I like how you are slowly setting the stage...these people are very normal and totally relatable..there is nothing over the top about any one ..positive and negative...garima telling khushi to meet the prospective groom and decide to marry later, khushi holding NKay's hand, khushi making the excuse that her mom is calling, akash passing the phone to Arnav, everything really normal and relatable...
writing about normal things is more difficult than writing over the top drama, a according to me...and you did complete justice to it...
And teething problems seem to be from personal experience..hope your baby is doing fine now...and forgive me if I am wrong about this one...
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