FF: OS 'Baatein Sufiana' - Page 4

Originally posted by: sweetshine

WOW this is such a BEAUITFUL one😳...mindblowingly written👏...you have explained the depth of every feeling soo beauitfully and have kept both the characters so true to their personality😳, i love the way you wrote his confession and his feelings after that haha that was so Asad-ish😆😛...loved the ending it was amazing, the pain of rejection the heart breaking in that jiff of a sec and then searching for her madly aww it was really nice and Zoya responding with a hug that was cutee😳

and your writing is really Superb👏😳luvd it😃

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Btw i love the song Baatein Sufiyana❤️

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

Ok... so this OS... uh...

erm...

Well to be quite honest... I think you should get the hell out of IF...

AND GO FREAKIN WRITE THE SCRIPT OF THE SHOW!!!!! I WANT TO SEE THIS now now NOW!!!!! No legit like break into 4Lions and be like "Shweta's Orders" because this was so fudging SURREAL!!! His turmoil, his feelings, EVERY BLOODY THING!!!! I loved it so much I read it NOT ONCE, NOT TWICE, but THREE TIMES and I'm off to read it once more! I love the Dilshaad-Asad bit too, I loved the Asad visiting the door and turning back and the way your described it, I loved the bloody everything!!! OMG I can't!! You need to write another part if not another OS woman!! You are so good this OS, I can't even begin to... IT MADE ME FEEL THINGS!!! It made me feel what the characters were feeling, it made me feel! I think you are gifted woman! I loved it so much I don't think I can properly express in one comment how much I loved it! *Shweta Wala E-Hug*

And scrap/pm/something me when you write more!!!

-Champak Bhumiya (Shwetz)