Shantanu OS : Ready To Fly [Note:Pg 7] - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
hey neeti🤗

awesome os dear 👏

d way u hav potrayed his state of mind is just fab...d thoughts which might be crossing his mind...u described it so perfectly

i luved dis lines

Even though he tried to give his best to each and every scene, people would still talk about how there was no Sharon for such a long time.

Hot tears spilled out of his eyes. He lay on the bed, crying for a long time. It made him feel better, atleast he was letting out his frustration in some way. He had no one in the big, lonely city with whom he could share his problems with. So this is what he had to resort to.


it described wat phase he had went thrugh n eveen i cried while reading dis...just amazing yaar

n den his mom's letter...d beautiful,pure,n most divine relation in dis world...n u described d emotions so well...hatts off to u girl👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Wonderful os neeti!
Respect you totally!
You penned down shantanus pov so well!
It gave us an idea of his state of mind as well!
A guy who has just entered adulthood has to satisfy such a big fanbase!
All the emotions were so intense nd well executed!
Shantanu must read this os nd now that he has fans like you understand him so well!
Gr8 job do write more:) one of your finest nd most mature wrok!
PS the letter was a beautiful addition!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
you are a amazing writer...
this kind of OS is not very easy to write...

"WOW"...awsome job done by you

i really wish Shantanu reads this 😊

keep writing 👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Awesome update Neeti...loved it... 😊
Edited by sweetsimi123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
This OS stole my heart ..😳 simply beautiful..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
My dear SSS...🤗
what an amazing thought dear...😲 😳
I have simply lost my words after reading it!!!!
great thought!!!! just can say... simply awesome...😊
love you...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This OS is truly a beautiful piece of work, no more words could tell how I felt while reading this, as if its written straight from Shantanu's heart.

Amazing Neeti.

Thank you for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome os nice work keep writing more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome!!! I want shantanu to read dis!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its amazing neeti... 😃

the way u portrayed the turmoil of emotions... of a tv celeb 😳

the fame... money... love of fans... does'nt matter... when a person does'nt have anyone to share his feelings with 😭

& his mom's letter worked as a best remedy to cure his loneliness... her motivating words... 🤗

maa sab jaanti h 😆

the pressure of fans... on their favourite couple- swaron... is definitely disturbing his peace...

no matter fans love them alot... but this craze is dangerous... 🤪

& top of that... his co-star is changed...

suddenly he have to act all again the same with a new gal 😳

very well penned down...👏

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