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At KM…….

Geet Dadi ko phone karthi…..kahin ghar toh nahi chale gaye?

Dadi tells that they have not come there…..

Geet: Dadi mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, mein Maan ko call karthi hoon

Dadi: Geet bte itna kyun darthe hai aap? Who bas aathe  hi honge

Geet: nahi Dadi, mujhe kuch teek nahi kagtha

Dadi: aap pehle shaanth ho jayiye, hum abhi aathe hai

Geet: teek hai Dadi, aap jaldhi aayiye

Dadi: haan bte, aap himmat rakhiye, Neha abhi aathi hi hogi

Lekhin Dadi ko bhi thoda dar lagtha hai, shyad Dadi ya Ranno ko bhi unkke saath jaana chahiye tha..

Ab Maan poochenge toh hum unkko kya jawaab denge?

Ranno: Dadi kya baat hai? aap itna pareshaan kyun ho?

Dadi: Ranno, Neha ka kuch patha nahi chal raha hai, woh Geet ke saath nahi hai

Ranno: kya? Kaise? Ye ladhki bhi na, kab apne zameendariyon ko samjegi? Babaji hummari  bachi ka rakhsha karna, Dadi ye Geet aaisa hi hai, itna laparwa kaise ho sakthi? Ye toh meri galthi hai, mujhe ussko akhela jaana hi nahi dena chahiye, par ussne hi kaha aap Neha ke saath ghar pe raha, phir woh  Neha ko saath kyun lekhe gayi? Ab damadji ko hum kya muh dikhayenge?

Dadi: aap Geet ko kyun doshi banathe hai?  Geet pehle hi bahut dari hui hai, chaliye , hum chalkke dekhthe hai

Ranno: ye Handaji ko bhi abhi Hoshiarpur jaana hai kya?

Dadi aur Ranno bhi hospital chale jaathe hai….

Geet calls Maan….

Geet: Maan….aap jaldhi aao

Maan: Geet ,kya hua ? tum itna pareshaan kyun ho?

Geet: Maan….Maaan

Maan: Geet, kuch bologe bhi ya nahi?

Geet: Maan, meinne issiliye kaha tha ki aap humme chodkke mat jao, dekha ab kya ho gaya?

Geet starts crying…..

Maan: Geet, tum kyun ro rahi ho? Mujhe kuch bhi samajmein nahi aatha, aakhir kya baat hai?

Geet: Maan, Neha  driver ke saath ice cream lene gayi aura b tak wapas nahi aayi

Maan: Geet, tum itni si baat ke liye itna tension kyun lethi ho?  Koi traffic mein fugaye honge, ye Mumbai ki traffic bhi na? Tum phone rakho, mein driver se baat kartha hoon

Driver ka phone nahi lagtha….

Maan calls Dadi….

Maan: Dadima, aap kahan ho?

Dadi: hum abhi hospital jaa rahe hain bte

Maan:meinne bhi yahi baat kehne ke liye phone kiya tha,Geet bahut gabrathi hai, aap ussko sambalo, mein phir se driver ko phone kartha hoon

Maan Rajeev ke saath hi hai……

Rajeev: Maan , sab teek haina?

Maan: thoda problem ho gaya hai, mujhe abhi Mumbai jaana hai, if you don't mind, I'll leave

Rajeev: lekhin achanak aapko aaisa kya kaam aagaya?

Maan: woh meri beti Neha haina? woh kahin goom ho gayi hai

Rajeev: what? Toh aap abhi airport jao, driver Maan sir ko lekhe jao, mein aapka ticket ka intrezaam kartha hoon

Maan: thanks, Rajeev

Maan leaves immediately…..

Geet leaves Sneha with a sister…..

Geet: sister, thode dher isska khyaal rakhna, mein abhi aathi hoon

Sister: teek hai m'am

Geet  aur intrezaar nahi kar sakthi…

Woh kudh Neha ko doondhne chale jaathi….

Kaise bhi ho, aaj woh Neha ke bina yahan se nahi jaayegi….

Mein bhi kaisi bewakoof hhon jo meinne Neha ko driver ke saath akhela bheja?

Maan hothe toh ye sab nahi hotha….haina? ye Maan ko toh hummari parwa hi nahi, warna humme yahan akhele chodkke jaathe hai kya?

Babaji  ye meinne kya kardhi? Apni beti hothi toh aaisa karoongi kya? Nahi haina…..

Annie mujhe maaf kardho….Geet kya kya sochne lagi…….

It's like a nightmare for her…..she feels very guilty……

 

She rushes to the entrance…..

Just then the driver comes in with Neha….he is carrying her in his hands…..

Geet: Neha….Neha ko kya hua?

Driver: Geet m'am, Neha beti table se ghir gayi

Neha is bleeding….

Geet: Neha

Neha is crying, she is so scared….

Geet takes her, hugs her tight  and consoles her…..

Geet: Neha, dekho maa aapke paas hai, aapko darne ki koi zaroorat nahi, aapko kuch nahi hoga

Geet takes her to the doctor…

Geet: doctor, jaldhi

Doctor: ye kaise hua?

Geet: ye ghir gayi, dekho kitna khoon nikhal raha hai, jaldhi kuch karo

Doctor: Mrs.Khurana aap bahar wait kijiye

Geet: nahi, mein apni beti ko aklhele chodkke nahi jaa sakthi

Geet accompanies Neha….it's just a small cut…it's very superficial, not so deep, she just needs a couple of stitches on her forehead…..

Geet couldn't see Neha suffering…it's all her fault, she shouldn't have sent her alone with the driver…

Maan would never do that….but Neha was so stubborn…..

Dr: Mrs.Khurana, darne ki koi baat nahi hai, Neha is fine,Haina Neha?

Neha just tries to smile…….

Geet: lekhin Dr, head injury hai, toh?

Dr: don't worry, nothing serious

Geet: scan karkke dekhthe hai

Dr: Mrs.Khurana, she is fine, dekhiye kitna active hai, usski koi zaroorat nahi

Geet: Dr, phir bhi ek CT toh lelo

Dr: jaise aapki marzi

Doctor examines her report….

Dr: Mrs.Khurana, meinne pehle hi kaha ki Neha bilkul teek hai, ye dekhiye, sab kuch teek hai

Neha: ye kya hai?

Dr: ye? ye aapka dimag hai

Neha: mera hai?

Dr: haan, aur patha hai issme kya dikhtha?

Neha: kya?

Dr: yahi ki Neha bahut intelligent and smart girl hai

Neha: haan

Geet: thank you Dr, Neha, Dr uncle ko thanks kaho

Neha: thank you uncle

Dr: welcome sweetie, ab tum apne mama ke saath ghar jaa sakthi, hum phir milenge

Neha: bye uncle

Neha: maa, choti princess kahan hai?

Geet ko abhi Sneha ki yaad aathi….she goes and gets her….

Ranno aur Dadi bhi aagaye…..

Dadi: Geet bete, Neha kaisi hai?

Geet: teek hai, bas ek chota sa chot lag gayi

Ranno: dekha, teri laparwai ke wajhe se bachi ko kya ho gaya?

Dadi: Ranno, ab Neha teek haina? Aap kamakaam Geet ko kyun dhaantthe ho?

Ranno: nahi Dadi, ab ye do do bachon ki maa hai, kab tak aaisa chalega, aaplog itna achche hai toh ye itne din bahc gayi, lekhin woh aap logon ka pyaar ka galat faida utta rahi hai

Geet: haan Dadima, mujhse galthi ho gayi hai, mujhe maaf kijiye

Dadi: nahi bte, bachon ka girna phirna toh har ghar mein hotha rehtha hai, ye kaise aapki galthi ho sakthi? Aap apne aap ko doshi mat samjo

Ranno: Dadima, aap ka dil bahut bada hai

Geet: Dadi

Geet goes and hugs Dadi…..
 

Dadi: achcha, aapne Maan ko bathadhi?

Geet: nahi

Ranno: dekhiye Dadima, aap issko support kathe ho? Ye kabhi nahi sudhregi

Geet calls Maan….

Maan: Geet, Neha ka kuch patha chala? Ye driver ka phone nahi lagtha

Geet: Maan. Neha yahi hai. aap fikar mat karo, sab teek hai

Maan: Geet, tum gabrao mat, I'm on my way, tum Neha ka khyaal rakhna

Geet: koi jaldhi nahi hai, aap aaram se aao

Maan: itne dher kahan chali gayi thi?

Geet: woh, Maan Neha table se neeche ghir gayi hai

Maan: what? Geet ye tum kya keh rahi ho?

Geet:haan, driver wahan ka kissi clinic gaya toh wahan koi duty Dr nahi tha, phir woh seedhe Neha ko yahan lekhe aagaya

Maan: Geet, ussko zyada toh nahi lagi?

Geet: nahi, bas shir mein do stitches lagana pada

Maan: kya? Shir mein? Geet? This could be serious, tumne Dr se teek se check karwaya?

Geet: Maan koi problem nahi hai, aapko chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai

Maan: kaise chintha nahi karoon?  Bas do din Neha ko tere paas chodkke aaya toh dekho usska kya haal ho gaya?

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: Geet, how could you be so irresponsible? Ab Sneha ka khyaal rakhna,mere aane se pehle usska bhi haath paav nahi thodna, ye ladhki toh mujhe hamesha pareshaan karthi rehthi hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: tumse baat karna hi bekaar hai, tum dadi ko phone do

Geet can't take this anymore….itna gussa? Meinne kya kiya?

At Km…….

Geet is very upset…..Maan is angry with her…. Thia was expected, but still Geet couldn't believe that Maan would be so mad at her….she has made a mistake but that's not all her fault alone, accidents ho jaathe hai…..

Neha apni princess ke saath khel rahi hai……

Geet Maan ki baat ko yaad karthi….

                "do din Neha ko tere paas chodkke gaya toh usska ye haal ho gaya"

Geet sochthi…..do din? Neha kya abhi mere saath rehthi? Meinne itne din Neha ka kitna khyaal rakha tha?

Ye sab kya meinne Maan ke liye kiya hai? nahi, Neha meri beti hai, jab se woh peitha hui tab se mein hi ussko pala hai, haina babaji?  Annie bhi kitne bar Neha ko mere paas chodkke chale jaathi thi? Lekhin innko toh mujhpe itna bhi barosa nahi hai….

Maan toh bas aaisa hi bahar goomthe rahe the aur maheene mein ek bar aakke sabko aaisa hi sunathe rehthe the,

"aap logon ko kuch bhi nahi aatha, ek choti si bachi ko palna itna bhi mushkil nahi hai, ye dekho nappy ke wajhe se kitna rashes ho gaya, aaplog nappy padalthe bhi ho ya nahi? tum logon ko toh bas apna shopping ki padi hai", Annie ko bhi aaisa hi sunatha tha…….

Maan ne ek bar bhi nappy nahi badla, bas dusron ko hokum karthe rehtha……

Lekhin ab toh Maan Neha ke saath millkke nappy badalna bhi seekh gaya…..lekhin phir bhi usska gussa bilkul waisa hi hai…….kuch cheezon ko badalna mushkil hi nahi, namunkhin hai, haina babaji, jaise MSK ka gussa……

                Geet aaisa hi purane baathon ko yaad karthi rehthi……aur Maan ka intrezaar karthi rehthi….aane do Mr.MSK ko, aaj toh unkko patha chalega ki Mrs.Khurana bhi kuch kam nahi hai…..

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Dadi notices Geet's worrying face….

She has been sitting in the couch for a long time……

Ranno has been calling her and Geet won't move from that place…..

It's dinner time….Ranno tried to get Neha to the dinning table…

But no use….if Geet itself doesn't obey her then how would her daughter listen to Ranno?

She goes and complaints to dadi…..

Raano: Dadima, damadji hi ek aadmi hai jo aapki pothiyon ko sambal sakthe, mein toh do din se inkke peeche padkke tak gayi hoon, ab aapki bari hai

Dadi: haan Ranno, Maan hothe hai tohi ye ghar mein sab waqt pe apna apna kaam karthe, nahi toh dekho sab apne man maani karne lage hai

Geet: dadi, aap bhi maa ke saath millkke saas bahu wali saas ban gaye ho? Aap iss drama queen se dhoor hi raho

Dadi: Geet bete, aap kya kar rahe hai?

Geet: kuch nahi

Dadi: aap humse kuch chupa rahe hai

Geet: nahi dadi, aaisa koi baat nahi hai

Dadi: nahi, jab se hospital se aaye hai aap bahut udaas lagthe hai

Geet: nahi dadima., mein bilkul teek hoon, Neha ko lekhe thoda pareshaan ho gayi thi

Dadi: humme patha hai, zaroor Maan ne aapko kuch kaha hoga?

Geet: nahi dadi

Dadi: Geet bete, humne bhi kitne bachon ko pala hai, bachon aaisa hi hothe hai, kabhi kabhi ghir jaathe aur chot bhi lagthi, issme aapki koi galthi nahi hai, aap isskke barein mein zyada mat sochiye, ye toh bas shuruwaat hai, ab aage aapko kitna kuch sambalna hai, humne toh aapki Maan ko hi sambala, patha hai Maan ab jitna samajdhar hai bachpan mein utna hi sharaarat karthe the

Geet: kya?

Dadi: haan, hamesha Annie ke khilonne cheenkke unkko rulathe the, ab dekho aapko bhi aaise hi ruladhi, haina?

Geet: haan Dadi, toh ye unkka bachpan ki aadat hai?

Dadi: toh ye Maan ka kaam hi hai

Geet pakadgayi……

Geet: sshhh….nahi nahi

Dadi: patha hai Maan ne bachpan mein kya kiya ?

So it's story time at KM..…..Maan ke samne dadi ye story nahi batha sakthi….ab Maan yahan nahi hai toh Dadi starts telling Maan's childhood stories to cheer up Geet…..

Dadi: aaisahi ek bar Maan toffee khane ki zidd kar rahe the, humne toffee ko upar ke cupboard mein chupadhi, aur inhonne kya kiya?

Geet: kya karthe? aaise hi upar chadkke ghir gaye honge

Dadi: nahi bete, unnhonne aaisa nahi kiya, balkhi Annie ko ladder ke upar chadnne ko kehthe aur Annie bhi apne bhai ke baat ko turanth maan gayi, aur jab humne kitchen mein awaaz sunkke aaya, Maan ladder ko chodkke chale gaye aur Annie ghir gayi

Geet: toh aaise baat hai, kudh itna badmaash hokke mujhe sunathe? Aane do unkko

Dadi: ye hui na baat, ab chalo sab saath mein dinner karthe hai, aap Neha ko lekhe aayiye

Geet: ji Dadi

Geet Neha ko lekhe aathi…..

Dadi: Neha bete, idhar aayiye

Neha: Dadi

Dadi: Geet bete, Neha ko ice cream lekhe aayiye

Geet: ice cream? Nahi, pehle roti, badh mein ice cream

Neha: ice cream, ice cream, ice cream

Geet: chup, bilkul chup

Neha shuts her mouth….

Geet: hare, muh kholo, roti kahna haina?

Neha: aapne hi chup Karen ko kaha the na?

Geet: bilkul apne papa ki tarah hai, ziddi , muh kholo

Neha: nahi, mujhe bhook nahi hai

Geet: achcha, dadima , mujhe bahut bhook lagthi hai, ye ice cream bhi mein hi khathi hoon

Neha: nahi, mera ice cream hai, mujhe do

Geet: achcha, ye aapka hai?

Neha: haan

Geet: Dadima, ye mera hiana?

Geet starts to run towards Dadi….Neha chases her…..

Ranno: Geet, pagal ho gayi ho kya? Neha ko abhi abhi chot lagi hai, woh phir se ghir jaathi toh?

Dadi snatches the ice ceram from Geet….

Geet: dadi?

Dadi: ye aap donno ka bhi nahi hai, pehle donno khaana khalo, beito

Dadi Geet ko dhaantthi….

Neha laughs…..

Dadi: dekha ye mera hai

Dadi: aap kahan jaathi hai? aap bhi beito

Donno chup chaap khana khaathe hai….

Phir Geet Neha Geet ko ice cream khilathi aur Geet Neha ko…..

Dadi bahut kush hai…..babaji hummari ghar ki kushiyon ko kissi ka nazar nahi lagaye….

Uss raat Geet ko neendh hi nahi aathi….

It's 3 am…..Maan has just returned from Delhi…..

He goes to see Neha….

Neha is fast asleep….Geet is with her…..

Geet is still awake….Maan knows that…..

He also knows that he had hurt her with his words….

Maan had to apologiose, warna ussko bhi neendh nahi aayega……

lekhin kaise? Sab soo rahe hai, aur Geet bhi sonne ki natak kar rahi hai……

ab usskke saath ladtha toh Neha aur choti princess utjaayenge…kay karein?

 Maan thinks for a while….chalo kal subah baat akrthe hai….but he couldn't hold back till morning……after all he has seen his mishty worried…..

Maan Geet ke paas chale jaatha….aur usske khaan mein whisper kartha….

Maan: Geet

Geet closes her eyes tight….

Maan:  Geet,bahar aao, mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karna hai

Geet turns to the other side…..

Maan: Geet, toh tum aaise nahi manogi? Geet, mein bhi Maan Singh Khurana hoon, mere samne tummari nautnaki nahi chalegi, samji

So saying he lifts her and takes her with him….Geet doesn't resist…….

She needed this badly….this love along with his arrogance…..

Whenever something goes wrong her heart just longs for this, this man's cuddle and comfort….

Even though her mind reminds her that this time he is the culprit her heart goes ohh la la…..

She is very pleased that he is back with her,  she comfortably rests her head on his arms….

Wow!….kitna strong hai mere Maan? Kya muscles hai?

Just as he carries her out, her mind warns her not to open her eyes and look into his , b'coz then she would forget whatever he said ….so she keeps her eyes closed….

 
Maan gently pulls her and looks at her eyes….
 

Maan: Geet, ab tum aankhen khol sakthi ho, yahan koi nahi hai aur mujhe patha hai ki tummare sharaarat aankhen mujhse baat karne ke liye taras rahe hai

She opens her eyes and sees him…..

Maan: Geet, mujhse baat nahi karogi?

Now she breaks her silence…..

Geet: aap ko kya lagtha? Mujhe Neha ki koi parwa nahi hai? sirf aapko usski chintha hai? Mr.Maan Singh Khurana, shayad aap bhool gaye ho ki Neha meri beti hai, meri, samje? Agar aapko itna parwa hai toh aap humme akhele chodke nahui jaathe, haina babaji? Aap bahut bhure ho, mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karna hai

Maan: toh itne dher Mrs. Khurana ji, aap kisse baat kar rahe the?

Geet: woh  mein apne babaji se baat kar rahi thi, aap chup chupkke hummare baathon ko sun rahe the?

Babaji, ab aap hi dekhlo, kaun achcha hai aur kaun Dust hai? ye toh aaisa hi hai, hamesha mujhe rulathe aur dekho kaise headmaster ki tarah sawaal pe sawaal karthe? Kisse baat kar rahi thi? Kyun kar arhi thi? Kaise kar rahi thi?

Geet stops to take a breathe….

Maan: bas, ho gayi teri baat  ya aur bhi kuch bakhi hai?

Geet starts to speak…..

Maan: babaji lagtha hai picture abhi bakhi hai, ab mein aur wait kartha toh isski picture puri raat chaltha rahega, aur mera picture ka kya hoga?

Geet: kya? Aap kabhi nahi sudhrenge, mein chalthi hoon

Maan catches her hand and pulls her towards him, Geet tries to get away….

But Maan tightens his hold and gets closer….he then hugs her……just what the doctor ordered….haina?

Geet surrenders and she breaks down….

Maan: mujhe maaf kardho Geet, mujhse bahut badi galthi ho gayi, woh tension mein meinne kuch bhi bholdhiya, mein jaantha hoon ki mujhe aaisa baat nahi karna chahiye tha, lekhin kya karoon? Bas do din tumse dhoor rehkke phir se Dhust Danav ban gaya hoon, haina?

Geet: haan, bahut Dhust

 
Maan: aur tumme patha hai ki iss Dhust ko tummara Maan kya banatha?
 

Geet: kya?

Maan: tummara pyaar, tummari hanssi, tummara ehsaas, tummara sparsh aur

Geet:  aur?

Maan: aur hummara mahi mahi….

Maan lifts her and takes her to his room…..mahi………..

Next day…..

Rajeev calls……

Rajeev: Maan, how's your daughter?

Maan: Nahe is fine, I was just about to call you

Rajeev: mujhe bahut bhura laga,  you left your daughter and came to Delhi just b'coz of me

Maan: hare, koi problem nahi, bas Geet Neha ko lekhe bahut sensitive hai, choti choti bathon ko lekhe bahut pareshaan ho jaathi, infact baby ko lekhe bhi kabhi itna chintha nahi karthi

Rajeev: ye toh hotha hai, chahe kitna bhi bachon ho lekhin pehla bacha toh har maa ke liye hamesha special hi hotha

Maan: you have got a point

Rajeev: take care, mein yahan ka kaam sambal saktha hoon

Maan: I will send Adi with the project details

Rajeev: that will do, waise aapne koi kaam pending nahi choda, everything is going as per plan

Maan: Ok, I'll call you later

Geet comes….

Maan: hare Geet, Rajeev just called and asked about Neha

Geet: achcha, aapne kaha ki aap unko bathadenge ki sab teek hai

Maan: mein toh tumme dekhthe hi sab kuch bhool jaatha

Geet: Maan, kabhi nahi sudhrenge, hamesha apni galthiyon ko inzaam mujhe dethe ho

Maan: babaji aaj toh ye subhe subhe shuru ho gayi hai

Geet: Maan, sirf Rajeev ne call kiya tha?
 

Maan: tummara matlab?

Geet: kahin aapki Pari ne bhi call kiya toh nahi?

Maan: woh call kyun karegi? Woh toh seedha yahan aanewali hai, mujhse milne

Maan tries to tease her…..he wants to see her getting jealous and possessive….

Geet: kya? Toh aapne pehle kyun nahi bathaya?

Maan: bathatha toh kya karthi?

Geet: kya karthi?  Mein kudh airport jaathi ussko receive karne

Maan: what? Geet mujhe laga tum naraaz hogi

Geet: mein toh bahut kush hoon

Maan: kush? Kyun?

Geet: mein toh ab aapko akhele nahi sambal sakthi, mujhe bhi ek partner mil jayegi toh kitna achcha hoga?

Maan: abhi bhi kuch nahi bigada, tum kaha toh mein Rajeev se baat kartha hoon

Geet: kya? Aapko ek biwi kaafi nahi hai?

Maan: meinne aaise kab kaha? Magar tum chahathi ho toh mein dusri biwi ke barein mein so

Geet shuts his mouth……..

Geet: sochna bhi mat……

Geet warns him……..

Maan smiles…….

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Aaj Valentine's day hai…..

Maan jaldhi tayaar hokke Geet ko dekhne jaatha….

Geet  as usual raat bar baby ke saath busy rehthi toh abhi bhi so rahi hai……

Maan waits there…..

Baby wakes up and starts crying…..

Geet wakes up…nappy wet ho gayi hogi?

She hurriedly jumps out of the bed….

Maan aks her to continue her sleep…..

Geet: Maan, aapko office nahi jaana?

Maan: nahi, tum sojao, mein baby ka khyaal rakhtha hoon

Geet goes back to sleep……

Maan takes the baby out with him…..

Ranno Neha ko tayaar kar rahi hai….

Ranno: hummari ladli utgayi?

Maan: haan

Neha: gud morning princess

Ranno: ye Gee tab tak so rahi hai?

Maan: ussko sonedhijiye, hum aaj baby ko sambalenge, haina Neha?

Neha: toh aaj meri chute?

Maan: haan

Ranno: lekhin aap kaise?

Maan: aap jayiye, mein hoona

Ranno leaves…..

Neha: papa, aaj princess bhi mere saath nahayegi, haina princess?

Maan: haan, lekhin sambalkke, baby bahut choti haina?

Neha: haan papa, mujhe patha hai, mein maa ko bhi aaisa hi madat karthi hoon

Maan: very good, pehle kya karein?

Maan ko bhi patha nahi kya karein?

Maan tries to figure out how to hold the baby and wash her too….

Neha: papa, aap toh kuch nahi jaanthe ho, mein maa ko hi bhulathi hoon

Maan: hare Neha, aaj teri tarah maa bhi chute mein hai, ussko disturb mat karo…

Neha: teek hai, ab kya karein?

Maan: tum pehle tub mein beito

Neha : teek hai

Maan: aaise nahi, stretch your legs, aaise

Neha: aaise?

Maan: haan, ab hummari princess apne behen ki lap mein aaise beitegi

Baby enjoys this new adventure!!!!! She thinks it's a new game…….

Neha hold her tight…..

Aur bahut koshish ke badh Maan succeeds in his new job……

Ye itna aasaan nahi hai jaise ussne socha tha……

After all the exercise baby is tired and hungry…..

She starts crying…..now this is not a man's jao, haina?

Maan ko baby ko Geet kepaas lekhe jaana hi pada……..

Geet is already awake…..Ranno has done her duty…..

Ranno: Geet, jaldhi utto, ye damaadji ko aaj kya ho gaya hai? tum chalkke dekho, ye donno bachi ko koi khilona samajdhe hai kya?

Geet: maa, itna pareshaan honne ki koi zaroorat nahi, Maan sab jaanthe hai

Ranno: Geet, ye mardhon ka kaam nahi hai, bachon ko sambalna bahut badhi zameendari hai

Maan just enters…….

Ranno didn't expect him there……

Maan: Geet, ye dekho kaise ro rahi hai

Ranno: aapne kya kiya hummari ladli ko?

Maan stares…….Ranno leaves that place immediately…..

Geet: Maan, shayad ussko bhook lagi hai?

Maan: haan, tum issko sambalo, mein Neha ko lekhke aatha hoon

Maan gets Neha ready……

Neha: papa, hum aaj bahar jaa rahe hai?

Maan: haan

They go to the baby's room……

Baby is fast asleep…….

Maan: Geet, tum tayaar hokke aao

Geet: Maan?

Maan: jaldhi Geet

Geet: lekhin mein tayaar hokke kya karoongi?

Maan: aaj tumme Neha ko bahar lekhe jaana hoga

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, Neha kahin bahr goomna chahthi, haina Neha?

Maan winks….Neha winks back….

Neha: haaan, jaldhi karo

Geet: par baby?
 

Maan: mein hoona, mein ussko sambaltha hoon

Geet: Maan, aap kaise?

Maan: Geet mein toh tumme hi itne din sambalkke aaya hoon, tummari bachi ko nahi sambaloonga?

Geet: teek hai, ye aapki bhi bachi hai, aaj papa ki duty, haina Neha?

Geet is very happy to have a day off….it seems like she has been locked up for years….

It's always refreshing to go out and have some fun…..

Geet takes Neha out….actually it's Geet's day out…..

First stop Neha's favourite ice cream parlour…..Geet's favourite too…..

Then some chaat…….finally head to the mall for shopping……

Geet has got a long list of things to buy…..

Itne din toh online shopping hi kar rahi thi….

But it's always better to go out and have a look yourself……

While Geet is having a great time with Neha Maan is having a really hard time with the baby…..

He cuuldn't  diff her cries, when she is hungry….when she needs a cuddle…

Ranno offers to help but Maan feels that it's better to keep her away…..

Dadi tries to help him but Maan is learning his lessons to be a good father …..

Geet knows that it's time up and they return quickly……

Maan: hare, itne jaldhi aagaye ho?

Ranno: Geet, itne dher kahan thi? Bachi ko chodkke aaise kaise jaa sakthi?

Geet: maa tu chal, mein aagayi hoona

Ranno: ye donno toh hamesha mujhe bagaathe rehthe hai

Maan: toh kaise raha aapka din?

Geet takes the baby and she stops crying instantly…..yahi maa ka kamala hai….

Geet: bahut achchi, humne khoob shopping kiye hai

Maan: achcha, mere liye kya kaye hai?

Geet: aap ke liye?

Maan: haan

Geet: par Maan, humme waqt hi nahi milla apne shopping karne ke liye bhi

Maan: koi baat nahi, lekhin aaise kya kareedha tum logon ne?

Geet: chalo mere saath

Geet takes him to Neha's room……

It's full of Valentine's day goodies…..lal roses, heartin balloons, chocolates and everything……

Maan is surprised….

Maan: toh ye mere liye surprise tha?

Geet: aap ke liye?

Geet and Neha burst out laughing…….

Maan is confused…….

Geet: Maan, ye sare gifts Neha ne apne princess ke liye khareeda hai

Maan: kya? Par ye toh…..

Neha: papa ye lo aapke gift, khol ke dekho
 

Maan opens and finds a lovely red heart saying "ILU"

Geet: Maan, aaj toh har jagah yahi bhej rahe the, meinne bhi bhool gaya ki aaj Valentine's day hai, Neha toh ye sab liye bina wahan se aathi hi nahi, phir meinne socha chalo aaj hum bhi Valentine's day celebrate karthe hai

Maan: tum ne bahut sahi kiya Geet, meinne bhi aaj tere liye kuch bhi kaas nahi kiya

Geet: Maan, aaj toh mein bahut kush hoon, apne beti ke saath aaise pura din goomne se behther koi gift hotha hai kya?

Maan: meinne bhi wahi socha tha

Neha cake box ko kholthi….
 

Geet lights the candles…..

Neha blows them off…..she really likes doing that…..

Geet cuts the cake…..

Maan Geet aur Neha ko cake khilatha…..

Neha claps her hands…..she is very happy…..

It's just like another b'day for her……

Maneet celebrate their Valentine's day with their lovely family……

Happy Valentine's day……love you all…..share Ur love with our Maneet family and Ur families too on this lovely day…..
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Part – 59

One day….

Adi, Pinky, Pinky's mom and papaji Sneha ko dekhne aatha hai……

Geet is happy to see them….

Meera bhi hothi toh kitna achcha hoga?

Par Suresh has got a job in Australia and Meera is now there……

Pinky: Geet, toh tum bhi maa ban gayi? Mujhe toh bahut dar lagtha

Geet: Pinky tum kaisi ho?

Adi: ye toh waise hi hai, dekho ab kitna moti ho gayi

Pinky: hare, abhi toh sare ladhkiyaan moti ho jaathi hai

Geet: sachi? Pinky tu bhi?

Pinky: haan Geet….Pinky sharmathi…..

Geet: bas ab Meera hi bakhi hai

Pinky: meinne suna woh log bhi koshish kar rahe hai

Geet: achcha? toh Meera bhi maa banna chahathi hai?

Pinky: haan, pehle kehthi thi abhi nahi, ye toh enjoy karne ka umar hai

Geet: lekhin bachon ke saath khelne ka maaza hi kuch aur hai

Pinky: tum toh aaise hi ho,  jab dekho Neha ke saath khelthi rehthi  thi, Annie toh hamesha kehthi thi ki tujhe bhi jaldhi shadhi karna chahiye aur maa banna chahiye, ab dekho tumne Maan bhai se shadhi bhi karli aur unnkke bache ki maa bhi bangayi, aaj Annie hothi toh kitne kush hothi?

Pinky's mom: Pinky toh tum Geet ko rhulanne hi aayi ho toh chalo, hum chalthe hai

Adi: haan, ye toh bikul bhudoo hai, hamesha aaisa hi bak bak karthi rehthi, bina kuch soche samje

Geet: Adi, ussko bolnne do, mein bhi hamesha aaisa hi sochthi aur apne mann ki baat ko kissi ke saath share bhi nahi kar payi, Maan se toh ye batein karna bahut mushkil hotha

Adi: haan Geet, ye baat toh tum unsse kaise kar sakthi?

Pinky: sorry Geet, mujhe maaf kardo, mujhe bhi ye baat nahi karni chahiye

Geet: kyun nahi karni? Tumse ye baat nahi karthi toh kisse karthi?

Pinky: Geet?

Geet: waise tumse aaise batein karkke mujhe bahut achcha laga

Neha bhi aajaathi……

Pinky: Neha, hare hummari Neha kitni badi ho gayi?

Neha: haan, ab mein school bhi jaathi

Adi: very good

Pinky's mom has got the baby in her lap….Neha keeps looking at her….

Neha: maa ye hummari princess hai, innke paas kyun hai?

Geet: hare ye toh princess ko wish karne aaye hai

Mr. Handa bhi Hoshiarpur se Adi ke saath lautkke aaye hai…..

Mr.Handa: Neha yahan aao, dekho humne aap ke liye kya laya hai?

Neha: naanu

Neha goes and hugs him…..he has got her laddu….she loves those laddus made by Geet's bhuaji…

Geet: Neha aap jaakke nahalo

Neha: nahi mein princess ke paas hi rahoongi

Neha ko lagtha hai ki ye log princess ko apne saath lekhe jaayenge……

Pinky's mom: hum sab haina tummari pari ke saath

Neha: issiliye toh mein ussko chodkke nahi jaa sakthi

Geet: Neha, papa aathe toh dhaantenge

Mr.Handa: Geet, kyun bachi ko darathi ho? Neha beti,aap badh mein nahalena

Neha: ji naanu

Geet: aap aagaye haina? Ab ye meri koi bhi baat nahi manegi

Pinky's mom: Geet, teri beti toh bilkul teri jaise hi hai, wahi aakhen aur dekho hasthi toh bilkul nanni Geet ko yaad dilathi

Ranno: haan, ye toh mujhe hamesha Geet ki bachpan ki yaad dilathi, usski harkat bhi Geet jaise hi hai, bahut badhmaash hai

Pinky: haan Geet, ye bilkul tummari tarah hi dikhthi

Neha: mein aapkke jaise kyun nahi hoon?

There is silence for a moment…..isska kya jawab demge?

Magar aaj toh Ranno ne pehle bar samajdari se baat ki…..

Ranno:Neha toh bilkul apne papa ki tarah hai, haina Geet?

Geet: haan maa, bilkul Maan ki tarah, wahi gussa, wahi attitude aur sawaal bhi unkke jaise hi karthi rehthi hai

Mr.Handa: Neha, Geet ko dekho jaise bilkul mere jaise hi hai, sundar, suisheel aur samajdar

Neha: lekhin mein maa ki jaise kyun nahi hoon?

Mr.Handa: hare hamesha pehle bache papa ki tarah hi hothe hai, jaise Geet hai, achcha hua Geet mere jaisi hai, warna socho ye tummari naani ki tarah hothi toh tummare papa issko dekhthe hi bhaag jaathe

Neha: aap naani ko dekhkke kyun nahi bhaage?

Mr.Handa: hummare jamaane mein shadhi ke pehle ladka ladki se nahi mil saktha, kash mein ek bar isse mil patha , mein toh ussi waqt kahin dhoor bhaag jaatha

Ranno: bachon ko apni bhuri kahaaniyan mat sunao

Neha: joot, naanu aap joot bol rahe ho

Mr.Handa: kya?

Neha: haan mujhe patha hai ki aap naani se milne chor ki tarah deewar pe chadkke gaye aur ghir gaye ho, issiliye aapki  haath aaisa hai

Neha shows his slightly tilted left hand….

Ranno ne Neha ko bedtime stories mein apni stories ko bhi kehdhi…..

Geet: maa, ye toh mujhe bhi nahi patha tha

Ranno: hare ye ladhki har din mujhse kahaaniyan  sunthi rehthi haina?

Mr.Handa: toh tum ussko aaise kahaaniyan sunathi ho?

Neha: naanu naani  bahut achche kahaaniyan sunathi, Geet ki stories, hoshiarpur wali stories

Geet: kya? Maa tune mere barein mein kya kya kaha?

Ranno: kuch nahi Geet, tum bachpan mein tummari school se har rang ke chalk piece churakke aathi thina?

Geet: kya? Maa , ye kissne kaha?

Mr.Handa: haan Geet, tab toh tum bahut choti thi

Geet: aaj se Neha ko tujhse dhoor hi rakhna padega

Pinky: hare Geet patha hai kaise tumne ek din uss ladhkke ko tappad mara tha?

Neha: haan, jab ussne aapki  khaane ko break mein khaaliya tha,aur aapko bahut bhook laga, haina?

Pinky: haan wahi, toh tum sab jaanthi ho?

 Geet:maaa

Ranno: ye Geet ko kya ho gaya?

That night…..

 
Geet: Maan aaj Pinky aayi thi
 

Maan: haan,Adi ne mujhe call kiya tha, mein noida mein koi zaroori kaam mein fusgaya tha, issiliye nahi aapaya

Geet: woh baat nahi hai

Maan: phir kya baat hai?

Geet: kuch nahi, aap sojao

Maan: aaise kaise so saktha? Tum mujhse kuch kehna chahathi ho, haina?

Geet: nahi, bas yuhi kuch bolna chahathi thi, haan Pinky bhi pregnanat hai

Maan: Geet tum mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geet mere aankon mein dekhkke kaho

Geet raises her head…..she is in tears…..

Maan: toh pinky ne tujhe Annie ki yaad diladhi?

Geet: Maan?

Maan: mujhe bhi Annie ki bahut yaad aathi hai Geet, jab hummari shadhi hui thi, aur tummari godh barayi ke samay aur abhi tummari delivery ka waqt, aur jab bhi Neha ko dekhtha hoon

Geet: mujhe bhi usski bahut yaad aathi hai, bas aapse kehnahi payi

Maan: tumme kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai Geet, ye toh hum donno hi jaanthe hai ki Annie ko bhoolna namunkhin hai, phir usske yaadon se kyun darna? Bas Neha ke samne usski baat nahi kar sakthe

Geet: Maa, mujhe laga aap Annie ko bhool gaye ho

Maan: kaise bhool saktha hoon Geet? tum toh bas ussko theen saal se jaanthi, mere barein mein socho Geet

 
Geet: Maan
 

Geet hugs him tight and tries to console him…..

Kabhi kabhi Maan ko lagtha ki Geet usski biwi nahi maa hai……aaj Maan ki maa hothi toh shayad Maan ko Geet ki saath ki itni zaroorat nahi padthi?

 

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me first  yeppy !!!!!!!!!

awesome update
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part 56
awesome...
glad Neha is fine...
poro Geet...
Maan how could u...
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part 57
awesome...
Geet should have taken a good class for him...
lovely part...