One shot (II)- Unexpectedly Expected, Together [Note- 6/9/19; Pg. 42]

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Just finished reading UE in one go ...you are one fantastic writer . It is undoubtedly one of the most entertaining , beautifully crafted pieces of writing that i've had the pleasure of reading on IF ...wish i'd known about it earlier but happy too that i got the complete story ...

,,Be it subtle and tongue in cheek or loud and smart and sassy, the humour had me laughing throughout and that you could manage to retain the tempo till the end ...well ,it,s amazing .

My sincere advice , bind up the whole and send it to a good movie PH , would make a fab rom-com, or failing that IPK season 2 -- as a totally new story with the same actors --- although with a predetermined time frame ...

in any case hope you keep writing ...thnx for a wonderful experience.

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

I read the whole FF and now the OS almost in two three days and that's because u r a superb writer and the story itself was and is wonderful with such amazing dialogues. Love how u play with words. Had to stop for several times because of laughing or better ROFL. 😆

Also started reading ur other works and for future please pm me when u r posting something or any updates. Thanx. 😊

Edited by A_R_S - 12 years ago

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

I'm so, so, so happy that the second epilogue is here, oh how I missed cement pile & Lattu. Unceremoniously stomping on his foot to end kisses? 😆 Only Khushi can do this. These two are just so cute, I absolutely loved the OS. Thank you for writing this. :)

Edited by -Shalu- - 12 years ago

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trolldemortx

@trolldemortx

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Ohh man.. THIS made my day.. Hehe.. :D <3

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kria1996

@kria1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

amazing !

i read ur whole fan fic in 1 go !

must tell u it was fun reading it !

it was hilarious and lovely too..

u are a fab writer !!

plz do pm me when u write anything further ! :)

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daljeet

@daljeet

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

hey dear...I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH!🤗

How do you come up with these stuffs dear, I just loved it. Amazing!!!!

I can't forget this story.

Do you know what I wish to tell you now?

what Shahid said to Kareena in Jab we Met.

" you are an ORIGINAL PIECE. THERE IS NOBODY LIKE YOU IN THIS WORLD LEFT"

not in north or south or west or eat of this entire universe!!!!!😉

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Gunjan

@..Gunjan..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Wow...amazing
Loved it !
Always so funny and cute

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Viji

@-Viji-

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Awww...such a adorable update...
Always loved ths story of urs...
Thanks for the pm..

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luvbug

@luvbug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

haha tht was awesome... just too gud... n the vows ahem ahem 😳

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

this one was mind blowing, outstanding

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

only you can wrote like this, and I mean it, your comedy is superb, mind blowing. Nihaal is really funny, in the previous one I was missing his comady but thanks to putting him in this one, wow Anjali is going to marry Nihaal soon. And Aakash and Payal are engaged, i'm happy for them.

Wow Arnav and Khushi are married😊. Loved the part when she blackmailed him with the vows he takes during their wedding, she is super and she can do something like this, but Arnav is not the less, just loved the way he teased her, for knowing the meaning of a certain vow 😳

SIMPLY LOVED IT TO THE CORE ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

thanks for the pm and continue soon.