PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic - Page 39

ok now nxt part,plz ppl read & comment naa,ok nxt part-

kashish comes 2 home gusse mein ankhon se asoo ruk nahi rahein hain very upset ,she runs 2 her room,she is so upset kii,jo bhi usne pehna tha sajne ke lie,wo sisak sisak ke rote hue,sab kuch berehmi se kheech kar nikalkaar throws away idhar udhar,7 sits on the grd cryin,she is feelin helpless,usse samaj nahi aa raha uske saath hi aisa kyun ho raha hai,wo uthkaaar,goes 2 the cupboard,aur apne kaapde aur cheeze nikalne laagti hai

while mutterin 2 herself-nahi!baas bohot ho gaya,main ek pal bhi yahan nahi reh saaakti,ek pal bhi aise insaan ke saath guzaara nahi kaar saakti,main chali jaungi yahan se!abhi isi waqt hamesha ke lie[cryin & in gussa]main yahan paaar ghut-ghutkaar hi mar jaungi,apna dum tod dungi![then realises ki wht is she doin]paar,oh no!main itni selfish kaise ho saakti hoon,agar main yahan se chali gai aur contract tod dia to,papa ilaaj ke lie paise kahan se laungi,hey bhagwan main kya karu,kya karu[sits on the grd helplessly]

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udhat sujal is near the bridge with his sharab,soch aur tanhai mein duba hua

s-[maan mein]kyun ye jaante hue bhi ki tum mujse pyaar nahi mere paiso se pyaar kaarti ho...tabb bhi ye dil mujse ye kehta hai kii tumhare uss bhole se chehre paar,unn jheeel si ankhon paar,uss pyaar paar jo tumhari haar adaa mein hai,unpaar vishvaas karloon.kya maine tumhe galat samja hai?kya tum sach much chahti ho muje,pyaar kaarti ho mujse,paar kyun chahti ho muje,jisne
tumhe dard ke ilaawa kuch nahi dia,jise kabhi zindagi mein pyaar ka ehsaas nahi hua,kyun parwah kaarti ho iss khokhle insaan kii.paar agar aisa hai,phir bhi upar wale ne hum dono ki taqdeeren aisi banai hai kii hum dono kabhi ek nahi ho saakte,mujse pyaar kaarke kya paogi tum,mere haalaat ki andhi mein bikhaar jaogi tum,aur main tumhe tutta nahi dekh saakta,kyunki agaar tum tut gai to main kabhi jud nahi paunga.main tumhe khush dekhna chahta hoon kashish,aur main jaanta hoon ki tum mere saath kabhi khush nahi rahogi,mere saath dukhon ke siva kuch haasil nahi kaar paogi,tum bohot achi ho kashish,tumhe zindagi mein utna hi achcha jeevan saaathi milna chahie,ye zindagi se hi chot khaya hua insaan nahi.agaar tum mujse sachcha pyaar bhi kaarti ho to bhi hamari rahein alag hain kashsih,main jaanta hoon,ye baat manna mushkil hai mere lie bhi aur shayad tumhare lie bhi,paar main chahta hoon kii iss rishte ke khatam hone paar tumhari ankhon mein pachtava ya afsos nahi bass khushi ho,islie,main aise haalaat paida kaar dunga kii tumhe mujse nafraat ho,itna dard dunga,kii mere baare mein tum kabhi sochna bhi naa chaho.kashish dono hi baat mein-agar tum achi ho,ya buri,muje tumhe dukh hi dena hai,aur muje tumse dur hi jaana hai

neelu yaar yeh sujal bohot gusse wala hai itna chilata hai...biuchari kashish itni dair wait kar rahi thi phir bi woh uss par chila raha tha this part was very very scary 😭 and sad
aur is part mein i feel sorry for kashish she is being so polite to him par woh sujalurghhhh 😡 sach yaar yeh sujal ka character bara ajeeb hai kabi acha to kabi bura...and i liked the scene when sujal was feeling guilty about what he had done it was cute 😳 😳 but great parts 👏

ok nxt part-

kashish bohot der taak udaas baitkaar sochti rehti hai,phir realises kii kitni raat ho gai hai aur sujal ghar nahi aaya,wo kuch der zameen pe baithkaar wait kaarti hai,phir wahin so jaati hai.

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kuch ghante baad sujal ghar aata hai,nashe mein dhut,stumbling.he opens the door of the room,aur ladkhadata hai,bur darwaza pakad ke sambhal jaata hai,kashish kii bhi awaaz se neend khul jaati hai,wo uthke sujal ko sambhalne jaa hi rahi hoti hai,paar apne aap ko rok leti hai sujal ke baartaav ke baare mein sochkaar,wo baas leti hui hai.sujal also notices kii k is sleepin on the grd,aur usse laagta hai kii k so gai hai.

sujal ne itni pii hai kii wo ek kadam bhi ladkhadae bina chal nahi paa raha,wo side table se taakra jaata hai,aur uske haath se ek show piece girne hi wala hota hai

s-[drunk & shakin]shhhh.....shhhhhh...[2 the show piece]...sh...bilkul chup...dikhai nahi de raha...wo so rahi hai...

k ke ankhon se iss taraf asoo beh rahein hain,s ki iss halat ke lie,paar wo apne aap ko rok rahi hai,bhavnao mein behkaar s kii taraf bhagkaar usse sambhalne se.she clenches on her dupatta with her nails,2 stop her self

sujal nashe kii halat mein,baas 2 kadam uss show piece se dur hi gaya hota hai kii,phir mudta hai uss taraf jahan show piece hota hai

s-[not in sense,sozzled in drink]sh....sh....kaha naa chup...chup...agaar...ek...bhi...awaaz..kii..naa...to...mujs e...bura..koi ...nahi..hoga....jst...keep..quit...ok...[haaath idhar- udhar hilaate hue] ...kyunki...nahi...to...kashish....uth...jargi...ok...shhhhh hh

sujal then goes 2 where she is sleepin,kashish darr ke maare,shrinks a bit,wo kaaske apni ankhen baand kaar leti hai,he half sits on the floor aur looks at kashish aur uske sar pe bohot pyaar se haath fer ke,stumbles towards the bed & falls on the bed unconcious,kashish realisin tht he is unconcious gets up & glances toward him

neelu this part was very nice.. i feel this this part was nice because story aage badane ke liye yeh part bohat zaroori hain... as this part shows the emotions & feelings that are going through sujal , kashish..this part also shows that how these both are fighting those emotions... this part showed ki kaise un dono ki majboori unki zindagi ko pal pal maar rahi hain... this part was very damn awesome... the emotions potrayed by sujal & kashish were far far far far far far far far far far far
toooooooooooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.. i loved every dialogue og the part....
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tho kashish is angry , she is crying.. she decides to leave sujal...but is unable to because she needs money for her father's treatment....ohhh.. bechari.... she is so helpless.... she cannot do anything...... i feel very bad at her haalat... 🤢
lekin dusari taraf me khush kyunke majboori mein hi sahi she is stuck with sujal.... issi bahane woh sujal se durr nahi jaa sakthi...😆😆😆
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tho ab sujal bridge par hain... woh sharab pee raha hain.. yeh sujal bhi na kabhi sudhrega nahi.. pehle tho khud kashish ko takleef detha hain.. khud kashish ko apne se durr kartha hain.. phir sharab peetha hain in tanhayee... yeh sujal kab kya karega koi nahi keh saktha.. kabhi kuch kartha hain tho kabhi kuch.... usse samajna mushkhil hain.....🤔
tho ab sujal ko kahiin na kahiin yeh ehsaas ho gaya ki shayad kashish galat nahi... chalo yeh baat tho achchi hui... he thinks that may be kashish ka uske liye pyaar sachcha ho.. chalo sujal sahab dhair aaye durust aaye..... 👍🏼 tho now sujal feels ki kashish does not derserve him... tho sujal feels that kashish sahi ho ya ghalat he will tadpayify her kyunke woh sochtha hain kashish does not deserve a person like him jisko pyaar ki , rishtho ki , bhavnaao ki qadar nahi.... GOD..yeh sujal bhi na patah nahi kya kya sochthe rehtha hain.... yeh hakh sujal ko kissne diya ki woh faisla kare ki kashish ke liye woh sahi hain ya phir nahi.... sujal a very bad decision made in the end..... 👎🏼 neelu tum sujal se kehna ki ek baar sujal kashish ki aur humari nazar se dekhe tho usse patah chalega ki he is the perfect match for kashish & not a mismatch for kashish.....kyun main sahi hoon na ??? 😎
ab please jaldi se continue karo..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃

neelu dear maine abhi abhi ek part pe padke comment kiya aur tune aur ek part post kar di... you are simply toooo goooddddd neelu dear... ab is part ke baare mein main kya comments doon.. sach bataoon tho yeh part padne ke baad is part ka har ek scene mere aankhon ke aage ghoom raha hain seriously yaar... the scenes were tooo damn good.. me tho sujal ke is scene ko fanfiction mein best scene of the year ka award dethi hoon.....👏 simply awesome , mindblowing , superb... maine last comment mein kaha tha na ki sujal kab kya karega yeh koi nahi jaan sakthe.. see i was right.. just look at sujal in this part... is part mein sujal bada hi zabardast tha... aur sujal ne mujhe is part mein Devdas ke Shahrukh Khan ki yaad dila di...absolutely marvellous...... fantastic....muahh......... 👏
tho kashish is crying..but is still worried that sujal abhi thak ghar nahi aaya... toooo goooddd kashish... yeh hui na ek typical pati-vrata ki baat... sujal ke itna sab kuch karne ke baad bhi kashish is waiting for sujal aur woh wahii so jaathe hain.. toooo coollllllllllllll..... shabash kashish.... 😎 ab sujal kamre mein aatha hain..totally in a drunk state... aur woh ladkadathe hue chaltha hain.... aur kashish bhi uski aahat se uth jaathi hain.... she sees that sujal is not able to walk properly , woh har cheez se takra raha hain..sujal sees ki kashish wahiin baite baite so gayi hain... kashish wants to go hold him & take care of him.. but woh sujal ke rejection se darr rahi hain..... kashish ke aankhon se asoo ka behna.... phir sujal ka us show piece se baat karna.. the way he said..sh..shh.... warna kashish jaag jayegi.. his scolding the show piece.... very cute... very sweetttt........hye..hye...sujal pe tho main seriousl mar jawa mit jawa.......😳
aur akhir mein sujal ka kashish ke pass jaakar baithna uska uske sar par haath pherna.. kashish ka darr ke maare thoda simatna.... aur phir sujal ka bed par behosh ho jana .... and ab kashish ka utna & she going towards him... this scene really showed to what extent sujal , kashish love each other.. yeh scene ne sach mein unke dil mein dabi hui ek dusare ke liye bepanaah mohabbat ko dharshaya hain , unke pyaar ki ghehrayi ko dikhaya hain...... this scene was simply stupendous....... aur sujal ke us sh..sh.. scene pe tho main ek dum fida.. agar mere haath mein hotha tho i'll award it with the best scene of the year... 👍🏼
ab please continue soon...me waiting for the next part very very very very very very very very very damn eagerly... 😃

both the parts were wonderful. 👍🏼

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Wow neel too gud marvellous I don't hav words to describe the perfection of these three parts sorry I couldn't comment on these earlier due to my journey but really u did a great job……. You described emotions of sujal really well…. His confusions his anger his love his fear every thing u explained soooo welll that I was spell bound…I couldn't believe ki this is my neel whom ince i said ke u write too kiddish really am so proud of u neel … and yes your story is going very well… keep up the gud work will be waiting for the next part plzzzz post sooooon

really nice parts neel...gr8 job... 👏 👏 👏
jus luv all the parts...poor kashish she was so happy n sujal spoiled all her day...this sujal also na...cant understand..wht hez up2...@times hez so nice wid her..n on the other..hez so emotionless...anyways..the last part was mindblowng...the way sujal behaved when was drunk..n the show piece scence 2 good....
keep up the good work...n continue soon... 😊

HEY nilanjana m here to comment again... i know after quite a long time but was really preoccupied in work & stuff.... 😊
nywys ur story is gng gr8.... 👏 simply superb.... 👏
m njoying it a lot.... 😛
s-k k bich kabhi ek pal k liye pyaar 😉 aur baki takraar.... 😳
yaar sujal ek baar maan kyun nahi leta ki shayad usko hi galatfehmi hui hai... 😕 kyun baar baar khud ko aur kash ko itni taklif deta hai.... 😡 par i knw story is story 😳 heheheh lol 😆
aapke 9 chapters k naam bhi kafi intersting hai.... 😉
waiting for the story ahead... m sure as u said its gonna b really interesting... 😃

pls next part jaldi post karo naa just cant wait for the next part