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Posted: 12 years ago
sry for late cmnt...
busy with clg nd IIT..

coming back to os..
just readed all three parts.. nd i can say that its awesome
just loved it to the core...
eagerly waiting for next part...
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u soo mch for ur likes and comments it means a lott a ti us...🤗
Part 4
next morning
there's a lot of hustle bustle going on in the house due to the arrangements goin for the upcoming wedding.
yes finally it was the day the four couples swayum nd sharon , taani nd rey are gonna get married, people are all running here and there
sum arranging flowers on the wall, sum decorating the mandup, sum checking takin care of the food, sum guest list nd the elder(parents) checking all the arrangement for a successful wedding
and here our special team is taking care of the security, checking everything for a secure wedding.
kriya is roaming around the house dats when sum1 pulls her inside a room , bt she did not shout coz she knew the touch it was so similar , it was the touch she louved once , if sumone else wuld hav dared to do it by now he wuld hav been on ground, bt the touch was so familiar that she culd not do anything but just feel.
as soon as rey lookin those beautiful eye he comletely lost in those chocolate brown orbs ...like some one drowning in sea...kriya also lost in that brown dreamy eyes ...rey clutch kriya's waste firecly and due to the force she dashes in rey's chest, rey start kissing ... kriya on her shoulder then he give her love bite on her neck kriya left **sigh** nd moan his name ...it making rey crazy ...rey slip his hand in kriya's top kriya completely lost her sense because of rey's action she started unbottoning rey's shirt nd start kissing him on his chest rey automaticaly close his eyes nd feel the pasion the heat rising between them ...then rey cluth kriya's hair with one hand nd pull her in kiss ...both kissing very badely then rey made her way in mouth ...both licking sucking there lips there tongues dancing with each other rey ubotton kriya"s B** kriya hug rey tightly ...rey again start kissing her giving her love bite but suddenly kriya nd rey's cell ring nd both come back to there sense kriya push rey backword as rey holding kriya both fell on eachother nd again there lip touch each other ...but kriya try her best not to lost her sense again
so kriya stands up nd run from there with teary eyes
kriya ran into her room locked da door nd fell on the bed crying hard...
kriya- kyun rey kyu kyu aap aisa kar rahe hai plss itni mushkil se maine apne aapko sambhala tha ab mai kamzor nai pad sakti...ek taraf aap kehte ho aap mujhse pyaar karte ho aur dusri taani se shaadi kar rahe ho y don't u accept it u luv taani nt me...u hav moved on bt mai wahi par hun nahi mai aisa kch nai hone dungi, mai rey k saath NO, mai sirf apne case k liye aayi hun i hav to concentrate on my case aur kch nahi, mai kamzor nai pad sakti, i cn't let this happen ek baar yeh case khatm ho jaaye phir rey apne raaste aur mai apne raaste humare beech na kch tha aur na kch ho sakta hai, WE R NOT MEANT TO BE'and straightens herself freshen ups and go out for her work
after kriya run from there rey straightens himself again buttons his shirt nd lay on bed while a big smile stick on his face ...
then rey's mom enter in room ...
rey's mom : bohat khush ho tum a bayi aj tumhari shaadi jo hey khush to hogey hi
rey ; mom mujey ap sey kuj baat karni hey ...
rey's mom : batey baad mey first ready ho jao
after her mom leave rey lost his smile nd tear start flowing
rey's pvo
mujey pta tha ki kriya muj sey bohat pyaar karti hey or abhi jo hamarey beech hua wo dhokha nahi hey she love me alot i know this wo desire dekhi hey maney uski ankho mey vo passion love everything ...she loves me completely or j baat main samaz chuka hoo ... she is only mine or main kisi or sey shaadi main esa scoh b kesey sakta ho ... mujey kriya ko paney k liye sab ka dil torna hoga but main kya kroo mujey esa karna hoga ...kriya k liye j shaadi tori hogi mujey taani ko kehna hoga ki main sirf kriya sey pyaar karta hoo mujey pta hey usey bura lageyga but main kriya ko is baar janey nahi dey sakta bad ab main or intzaar nahi kar sakta ...
nd rey leave toward taani's room
taani was gettin ready when she saw rey she gt confused
taani- rey aap yahan kya akr rahe ho? agr aapko kisine dekh liya toh kya sochenge? shaadi se pehle hum nai mil sakte
rey- taani woh mai...
taani - rey i noe aap mujhe miss kar rahe the (miss my foot)
bt thodi der ki hi toh baat hai phir hum humesha k liye saath honge
rey- taani actually mai kehna chahta tha kji mai yeh shaadi nai kar sakta..
this was a big blow for taani
taani- rey aap aisa kasie mazak kar rahe ho ...cum on aaj k din toh aisa mazak mat karo
rey- taani m serious, look taani i noe mai bahut bada idiot hun gadha hun bt look mai tumse shaadi nai kar sakta hu coz i luv kriya and this wuld be unfair agr mai tumse shaadi karu coz mai kriya se pyaar karta hun nd mai tumhe woh khushi nai de sakta jo tum deserve karti ho nd yeh shaadi successful nai hogi i dnt want u to suffer because of me , pls try to understand
taani- rey pls dis is gettin worst aap aisa mazaak kaisa kar sakte ho, u luv me right phir yeh sab? tell me rey yeh sab bas apka ek prank hai na
rey- taani pls m NOT joking nd naah yeh koi prank this is the truht taani...i dnt wanna get married to u coz i luv kriya...karta hun nd humesha karta rahunga, main yeh shaadi sirf apne parents k liye kar raha tha I hav never loved u nor will ever, I like u dats it...
suddenly there was loud voice THAAK!!!...rey was too shock to react wat happened? his hand was on is cheek..taani slapped him??
no no it was'nt taani it was sumbody else...it was swayum
okk done
no complaints about the length pls aroma k exams hai
I noe humne bola tha yeh 3 parts mei khatam ho jayega bt hua nai ...i guess it has turned into a SS hehehehe..
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Edited by cookie_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res..unres awesum update luv bt hate tani chudail n swayam zyada posesive ban gya ya kriya ka sath de rha hai.. 😲
Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...swayum slapped rey...but y???thanks 4the pm...pls update next part asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

osssooomm updateee...

loved it...

rey deserved a slap...

whatevr b d reasn...

bt whatevr he is doing nw means breaking d marriage is grt...

update soon...

thanxxx 4 pm
Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res Done 🤣
haaso or hasooo or hasooo 🤣
love it n slap awosm kya slap tph banata hai rey 😉
n update soon🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
grt wrK🤣🤣🤣 love it
n paper toh yaha sabke hi hai soo DOn't😉
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing...😛

kriyaansh ke steamy kisses... ekdam hawwttt ☺️

rey bhi chance dhundh rha tha... hehehe chalu 😉

ufff... ye cellphones

mom ne to suna hi nhi iski 🤔

lol... taani ki galatfehmi... isko kaun yaad karega 🤢

swayam se slap 😲

abhi to baki logon se bhi padenge... sach bolne valo ki kadar hi nhi h 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh no yeah to bahut complicated ho gya...
Swayam ne rey ko thappad mara...
Ye sb us tanni nani ki wajha se agar wo nahi hoti to swayam aur rey mein ladai ho gai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome loved it

tani ko toh wakaye mei aisa jaatka real mei bhi mele
she deserve this

and hope kriyaansh ek hojaye

awesome blossome update loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update
Hate dat tani to d core
Thanx for d pm

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