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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -Deeps-

Now that's something really really interesting. Facebook is like the trend now. 😆

Viren a rich spoilt brat? 😳 Wohoo! Can't wait to see his new character.

Awesome concept. Continue really really really really soon! 😆


i can actually understand ur feelingd on knwing the word 'spoilt brat' 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Aaliyahhh! Continue sooon! 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Hello everyone! Here am back with the first part of this relieving what the story is.

And yes, i wanted to say that i could regularly update this if i get good comments and likes, so feed backs please!

Part 1

Ever seen a guy who drives like maniac in a ridiculous big

car? The guy with the powerful dad? The big house? Well he's the one!

Viren Vadhera

He is not flashy, but he has big car and house. There's no

hiding in that. He stands five feet and ten inches and look like someone you
could probably drop in for! Sexy, perfectly built, and handsome- this is what
his matrimonial ad could have looked like.

Well, it was just another morning for him, he was in no

hurry again! Life was awesome, he did not have any worries about the early
morning lectures, shouting professors or pending assignments.

His head did not hurt even though he was sure he got sloshed

the night before, since he was on couch and not on his bed where he should
probably have been. Still in his clothes he wore last night to the club!

These nights were becoming a routine. Excessive drinking, blackouts

and bad hangovers!

"this is the last time I am drinking" he said to himself!

He knew he was lying, till when could he even continue with

this?

He tried remembering why he hadn't gone to his bedroom and

sleep did, but he really could not.

He danced with some girl, he could not remember who!

He remembered the name with a flash, "Samaira". He smiled, "

she was pretty" he thought!

As he heated the coffee, and was about to throw on the bed,

his phone rang!

It was Aayan and he asked the same question he did every

day.

"Are you going to the college today"

NO!

He wasn't. He didn't have a hangover but he did not want to spoil the day by sitting on those broken benches and beneath the cranky fans, moreover,three back to back lectures was really not his thing!

Just as he switched on the television, the door flung wide open. It was the maid. He looked at her, and she smiled. She had the newspaper in her hand, she kept it on the table and she smiled back.

Though the house was pretty big! He lived alone and so never had much work for her

"Viren baba, what is in the sink?" she asked with a disgusted expression

"What?" he asked as he entered the kitchen.

"Come and see for yourself" she had covered her face with her pallu.

He walked to the sink and immediately a pungent smell hit his nose. He looked at it and it almost made him puke. It was the filthiest thing ever he had seen.

"f**k f**k"

"baabu, you drank too much last night?" she asked in her muzzled tone from beneath the pallu.

He asked her to go and shop for the vegetables and told her that he will take care of it by the time she comes back. She grabbed the shopping bag and the left the house as soon as possible. He stood there for a while disgusted at what he had done. This was new! He used to black out, but he never used to puke. This was disgusting! It seemed like everything that he had eaten last night was floating in alcohol and intestinal and gastric juices.

"Argh why can't they make bigger drain pipes?" he thought!

"Because people are meant to puke in toilets, dumbass" a voice in his head immediately replied.

He without wasting any time further wrapped a handkerchief around his face and got to work with a plunger and newspaper!
Fifteen stinking minutes, and it was all clear and there was horrible smell over him.

"I am never drinking again" he said aloud as he closed the shower door.

He loved the shower area. It was the second best place after his gym. It cost him, um, he dint know how much. His father paid it. The maid was back in a while and she started to cook.

"Aunty, a little less oil"

"Babu, where will you get energy from? And stop drinking so much" she replied back making me shut.

Just as he flopped on the couch, the doorbell rang again. The smell from the pungent sink was still in his nose.

I am not drinking again, ever. He taught himself again.

"Who's it?" Viren shouted from where he was sitting. The door was being banged now. Harder!

FINE!

"Virat?" he exclaimed.

Virat was his elder cousin brother, five years elder to him, he had just turned 25 the day before and it was his party last night, Last drinking night.

"f**k you viren," he said looking pissed.

"Where the f**ks have you been? I have been calling you since the last twenty minutes, anyway where is Samaiya?"

"Samaiya?"

"Viren, I don't have time for this. Her mother is calling me since the morning. Where is she?"

"I don't know what you are talking about Virat"

"What? You left with her the last night, don't you freaking remember?"

He was totally freaking out. And he was not enjoying it either. He started looking everywhere and he followed him around.

"No I don't" Viren insisted.

Virat's phone constantly rang.

"all I remember is that I was in the club last night with her and then left you all, and I woke on this couch. Yea this couch" he indicated to the couch.

"If you were on the couch, where the hell is she" he said and sprinted up the stairs. She was a pretty girl

"Samaiya?" he shouted as he entered the bedroom.

As Viren followed him into his bedroom, and tried to remember stuff from last night, viren saw him bent over an unconscious girl who laid on the side of his bed. It was Saamaiya!

They both helped her to sit up on the bed, she was still falling over them and was weak.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
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*UnRes*
Aaliya this was super amazing !!
The story is so different and obviously very interesting.
Okay Viren's character is a bit hilarious!!
I will be waiting eagerly for Jeevika's entry !!
Yay me first!
Thank you for the Pm and the amazing glimpse of the story !
😊
Edited by Kashy15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
#UNRES#

Woaahhh! This update was like amazing amazing! I'm lacking words to describe it.

Especially Viren. This character of his just blew me off. 😲

Goodness! You're beyond amazing girl.
Can't wait to read further! Update update update
Edited by -Deeps- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
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Aaliyaah the first part itself really interesting.!

it was superb👏

cant wait for the next part.!

thanx for the pm..😊
Edited by latika_AshVik - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index

Part 1 : Page 5
Part 2 : Page 11
Edited by little.angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
unres!

I am late! *cries*

Lovely update!
Loving it!

Continue soon Ji! 🤗
Edited by niCeline - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
loving the first part
thanks for the pm..
x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Wow Aaliya it was suprb.
I lud it to the core very intersting.
Hope jeevs enter soon this girls goes out.who this girl might b?
Viren is ...alcoholic
thanx 4 the glimpses.
Thanx 4 d pm
Edited by Virika-luv - 13 years ago

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