Swaron Poem:Your eyes tell a different story...

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3
oh!!please di...it couldn't have been more better!!
coz this takes one to the SwaRon's lovestory ka limit!! 😳
now plz stop your natak n accept n star flaunting!!😆

haha...u r pulling my leg baby😆

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

haha...u r pulling my leg baby😆

what pulling leg di!!!😆😆😆
stop pretending low coz i know deep down even u want appreciation,that's y u r doing this nah!!!!! 😆 no worries...now since i've understood i'l STOP my satu blabbering!!😆

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Sahasra

@blithe

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

hey sahasra ...coming from u ...this appreciation means a lot...i know how honest u r while giving feedback...hehe...it was not a post..but not good enough for a poem :)

so sweet of u ...thanx for the sweet comment😳

My pleasure it is!

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Oyye how dare u called it lame... 😡
Kuch bhi ha deepi...it was superduper classy re...loved it. 😉

Especially following line
You saythe bookis closed..
Then why can't you stopme from reading it..
Everyday...in your eyes...

Edited by tejukor - 13 years ago

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swapna

@shan16

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

aaccha ok...ab tu yahi suna na chahti hai toh i will say it ...but i dnt wanted to ...coj me kabhi jhoot nahi bolti... par chal tere liye bolti hu ..."yeah it was super lame"

😉

he he 🤣

r u crazzzy ...

it super awsome peom ...direct dil ❤️ se ...

muaaah...👏

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

hey deeps
it was awesome poem yar
u beautifully portray swayam love towards sharon
nd how swayam know about her
he didn't require words to know sharons love for him
he can see her love towards him through eyes
beautiful

Edited by Suni1986 - 13 years ago

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Awesome lines beautiful poem

If this is lame then i didn't know the meaning of lame changed to beautiful.

These beautiful lines remind me the historical abandoned corridor scene of Swaron packed with powerful acting of TanHa i really miss my TanHa alot so thank you for writing this lovely poem😊

keep writing more & please Deep update your ff's if u have time😊

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Sry Deeps di fr commenting dis lte.. Shayad im d lst one.. Dat was a rly awesme poem di.. Jst fabulous.. It ws bang on Swayam's pov.. Ur first official poem i guess.. :D Nd it ws gr8.. Luvd it.. My fav lyns..
"You say u dnt luv me..
Den y do ur eyes..
Confess ur luv fr me.. COUNTLESS TYMS..."