CRYING BADLY ''''''.

VIAAN: TAANI , KYA HUA?

Y R U CRYING?

KAHAN HO TUM?

BUT TAANI WAS NOT IN A STATE TO ANSWER ANY OF HIS QUESTION.

IT WAS LIKE SHE HAS LOST EVERYTHING FOR THE SECOND TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HER BREATHING BECAME HEAVY AND SHE WAS DEEPLY IN PAIN.

VIAAN:SEE TAANI , NOW U R MAKING ME SCARED PLS BATAO DAM IT!!!!!!!

WHERE R U?

HE WAS SCARED. HE HAD NO CLUE ABOUT WHAT HAD HAPPENED?

VERY HEINOUS THOUGHTS WERE HAUNTING HIS MIND?

TANNI SPOKE UP WITH A LOT OF DIFFICULTY

TAANI:VIAAN''''.VIAAN(SHE WAS SOBBING)''''.WO REY''''..

VIAAN:REY????????????

TAANI:ACCIDENT''''..VIAAN PLS JALDI AAO''''''

UNHE BACHA LO VIAAN PLSSS

AND SHE AGAIN STARTED CRYING'''''

THIS TIME HER PAIN BECAME MORE INTENSE.

VIAAN:TAANI , TAANI PLS CONTROL URSELF AND TELL ME WHAT HAS HAPPENED?

TAANI SOMEHOW CONTROLL ED HER EMOTIONS AND TELLS VIAAN WHATEVER HAPPENED.

VIAAN DISCONNECTS THE CALL AND TELLS EVERYTHING TO SWAYAM AND SHARON.

THEY WERE CONFUSED AT WHAT WAS REY DOING IN MUMBAI AND THAT TO AT THE EVENT BUT THAT WAS NOT THE TIME TO TALK ABOUT ALL THESE THINGS.

ALL THE THREE LEAVE FOR THE HOSPITAL BUT SUDDENLY VIAAN STOPS AND ASKS SWARON TO LEAVE AND TELLS THEM THAT HE LL FOLLOW .

VIAAN KNEW EVERYTHING ABOUT KRIA, SO WENT TO HER AND DICTATED THE WHOLE INCIDENT TO HER.

SHE WAS DEEPLY SHOCKED , TEARS FILLED HER EYES.

SHE REALLY GOT IMPULSIVE AND WITHOUT EVEN WASTING A SECOND THEY LEFT FOR THE HOSPITAL.

THEY REACHED THE HOSPITAL ALMOST AT THE SAME TIME.

SWAYAM AND SHARON WERE SHOCKED TO SEE KRIA, BUT KRIA DID NOT EVEN LOOK AT THE TWO.

SHE RUSHED TO THE RECEPTION AND THEN TO THE CORRIDOR.

TAANI WAS STANDING AT ONE END OF THE CORRIDOR AND KRIA CAME RUSHING FROM THE OTHER. BOTH THE LADIES WERE NUMB AT SEEING EACH OTHER.

THEIR BODIES FROZE AND THEIR HEARTS SANK.

EACH STEP TOWARDS TAANI WAS MAKING KRIA GUILTY ON HER DEEDS.

VIAAN AND SWARON REACHED TAANI. SWAYAM HUGGED HER BUT TAANI DID NOT RESPOND.

SHE WAS LOST AND ALL HER PAST MEMORIES CAME SPANKING DOWN ON HER.

KRIA REACHED THE OPERATION THEATRE AND LOST HER EMOTIONAL BALANCE, SHE FELL DOWN ON HER KNEES.

SHE COULD NOT SEE IN TAANI'S EYES

KRIA(CRIED IN DESPAIR) :OH GOD MERE GALTI KI PUNISHMENT PLSSS REY KO MAT DENA!!!!!!!!!

JO BHI KIYA WHO MAINE KIYA USME UNKI KOI GALTI NAHI THI'''''''..

EVERYONE WAS SHOCKED LISTENING BUT NOBODY REACTED AT IT WAS NOT THE RIGHT TIME OR RIGHT PLACE.

DOCTORS CAME OUT AND INFORMED THAT THE OPERATION WAS SUCCESFUL BUT STILL THEY CANT SAY ANYTHING BEFORE MORNING.

THE WHOLE NIGHT PASSED ,NEITHER DID TAANI CRY NOR DID SHE EXPRESSED HER ANGER OR DISGUST. SHE WAS SITTING HELPLEESLY JUST LIKE A STONE.

VIAAN INFORMED SWARON THAT HE CALLED REY AND KRIA TO MUMBAI, AND EVERYTHING WAS PRE-PLANNED, THEY WERE SHOCKED BUT HAD NO REASON TO DOUBT VIAAN'S INTEGRITY, AS HE HAD SUPPORTED TAANI TROUGH THE WORST PHASE OF HER LIFE.

THE DOCTORS CAME AND CHECKED REY IN THE MORNING. ON COMING OUT'''''.

DOC:THERE IS A GOOD NEWS FOR ALL OF U,MR. REYANSH IS OUT OF DANGER AND ONE OF U CAN MEET HIM.

KRIA STOOD UP TO MEET HIM.

WHILE TAANI STOOD UP TO LEAVE THE HOSPITAL AS REY'S SAFETY WAS THE ONLY REASON THAT HAD

FORCED HER TO TOLERATE KRIA'S PRESENCE AROUND HER.

SHE WAS ABOUT TO GO WHEN THE DOCTOR TURNED AND ANNOUCED

DOC:WAISE WHO IS MS. TAANI?

EVERYONE WAS SHOCKED TO HEAR TAANI'S NAME.

TAANI STOPPED AND CAME FORWARD.

DOC:U LOOK TERRIBLY WEEK, SEEMS LIKE U DIDN'T HAVE ANYTHING SINCE YESTERDAY.

U WERE PRAYING FOR UR LOVE'''''..

DON'T WORRY THE PATIENT WAS ALSO TAKING UR NAME , THROUGHOUT HIS UNCOUSCINESS'''''..

EVERYONE WAS SHOCKED. TAANI WAS SHAKEN'''''.

DOC: I ADVICE U SHOULD GO INSIDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IT WOULD BE DANGEROUS IF SOMEONE ELSE GO.

TAANI WAS STUNNED AND SO WERE THE OTHERS. KRIA COULD BELIEVE WHAT JUST HAPPENED?

ON THE DOCTOR'S ADVICE, TAANI WENT INSIDE THE ROOM.

THE OTHERS WENT TO THE SOUND DETECTOR ROOM FROM WHERE THEY COULD SEE AND HEAR WHAT TAANI AND REY WERE TALKING.

TAANI ENTERED THE ROOM WITH GREAT COURAGE.

SHE WAS NOT JUST CONFUSED AT REY'S REACTION BUT ALSO IN A GREAT DILEMA OVER THE PRESENT SITUATION.

SHE WENT NEAR THE BED ,HER HEART WAS CRYING AS SHE COULD NOT SEE REY IN PAIN . SHE WANTED TO HUG HIM,ENSURE HIM THAT HE LL BE ALRIGHT BUT HER PAST DID NOT ALLOW HER TO DO SO.

REY OPENED HIS EYES AND SAW TAANI, HE SAW TEARS IN HER EYES.

HE SMILED AT TAANI.

EVERYTHING THAT REY WAS DOING WAS MAKING TAANI NUMB AND FALL FOR HIM.

HE ASKED TAANI FOR HER HAND''''''..

TAANI HAD NO CLUE ABOUT HIS INTENTIONS''''''..

HE SAT TAKING TAANI'S SUPPORT , SHE BENT DOWN TO PLACE A CUSHION BEHIND REY .SHE WAS TOO CLOSE TOO HIM, THEY COULD FEEL EACH OTHERS BREATH.

REY VERY CALMY PLACED A PECK AT TAANI'S CHEEK, SHE WAS LOST. A TEAR CAME ROLLING DOWN HER CHEEK.

KRIA WAS WATCHING ALL THIS WITH THE OTHERS BUT SHE WAS ALSO LEAST AWARE OF THE PRESENT SITUATION.

REY:HEY TAANI!!!!!!!!!!

TUM PLEASE MAT RO .

MAIN THEEK HUN''''''.

MAIN JAANTA HUN TUM MERE LIYE DAR GAYI THI THAT'S Y U R CRYING, BUT BABY I M FINE.

HE HUGGED TAANI TIGHTLY BUT TAAANI COULD NOT RESPOND SHE WAS UNABLE TO UNDERSTAND GOD'S FOUL PLAY.

REY:TAAANI MAIN JAANTA HUN KI KAL HUMARI SHAADI THI LEKIN YEH STUPID ACCIDENT''''''.

SUDDENLY REY'S EYE FALL ON TAANI'S SINDUR AND MANGALSUTRA''''

HE WAS SHOCKED AND TERRIFIED''''''.

REY:TAANI YEH SINDUR''''''

HIS BREATH STARTED BECOMING HEAVY'''''

HE WAS LOSING CONSCIOUSNESS'''..

THE NURSE ENTERED AND GAVE HIM AN INJECTION'''.

REY WAS STABLISED BUT TAANI'S HEART WAS MAKING IT DIFFICULT FOR HER TO UNDERSTAND THE PRESENT SITUATION.

EVEN VIAAN , SWAYAM AND SHARON WERE CONFUSED.

BUT KRIA WAS STILL, SHE UNDERSTOOD THAT NOW SHE CANT SEPARATE TAANI AND REY.

IT WAS UNDERSTOOD TO HER THAT THE LOVE INTENSITY OF TAAREY WAS BEYOND THIS WORLD.

ALL OF THEM CAME OUT.

NO ONE HAD THE INTENSITY TO TALK , BUT TAANI WAS BARING A PAIN OF SEPARATION SINCE FIVE YEARS AND WHATEVER JUST HAPPENED MADE IT DIFFICULT FOR HER TO STAY MUM.

SHE WAS IN DEEP PAIN AND ANXIETY AND NOW SHE WANTED ANSWERS TO HER QUESTIONS.

SHE WENT TO KRIA AND VERY FORCEFULLY MADE HER LOOK INTO HER EYES.

TAANI:YEH KYA HAI?

REY KO KYUN YAAD NAHI KI UNKI SHAADI TUMSE HO CHUKI HAI!!!!!!!

REY KO KYUN YAAD NAHI KI UNHONE MUJHE SHAADI KE MANDAP MEIN AKELA CHOD DIYA THA?

REY KO KYUN YAAD NAHI KI UNHONE MERE SAATH KITNA BADA DHOKA KIYA????????????

SHE WAS VERY ANGRY. HER EYES WERE RED AND SOO WAS HER FACE''

EACH WORD THAT SHE SPOKE WAS MAKING HER GO WILD IN ANGER''.

TAANI:CHUP MAT RAHO KRIA''''.

TUM TO UNKA PEHLA PYAR THI NA PHIR WO TUMHE KAISE BHUL GAYE??????

AUR WO MAIL???????

AUR PANCH SAAL PEHLE KAUSA ACCIDENT HUA THA?????

SHE WAS FURIOUS. HER PAIN , HER SUFFERINGS WERE REFLECTED IN HER VOICE.

KRIA WAS STILL LOOKING DOWN.

SHE WAS GUILTY, SHE WAS SWEATING BADLY'''

SHE WAS SHIVERING IN FEAR''''

TAANI: ANSWER ME GOT DAM IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KYUN DIYA UNHONE MUJHE DHOKA???????????

BUT BY NOW KRIA'S GUILT AND SHAME OVERPOWERED HER.

KRIA:NAHI DIYA UNHONE TUMHE DHOKA'''''''..

HAAN SAHI SUNA TUMNE TAANI, NAHI DIYA UNHONE TUMHE DHOKA

I DID ALL THIS '''''..

SAB MAINE KIYA'''''.

MAINE UNHE TUMSE DURE KIYA''''''.

AND SHE FELL DOWN''''''

SHE WAS WEEPING BADLY.

HE KEPT HER HANDS ON HER FACE AND WEPT'''..

TAANI WAS SHAKEN , SHE GENUINELY MOVED A STEP BACK''''''

KRIA 'S WORDS ECHOED IN HER EARS.

"NAHI DIYA UNHONE TUMHE DHOKA'''''''..

HAAN SAHI SUNA TUMNE TAANI, NAHI DIYA UNHONE TUMHE DHOKA

I DID ALL THIS '''''..

SAB MAINE KIYA'''''.

MAINE UNHE TUMSE DURE KIYA''''''."

SHE WAS ABOUT TO FALL WHEN VIAAN CAME AND HELD HER IN HER ARMS.

EVERYONE WAS SHOCKED BUT TAANI WAS LOST''''..

BUT SHE WAS NOT DONE, SHE HELD KRIA'S ARM TIGHTLY AND RUSHED HER OUT OF THE HOSPITAL .

SHE TOOK HER TO AN ABADON AREA NEXT TO THE HOSPITAL.

EVERYONE FOLLOWED BECAUSE THEY WERE SCARED FOR TAANI .

SHE THREW HER WITH A JERK.

SHE WAS FUMING IN ANGER.

BEFORE KRIA COULD SAY ANYTHING TAANI SLAPPED HER . SHE POURED ALL HER ANGER ON HER.

chota tha kya????????
i know u guys wont spare me on stopping at such a crucial point!!!!!!!
bt plsss zyada gussa mat hona guys
warna next update...😉

dont forget to hit the like button and comment...

plsss comment nd tel me how it was 😛

Edited by shivi77 - 13 years ago

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