Arhi FF: Desert Heat #3 *New Thread, pg 149!!* - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Anji...


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Comment for chapter one!


Ek baat pucho? Tumhara problem kya hai? Always putting poor Khushi in all this hardships! Hmph! First being caught in a deranged plan, then an uncaring family and separation from her lover, and now an cruel adoptive family and a unknown future!



Anywhooo... I don't think you'll tell me I'm wrong if I say that this isn't the end of Khushi problems... :(


The little cleaning girl was so insignificant, but never to Khushi! :)


Ohok! So thoda Heat dikha... but with Arnav and some chick... Either Sheetal or Lavanya... Abhi confused hoon :P LOL, that was pretty funny!


When will the Heat between our ArHi come?! I feel like the lot will happen before the two of them would met >_< Am I right or am I right?


OMG! The character you've created for Arnav just has me -




Off to read next chappy :D


Edited by Titaliya_AP - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
When the chapter started it made me feel how the Akash character is.
It makes me show that Akash is more like a snobbish king who likes to get what he gets and nobody could say no and that is what reminds me of ASR in IPKKND. I came with the assumption that you made Akash Singh Raizada = ASR and he would be the one who will be not changing into Akash at all that is for sure.

Of course I knew Shyam will be on the bad side. What could we more expect from him? 😆

When Khushi woke up and she was trying to run and than "collided with the hard chest" I sure knew who was the person. It is only one person who had the hard chest LMAO that always indicates who he is LMAO.

HE KISSED HER!! HE KISSED HER!! I READ THE PART LIKE THREE TIMES. OMFG that romantic in more of a dangerous way. It was awesome.

And when Khushi got to choose Arnav or Akash I knew she will choose Arnav but I was like OMG what if she changes her decision but when she said "Him" I knew it is Arnav.

PRECAP Hayee I am in a dreamland because of PRECAP and I loved it. It was awesome.!!!

CONGRATS for thread 3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
if ure imagining BS as ASR (who else) his beard and long hair avatar suits the character of dark prince more
way to go tina
chap 3 and thread 3. wow
frankly speaking i love arshi whatever the setting and u make them so smoldering hot that i just cant resist
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
mind blowing re 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Luved it...waiting for arhi to come closer
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
amazing update...
khushi choose arnav...
its getting more and more intresting in each update...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chappy 2 comment :D


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OMG! I just can't get over you ASR! *siiiggghhh*





His passion for his rein and his kingdom and his land is just unbelievable. Only ASR can be so dedicated, so determined... <3


I can't wait till he finally over comes this half-brother of his and his father's other family. And if Akash's mother is Manorama, there is such a difference from the show! Mamiji who helped ASR created his empire, destroyed it here! Wow!


Anyway... Khushi is such a innocent soul! I don't know what will happen... But she for sure isn't going to get married to the Singh's son... well that's what I think at least...


Uff! Shefali is just a sweet soul!


OMG! Akash Singh Raizada! Such a contrasting character to what we've seen before! I'm he just like kidnapped Khushi! And what is that... PRIZE?! Oh dear! Please tell me Arnav saves her!!!


Until then... I'm waiting for the Heat to come into play ;)


Edited by Titaliya_AP - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Ho ho ho see what I get for staying up late thanks a million loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh Akash has an aide in Shyam... Interesting!

Akash n his kingdom s so powerful... Akash says he has got d support of d whole Rajasthani kingdoms. How is Arnav going to win over them? Oh so his support has increased now...


Arnav s so restless... Heart calls?

They meet! Vow!

Loved Arnav's concern for her when he asked if they hurt her.

Khushi doesn't have answers as to why she did what she did. Pure instincts...

Now she will stay with Arnav?

Thanks for d pm...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was nothing short of brilliant! Very well written. *thumbs up*

First kiss already?? :O I want Arnav's POV...why did he kiss her? Only to make sure that she didn't shout? Well, I have my doubts! :P ;)

I TOTALLY agree about Akshay being able to carry off a negative role. He can kick ass! ;)

I'm eager to read further. Keep it up! :D

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