Virman SS-Second Chance (Thank you Note/pg21)

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Hey Ayesha,

How are you feeling now? I hope you are feeling better. As for the SS- Second Chance, after reading "Beyond Control" I thought you can't write anything more intense and mature than that. But you proved me wrong. This SS portray's yet another height of intensity and maturity of Virat and Manvi's relationship. The ending was different and beautiful as it hold's a hope for better future and off course their love 🤗."By the way I am in love with "Beyond Control" and it has a very special place in my heart".

Plz do write the epilogue and thanx for the PM.😃

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Wondrful update. .unexpectd ending but its really nice. plz write epilogue also. .thanks 4 pm

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Wattt??? Dis was d enddd
no yr plzzz write more its really excitingg nd fab story
plzzz contnu

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Beautiful..⭐️! Amazing Update...! loved each expression and the way Maanvi has explained Virat about love n about her feelings...n the unxpected twist towards the end..loved it...👍🏼u kept it practical...yes i guess sometimes one needs to be selfish in such matters...*reading again* :) eager for the next update..! Thnks for the PM~!

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Hey Ayesha how are you? Hope you are feeling better now.. Coming to the update, it was awesome as usual ⭐️.. I guess I have to find new words to praise your talent.. Loved it to the core.. The ending was very unexpected but it was beautiful and natural.. Loved the way Manvi handled the whole situation.. It was very commendable 👏.. Hope they have a better future ahead of them.. Please write the epilogue.. I would love to read it.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Beautiful ending

Thanks for the pm!!

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Superb update!!!
Loved it!!
Ending was unexpected but written beautifully!!!
Love how manvi handled the situation!!!
Amazing SS!!!
Your an awesome writer, can't wait 4 the epilogue!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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virman223

@virman223

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Aww it was lovely well i really wanted to see manvi falling in love but it was too good the way you expressed theirvfeelingsand yes please do write an epilogue and thanks for the pm 👏