Swaron OS:Ye Khalish jo hai..Wo Khamakha Nahi - Page 2

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

God, i will express my feelings this time in just one line!! 😳

"It was heart touchingly beautifully, and touched me beyond repair"

Deepy, tere paun kahan hain. forget feet tere haath kahan hain!! feel lots of kisses on the hands made by this god!! 🤗

Originally posted by: tejukor

Hey deepi ...
I know I know u will neverever pm me(I know mein utna bhi deserv nahi kerti 😭 )but I caught ur write up luckily...n it was indeed a treat or u can say double treat to read this after todays epi...the feelings which they were actually feeling inside their body but couldn't express eachother bcoz of the cruel game of Destiny...n u spoke their mind so beautifully k I was went back in swaronland for moment...marvelouslly penned down each n every word...just classy 😉

Originally posted by: meevee

Deepu - the outpouring of ur soul is reflected in this offering that u hav given us...i am sure many of us hav gone thru similar emotions after watching today's epi and u hav described perfectly in words what our feelings hav been...but then that is sumthing u do like a boss - as always hav revelled in ur writingthis time also ... may we b blessed with many more such swaronilicious moments

Originally posted by: blithe

Okay now, As I promised you, I am here to read an OS for the very first time. Also, I am eager to know your views on SwaRon. This title brought me here.

*Reserved*

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Well done deepika. The way you wrote it, I felt like I watching the episode again. Honestly, I was playing those scenes on my mind. I am sorry to say, its more like a post than a One-Shot.

Firstly, they way you started off with that line has set my mood. Unknowingly, I was drawn back to the episode. You became the voice of their thoughts. That was the ONLY and BIG difference. The thing that I liked more is that, along with the voice of their thoughts, you have mixed your thoughts too. That was something beautiful to read and this differentiates your post from other posts which I read till now on this forum regarding tonite's episode.

Secondly, the song altogather gave a AWESOME description. I really liked it. While reading, I felt a different experience. I mean in the episode, I watched a passionate SwaRon. And here, I am visualising the sweet-romantic SwaRon. You made that difference with your OWN style of writing. Kudoos to you, you have proved that the Same SwaRon scene can be as sweet as it was hot.

The line you brought from the trial-confession episode deserves a Thumps up to you.

And the line which I liked the most is that

"This madness is not without reason..I'm mad for him, but not without any reason.."

Also the para above this line, you wrote it good. And I gave my reviews after reading your work. I had to rate it I will rate it above Good.