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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi



Aj hi pakki hui hai na islye nahi bataya Janis 😉

Congratulations Sheen! Wish you great success and happiness in your job!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: had2bu


Congratulations Sheen! Wish you great success and happiness in your job!



Thankooo avi 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Laxmi

Sorry to dissapoint u 😆


Sheen

Congrts for New Job ❤️



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Happy Hug Day guys


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Thanks to all those who commented.

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CHAPTER 57:


He kept checking the rear view mirror every now and then to ensure that she was fine, wondering how he was going to explain all this to her. A few hours of silent driving later, darkness was drifting in. Field after field was all there was to see. Small huts used by the farmers were the only distraction from the never ending sea of green. Suddenly, a soft drizzle had begun.

Feeling bored, he looked longingly at Geet, wanting to hear her 'bak bak' which now felt like music to his ears. It had been so long since he had heard her go blah blah over anything, and he decidedly missed it, he thought poignantly.

His glance fell on the radio in the jeep and he remembered all of Geet's taunts over his refusal to repair the one in his car. Her pouting features, her sulking with her phone, refusing to talk to him, it all came back to him.

The last time they had traveled the same journey, he had been a cordoned off heartless man, hiding behind huge walls to save himself from emotions. And look at him today, trying his best to break down the ones he had created around her.

He turned on the radio, very softly, so as not to disturb her.

A slow number was playing, he couldn't recognize it as he was not into music, but the words and the soft music seeped into his soul.

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Ab Duniya Se Shikwa Nahi Hai

Na Raha Ab Zindagi Se Gila

He looked at his 'Sleeping Beauty' in the back. He could spend his whole life just looking at her and thanking providence for sending this angel into his life.

Kiska Karam Hai

Kiski Dua Hai

Ya Naseebo Se Tu Mujhko Mila

Ab Jo Mile Ho Door Na Jaana

Tere Bina Dil, Lagta Nahin

The singer in his soothing melodious voice caught his attention and the words caused him to smirk at his condition. He didn't know why and how it had happened, but it had. And now it was well nigh impossible to even think of his life without her.

Mera Jeena Hai Kya

Marna Hai Kya

Jab Saath Tera Nahi

Paa Ke Rab Kya Karu

Jab Tu Hi Mera Nahin(2)

Now the issue would be to convince Geet to give him another chance. As upset as she was, he would do anything to win her over. He would fill her life with so much happiness, not even a flicker of sadness would be allowed to enter her vicinity.

I Am Never Gonna Live Without You Baby Now

You The Only One Was Always In My Fantasy

You The Only One To Make Me Reach My Ectasy

I Dont Want Nobody Else But You

I Am Loving You Loving You

"Meri zindagi tumhare bina adhoori hai Geet. Aadat ho gayee hai meri zindagi ko tumhari Geet."

His own words echoed in his ears. He had tried to tell her what he felt, but looks like she wasn't in a state to believe him.

Berang Se Din The

Tanha Thi Raatein

Kuch Na Badalta Jo Tum Na Aate(2)

He could just imagine the life that they would have.

Geet and her cute dimples; morning, noon and night.

He was not good at expressing himself but he would try for her. He would fill her life with love and passion. He could so easily imagine her becoming the center of his existence.

Kehne Ko Yun Toh

Rishtey Kahin Hai

Rishton Mein Koi Apna Nahin

He had his whole family with him. But that black chasm in his chest which had been in place of a heart had only been filled by Geet and her love.

Mera Jeena Hai Kya

Marna Hai Kya

Jab Saath Tera Nahi

Paa Ke Rab Kya Karu

Jab Tu Hi Mera Nahin

Mera Jeena Hai Kya

Marna Hai Kya(2)

Just one day, she had not been by his side and his whole world had seemed meaningless. He could not even begin to imagine how lonely life would have become without her.

And he knew, her life would be the same without him. Whether she accepted it or not, she needed him as deeply as he needed her.

He had been an empty shell, a soulless hollow being.

She had blazed into his life to become his heart, his soul. His everything.

Geet.

Everything that is worthwhile for me is her. And he knew if she ever left him, she would take away the last reason to even breathe.

Kyun Chup Gaya Hai

Ankhiyon Ko Meeche

Sharmon Haya Ke

Pardon Ke Peeche(2)

He looked at her lovingly, and as if she could feel his desirous gaze on her, she blushed and burrowed deeper into the shawl, hiding herself from his intense passionate eyes, leaving him disgruntled like a child whose candy had been snatched away.

Apne Sanam Se

Parda Hai Kaisa

Jab Ke Khuda Se

Parda Nahin

He stopped at the side, unable to bare even that distance with her and leisurely moved away the offending piece of clothe barring his vision.

A smile lit up her face taking his breath away.

Mera Jeena Hai Kya

Marna Hai Kya

Jab Saath Tera Nahi

Paa Ke Rab Kya Karu

Jab Tu Hi Mera Nahin(2)

He pressed two fingers to his lips and then touched them to her petal soft ones.

Ab Duniya Se Shikwa Nahi Hai

Na Raha Ab Zindagi Se Gila

Kiska Karam Hai, Kiski Dua Hai

Ya Naseebo Se Tu Mujhko Mila

Ab Jo Mile Ho Door Na Jaana

Tere Bina Dil Lagta Nahin

Looks like the singer understood where he stood.

Mera Jeena Hai Kya

Marna Hai Kya

Jab Saath Tera Nahi

Paa Ke Rab Kya Karu

Jab Tu Hi Mera Nahin(2)

Just as the song came to an end, he switched off the radio.

The car seemed to slow down and slowly sputtered out. The engine must have overheated.

He noticed the signs on the dashboard. Darn! This was not good. Geet seemed to be stirring in her sleep. He pulled the car to the side off the road.

Between the fields he noticed a small shack. Before it got really cold, he figured he could bring Geet to some shelter. The nights in Punjab could get very cold and the last thing Geet needed was to catch cold. He picked her up gently and carried her to the shack.

There were piles of hay and he settled her on that. Using her shawl, he covered her. He scanned the contents of the shack and found a lamp which he lit.

Bolting the door, he lay down on the hay near her.


Precap:


Hum tum ek hut me bandh ho

Aur thandi lag jaye

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Author's Note :

This is short, a filler i know.

But needed to build up the base 😳

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Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Loved the update

Finally Maan is himself trying to break the walls he himself created😳

There was a time when he would try all means to avoid her
not come face to face with her
and today her unknowingly hiding in the shawl
didn't go well with him😛

He placing a kiss on her lips with his finger was so cute😊

Tere chehre se nazar nahi hatti😉

Rain+ hut+ Maaneet = ☺️

Waiting


PS. Valentine's day is thursday so technically the update should be before 12😉😆
Edited by heytal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Drizzle hua na? toh Maan ki jeep open wali thi toh Geet bheege gi toh sardi toh lage gi na 😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Absolutely beautiful update.
I like when we have Maan's POV.
It opens up his brain to us and today it was his heart that it opened up.
I am really liking him now.
Song was perfect.
Cold cold night
Warm warm hut...
Looking forward to the valentine special...
Thanks for updating Aashu!
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Edited by had2bu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
congrate yet another thread 4rm u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
❤️❤️❤️

Heart to heart connection
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
12 baj gaye na soniya kaha ho?plz jaldi aaeyai.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi



Aj hi pakki hui hai na islye nahi bataya Janis 😉


congratulations sheen..!!


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