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Posted: 13 years ago

HELLO,

I M BACK...A BIG THAKNS TO ALL FOR COMMENTING AND LIKIND D PREVIOUS PART...HERE GOES D 5TH PART...HOPE U ALL ENJOY IT...


5th PART:- A BIRHTDAY GIFT


D NXT DAY MADHU GET WID MEMORIES OF HER FIRST DATE ALL BLUSHING REMEMBERING ABOUT D KISS "THANK YOU BABJI FOR ALL DIS"…SHE ☺️SATARTS TO GET READY FOR COLLEGE…AFTER SOMETIME TRISH COMES AND ASK MADHU ABOUT HER DATE…SHE AGAIN BLUSH TRISH UNDERSTAND HER ND JUMP IN EXCITEMENT "SO HAPPY FOR U DEAR U HV TAKEN RIGHT DECISION I KNOW HE WILL NEVER HURT U AS HE HAD PROMISED ME"…

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RK IS GIVING HIS SHOT…AFTER SOMETIME HIS SHOT FINISH AND DIRECTOR SHOUTS CUT "PERFECT NXT SHOT AFTER 15 MINS"…

RK:-(WID SMIRK) I M PERFECT…HE GOES TO HIS GREEN ROOM AS HE HAS 15 MINS THOUHT TO MESSAGE MADHU…

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BOTH LEFT FOR COLLEGE SSUDDENLY MADHU"S CELL BLINK UP WID MESSAGE SHE LUK AT IT… "GOOD MORNING LOVE"…A BIG SMILE😃 APPEARS ON HER FACE SEEING DIS TRISH AGAIN TEASE HER…MADHU REPLY "GOOD MORNING MR. 'S' "…

TRIS:-MADHU YESTERDAY I LIED TO ASH DAT U R GONE TO UR HOME… I WANTED U TO INFORM HIM ABOUT DIS… DAT'S Y…

MADHU:-IT'S OK TRISH I WILL TELL HIM… I KNOW HE WILL ALSO HAPPY FOR ME AFTERALL HE IS MY BEST FRIEND…

MESSAGE "WAT IS MR.'S' I WANT KNOW…"

"I WILL TELL U WHEN WE WILL MEET AGAIN…OK BYE CLASS IS STARTING"…

RK READ D MESSAGE ND SMILES WID HIS SMIRK "OK LOVE AS U WISH"…

AFTER TWO HOUR D LAST LEC IS GOING ON AGAIN MADHU'S CELL VIBRATE SOMEHOW SHE READ D MESSAGE AND HER FACE OPENS IN BIG 'O' SHAPE…"COMING TO MEET U IN 1 HOUR"…SHE JUST CURSE HERSELF AS Y SHE SAID DAT "I WILL TELL U WHEN WE WILL MEET AGAIN"…AS D LEC COMES TO END HER HERATBEAT STARTS BEATING FAST…

MADHU:-TRISH HE IS COMING AT COLLEGE TO MEET ME…

TRISH:-WOW!! SO D MEETING AND ALL STARTED AHANN…

MADHU:-TRISH IT'S NOT SO GOOD IF ANYONE WILL SEE HIM U KNOW WAT WILL HAPPEN AFTER DAT…😔

RISH:- YUP DAT IS PROBLEM…U TEXT HIM TO MEET IN COLLEGE PARKING AS IT'S IN BASEMENT NO ONE WILL BE THERE AT LUNCH TIME SO DAT WILL BE SAFE…

MADHU:- I THINK U R RIGHT ND U R COMING WID ME ND ALSO ASH… I ALSO WANT ASH TO MEET HIM…(MADHU TEXT RK ABOUT PLACE)

ASH COMES THERE AND ASK MADHU "HI TRISH…HI MADHU…BTW MADHU Y R U LUKING SO TENSE"

MADHU:- NOTHING I WANT TO TELL U SOMETHING COME WID US…

THREE OF DEM GOES TO PARKING AREA…NOBODY WAS THER ONLY RK IS WAITING FOR HER… TRISH INTORDUCE RK ND ASH BY SAYING "RK DIS OUR FRIEND ASHISH U CAN CALL HIM ASH AND ASH AS U KNOW HIM WELL BUT D NEW THING IS DAT RK ND MADHU R DATING EACH OTHER…SORRY FOR YESTERDAY ASH I LIED TO U…

AFTER HEARING ABOUT RK AMND MADHU D WHOLE WORLD STARTED REVOVLING AROUND HIM…HE IS BADLY HURT DAT TO WHOM HE LOVES D MOST IN D WORLD IS KNOW SOMEONE ELSE GF…HE IS SO SHOCK DAT DIDN'T NOTICE RK HAS SAID HELLO TO HIM FOR TWO OR THREE TIMES… AT LAST MADHU SHAKE HIM ND HE COMES IN TRANCE…AS RK IS ABOUT TO TALK WID MADHU TRISH INTERRUPTED AND SAID " NO 1ST I WANT TO TALK WID U RK SO COME WID ME"…RK AND TRISH GOES SOME DISTANCE AWAY FROM DERE…MADHU ND ASH R JUST STANDINDING THERE ONLY…ASH ASK MADHU "I WANT TO TALK U"…

TRISH:-OK!!! SO MR. RK U JUST STEAL MY BEST FRIEND FROM ME SO EASILY JUST IN ONE DAY HMMM…

RK:- YUP DEAR U KNOW I M RK (RK SAYS WID HIS USUAL SMIRK)…

TRISH:-YA YA I KNOW U…BUT U HV PROMISED ME SOMETHING U SHOULD ALSO REMEMBER MR. RK…I KNOW U WILL KEEP UR 1ST PROMISE OF NOT HURING HER BUT WAT ABOUT 2ND ONE???

RK:- I ALSO KNOW ABOUT DAT TOO… AS PER MY PROMISE I HV SEND A BIG PHOTO OF MINE AT UR HOME U WILL GET IT WHEN U WILL REACH HOME…

TRISH:- THANK YOU…(BY SAYING DIS SHE LEANED NEAR HIS EAR ND WHISPERS SOMETHING)…

TRISH:-REMEMBER DIS ALSO IT'S MY 2ND HELP TO U…

RK :-SURE TRISH DEAR…U WILL BE A GOOD FUTURE SISTER-IN-LAW…

TRISH:- I M!!!

OTHER SIDE,

ASH:- MADHU IS DIS TRUE??? ND Y DIDN'T U TELL ME BEFORE???

MADHU:- YES ASH…ND IT ALL HAPPEN SO SUDDENLY DAT I DIDN'T GET TIME TO INFORM U ND ALL DIS HAPPEN YESTERDAY ONLY ASH…

ASH:- U LOVE HIM???

MADHU:- YA I REALLY LOVE HIM ND HE ALSO LOVES ME TOO…

ASH:- R U SURE DEAR DAT U WANT TO BE IN RELATIONSHIP… AS U KNOW ABOUT UNCLE AUNTY IF DEY WILL COME TO KNOW ABOUT DIS ALL THINGS WAT THEY WILL DO WID U…

MADHU:- I KNOW DAT BUT NOW I CAN'T REGRET MY FEELINGS FOR HIM…U DON'T KNOW ASH I LOVE RK SINCE I HAD 1ST TIME SAW HIM…ABOUT MOM AND DAD I WILL INFORM DEM WHEN D RIGHT TIME WILL COME…I CAN TRUST RK HE HAD ALSO PROMISED ME DAT OUR RELATIONSHIP WILL NEVER COMES IN BETWEEN MY STUDIES…

ASH:- OK DEN IF U TRUST HIM ND U R HAPPY ALSO SO ME TOO HAPPY FOR U…

BY SAYING DIS ASH LEFT ROM THER WID HIS BROKEN HEART…💔HIDING HIS ALL PAIN IN HIMSELF…TRISH AND RK COMES TO MADHU…TRISH ALSO LEFT FROM THERE BY SAYING "HV A GOOD TIME U BOTH"…

MADHU:- Y U COME HERE???

RK:- U JUST FORGET IT SO EARLY 'LOVE'…

MADHU:- (INNOCENTLY) WAT I DON'YT KNOW ANYTHING…

RK PULLS HER ND SHE BANG WID HIS CHEST.." NOW U REMEMBER"…

MAHU:-RK WAT R U DOING SOMEONE WILL SEE US PLZZ LEAVE ME…

RK:-I WILL NOT LEAVE U UNTIL U REMEMBER DAT WAT U HAD SAID… RK COMES NEAR MORE ND MORE TO HER AT LAST SHE SAYS " YES I REMEMBER!!! I REMEMBER!!!..."

RK:- SO TELL ME KNOW WAT DOES IT MEAN…

MADHU:- IT MEANS 'SUPERSTAR' MR. 'S'…NOW U GET IT PLZZ LEAVE ME NOW…

RK RELEASE HIM " OK 'LOVE' "

MADHU:- KNOW U SHOULD LEAVE ROM HERE LUNCH BREAK IS GOING TO OVER…PLZ GOO…

RK:-YES ME GOING ONLY TAKE CARE I WILL CALL U TONIGHT…BY SAYING DIS HE HUGS HER AND LEFT FROM THER…MADHU ALSO WENT FROM THERE TO ATTAIN PRACTICALS ALL BLUSHING AGAIN…☺️

THE NXT DAY, RK IS SITTING IN HALL DISCUSSING ABOUT HIS SHEDULES WID BITTUJI…

RK:-BITTUJI WAT R D SCHEDULES AFTER FOUR DAYS???

BITTUJI:- CHIEF AFTER FOUR DAYS U HV OUTDOOR SHOOTS FOR FILM…

RK:- WAT??? U JUST CANCEL DEM ND INFORM D DIRECTOR ALSO…

BITTUJI:- BUT Y CHIEF ALL ARRANGEMENTS R DONE TICKETS R ALSO BOOKED… ND IF I WILL CANCEL DEM THAT DIRECTOR KUKKU BHATTIA WILL STARTS HIS TANTRUM U KNOW HIM CHIEF…

RK THINKS " AS TRISH HAD TOLD ME (WHISPERS IN HIS EAR) AFTER FOUR DAYS IT'S MADHU'S BIRTHDAY I HV TO BE WID HER ONLY…WAT WILL I DO KNOW… AFTER SOMETIMES AN IDEA CLICKS IN HIS MIND ND A BIG SMILE APPEARS ON HIS FACE…

RK:-OK BITTUJI DON'T CANCEL D SHOOT…IT'S FINE…

BITTUJI:- R U SURE CHIEF…

RK:- YA BITTUJI IT'S OK…

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AFTER DAT D THREE DAYS PASSED IN ALL DAT DAYS RISHBALA EVERY NIGHT TALK WID EACH OTHER SOMETIME RK ALSO COMES TO MEET HER AT COLLEGE…A DAY BEFORE MADHU'S BIRHDAY RISHABAL R TALKING ON CELL AT NIGHT… MADHU IS THINKING HOW TO TELL RK DAT TOMORROW IS HER BIRTHDAY JUST DEN RK SAYS "OK 'LOVE' I M REALLY TIERD NEED TO SLEEP ND U SHOULD ALSO SLEEP NOW IT'S 11 PM"..

MADHU:- BUT I WANT TO SAY SOMETHING TO U…

RK:- NO 'LOVE' WE CAN ALSO TALK TOMORROW…OK BYE LOVE YOU GOOD NIGHT…

MADHU:- (ANGRILY)😡 BYE GOOD NIGHT… BEFORE RK CAN SAY SOMETHING SHE CUTS D CALL…RK JUST LAUGH AT HER ACTION…😆

AFTER 45 MINS MADHU HEARS KNOCK AT HER ROOM'S DOOR…SHE THINKS FOR WHILE ND OPENS D DOOR…SHE GET SO SURPRISE AS RK IS STANDING INFRONT OF HER… FIRST SHE CAN'T BELIEVE TO HER EYES ND PINCH HERSELF…😵

MADHU:- RK WAT R U DOING HERE AT DIS TIME???

RK:- CAN I COME INSIDE DEN ANSWER UR QUES???

MADHU PULLS HIM IN ROOM AND STARTS BOMBARDING QUE AT HIM…WAT R U DOING HERE???, U KNOW WAT'S D TIME NOW???, HOW U COME IN HOSTEL ND GET KNOW ABOUT MY ROOM???, IF ANYONE WILL SEE U HERE I M JUST GONE… JUST DEN RK PULLS HER PLACING ONE OF HIS HAND ON HER WAIST ND SECOND HAND ON HER LIPS…

RK:- SSHHH!!! I WANT TO MEET U SOO I JUST CAME HERE AND ABOUT HOW I ENTER IN HOSTEL… I JUST GIVE MONEY TO DAT LADY ND SHE HAD ONLY TOLD ME ABOUT UR ROOM… IF ANYONE WILL SEE ME DEN NO ONE WILL DO ANYTHING TO U AS I M WID U HERE SO JUST CHILL 'LOVE'…

MADHU JUST NODDED HER HEAD IN YES ND MOVES AWAY FROM HIM…" OK NOW SERIOUSLY TELL ME Y R U HERE"

RK:- I THINK I ALREADY ANS UR DIS QUE…RK GOES ND SIT ON EDGE OF D BED…MADHU COMES ND STANDS INFRONT OF HIM GLARING AT HIM IN ANGER…RK STANDS ND PUTS HIS HAND ON HER EYE SAYS "NOW U WILL GET UR ANS" AND SHOUTS "COME IN'…JUST DEN D SAME LADY COMES ND PLACE SOMETHING RK THANKS HER ND SHE LEFT FROM THERE BY CLOSING D DOOR…RK SLOWLY REMOVES HIS HAND…AS MADHU OPENS HER EYES HER MOUTH A BIG SMILE😃 APPEARS ON HER FACE… A BEAUTIFULL TABLE DECORATED WID RED ROSES AND A HEART SHAPE CHOCOLATE CAKE IS PLACED ON IT…

MADHU:- HOW DO U KNOW DIS…

RK:- (WID HIS SMIRK) 'LOVE' U R FORGETING I M UR RK D SUPERSTAR I KNW EVERYTHING ABOUT U…(WINKS)…😉

MADHU:- OH REALLY MR.'S'…BTW IT'S BEAUTIFULL…

RK:- OK NOW IT'S 12 CUT DD CAKE MY BIRTHDAY GIRL…

MADHU CUTS D CAKE ND RK SINGS FOR HER " HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U…HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U 'LOVE'…🥳MADHU FEEDS CAKE TO RK ND RK ALSO FEEDS HER…

RK:- GIVE REST OF D CAKE TO TRISH AS SHE IS D RASON BEHIND DIS…

MADHU:-SO TRISH HAD TOLD U ABOUT MY BIRTHDAY…OK WHERE IS MY GIFT???

RK:- UR GIFT IS INFRONT OF U 'LOVE' U CAN HV IT (RK SAYS POINTING TOWARDS HIMSELF)…

MADHU:- VERY FUNNY NOW PLZZZ GIVE MY GIFT…

RK:- WO ACTUALLY I!!!! I!!!...

MAHU:- WAT??? U DIDN'T BOUGHT ANY GIFT FOR ME…HMMM…WAT KIND OF BF U R (MADHU COMES NEAR ND NEAR TO HIM AS SHOUTING)…NO I WANT MY GIFT NOW!!! NOW!!! NOW!! (SUDDENLY SHE GET STOP ND CLOSE HER EYES NOT KNOWING WAT IS JUST HAPPENING)…

AS RK HAD STOPPED HER BT DIS TIME NOT PLACING HIS HAND BT BY PLACING HIS LIPS ON HER…BOTH INDULGED IN THEIR FIRST SWEET PASSIONATED KISS…❤️

AFTER FEW MINS RK STEPS BACK ND AGAIN LEANS NEAR HER EARS AND WHISPERS "NOW U GET UR GIFT 'LOVE' (SMILES )"😊…MADHU IS JUST FREEZE THERE STILL HER EYES R CLOSED ND SHE CAN'T FACE HIM SO HUGS HIM RK ALSO HUGS HER BACK AS TIGHTLY AS HE CAN…MADHU SPOKE SOFTLY "YES MR.'S' I GOT MY GIFT (SHE SMILES TOO)😊"…

AFTER 5 MINS MADHU MOVES AWAY BOTH HV A CUTE EYELOCK…THEN MADHU SPEAKS UP " I THINK U SHOULD LEAVE KNOW IT'S TOO LATE"…

RK:- YES BEFORE DAT I WANT TO TELL U SOMETHING…

MADHU:- WAT???

RK:- I M GOING FOR OUTDOOR SHOOT TOMORROW…

MADHU:- WHEN WILL U RETURN???

RK:- AFTER FOUR DAYS…SORRY I WILL NOT BE WID U TOMORROW…(HE PLACE HIS BOTH HAND ON HIS EAR)…

MADHU:- IT'S OK RK I HV CELEBRATED D MOST BEAUTIFULL BIRTHDAY OF MY LIFE TODAY WID U…

RK:- I LOVE YOU…

MADHU:- I LOVE YOU TOO MR.'S'…

RK PLACE A SOFT KISS ON HER FORHEAD ND GOES OUT OF ROOM…MADHU SAYS BYE TO HIM ND LOCKS D DOOR…AGAIN A KNOCK KNOCK AT D DOOR…MADHU OPENS D DOOR…

MDHU:- YES…

RK:- I WANT TO SEE U FOR D COMING FOUR DAYS SO I CAN LEAVE WIDOUT U DIS DAYS…

MADHU JUST LOST IN HIS EYES MEANWHILE SHE FEELS DAT SOMETHING HAS TOUCH HER FINGER SOFTLY ND SHE SEE DOWN…AGAIN SURPRISE…A BEAUTIFULL DIAMOND RING SHINING AT HER HAND…

MADHU:- RK!!!

RK:- HOW CAN I FORGET A GIFT FOR MY 'LOVE'…

MADHU:- SO DAT KISS… U CHEATER U HV BROUGHT D GIFT ND LIED TO ME ND KISSED ME…NOT FAIR U R CHEATER!!! CHEATER!!!...

RK:- I M NOT CHEATER 'LOVE' DON'T CALL ME DAT…

MADHU:- NO U R…FROM NOW UR NAME ALSO CHANGE FROM MR. 'S' TO MR. 'C'…

RK:- IN DAT CASE JUST GIVE BACK MY KISS…

MADHU:- WAT???

RK:- NO NO I M CHEATER SO GIVE MY KISS BACK…( RK COMES NEAR TO HER)…

MADHU:- OK!!! OK!!! U R NOT CHEATER U R MY MR. 'S' ONLY…NOWW PLZZ LEAVE…

RK:- DAT'S GOOD BY 'LOVE' GOOD NIGHT TAKE CARE…

MADHU:- U TOO BYE…

BY THIS AGAIN A MOST PRECIOUS DAY OF THERE LOVE LIFE ENDED WID MOST BEAUTIFULL MEMORIESS OF THERE FIRST KISS….❤️❤️❤️


DO COMMENT AND LIKE IT MBIANS...


LOVE AND THANKS

ZOHRA (SURU)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hayee !! Rishbala's 1st kiss
Dreamy Update Suru..!!
Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahhhaaa...awesome update..liked RKs gift...thanx for pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
FAB update 👏
Lovely Rishbala Moments 😃 Madhu's B'day gift 😆
Diamond ring for her..very sweet 😃

Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update dear, but i can't see this rk so sweet lol. that ash is getting on my nerves. plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Suru mind blowing update..😃 So cute & full of romance Rk was true superstar!! Ash I am not totally convinced about him..😕He is up to something..Can't wait to read more..plzz continue .😊Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
all updates r really awsome.plz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOTE:-
A BIG SORRY TO ALL I HV NOT PM...I WAS JUST SENDING PM TO ALL BUT SOME PROBLEM OCCURED IN PC ND IT SHUT OFF SO SOME OF U GOT D PM ND MANY OF NOT SORRY TO DEM...JUST NOW I M OPERATING NET THRU CELL ND FROM CELL NOT ABLE TO SEND PM...HOPE U ALL UNDERSTAND MBIANS...
DUE TO PROBLEM IN PC NXT UPDATE WILL SOMEWHAT LATE...I WILL TRY TO UPDATE IT ASAP...FROM NXT TIME ALSO SURELY PM U ALL...
Edited by zoshad3119 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey suru awsm update hey plz i really want that rk love will never come in btw madhu studies.
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Posted: 13 years ago
itna sweet RK diabetis ho jayega... but its nice...want 2 see some drk sides of him

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