IPKKND OS (Karva Chauth) - Spellbound [Romance] - Page 12

Originally posted by: arniepervaiz

omg..that was just wow..

loved it..🥱

Originally posted by: rini_kat

Very lovely ending...

Originally posted by: nine2

I finally got a chance to read your OS. Actually, two!

After, I read the initial part of this OS, I went back and watched the KC episode. Oh, how I miss the show, and it's writings like these that make me realize that it will take quite a bit of time before I truly "move on" from IPK (it it's possible). But, I came back, read this part, and was thoroughly satisfied.

Needless to say that both of them( OSs) were great, and by now I guess it's established that passionate ArHi stories are your forte.

I commented on this OS earlier accidently, instead of Diwali one, but after reading this one, I have to say that this is truly my favorite.

However, I have to say that it wasn't really the passion that makes this my favorite OS, it's the pure love- mainly expressed from the following lines said by Arnav :

"You fasted all day for my sake right? Your husband? Well now I'm not even letting you lift a finger." He fed her a few more bites in between. "Let me take care of you, take care of my wife." He saw the tension drain from her body before he continued, tracing his finger along the edge of the blind fold, brushing against her cheek. "And the blindfold is because I wanted to awaken all your senses, Khushi. Let them be heightened."

It's like I'm on the receiving end. I felt that love. You know, when he blindfolds Khushi, I thought he was doing that so he could ravish and make love to her, and she would be able to to feel the pleasure using her other senses, but was surprised when he starts feeding her and taking care of her. It's really touching. Oh, and also the part when he puts Mangalsutra around her neck. That too is very touching. All of these leaves a very warm feeling in my heart! Thanks for that.

And now to the passionate part. It was just perfect for this scenario. It could have been umm.. vulgar, but in the context that you wrote it with just enough details (not too much and not too little), it was like perfect. Is it weird if I say that I even felt some sensations?

In all, it was a pleasure read!

Have you ever thought of writing an ArHi ff? If not, then I strongly recommend it. You have capabilities to live up to and bring out the best in the original characters that the creatives created and tell a good story. And also, of course, I have my selfish motives of getting my ArHi dose through ff writers. I feel ashamed to admit it, but it's okay to be selfish sometimes, right? But on a serious note, you should really at least think about it, especially, if you have some time on hand to write.

p.s. I originally had lot more to say, but when I pressed "post reply," I realized that my internet was down for a moment, and it didn't leave a comment. I wrecked my brain, but I just can't remember what I originally wrote, so I guess, I will just have to settle with this for now! :(

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Awww... so cute!

Originally posted by: Jasmine32

OMG that was superb!!

Originally posted by: blayde

Oh wow. I am so flattered by your reaction!! I don't know where to start my reply honestly but I will try. I am so glad that I was able to reach out and evoke those feelings in you! It is the best feeling as a person writing to hear and read this kind of feedback from a reader!

I got a few people who told me they were initially not happy when he put the blindfold but then once they realized why he did this, they were touched as you were! And you are the only one to pick up (or at least take note of and tell me) on the mangalsutra. I thought it was fitting for the scene since my whole theme was to sort of make her feel like a new bride!

Writing this genre is tricky, because well I have to think where are the limits? Are there even limits in this genre? But I can't keep the romance out of it, and I always hope that my readers find it tactful and not crass 😳.

As of now, I can't really commit to writing a whole FF because my brain only envisions one time scenarios and hasn't really wrapped around a whole plot, lol. But thank you for the encouragement. I will definitely keep writing in the meantime and can't wait to hear your feedback on the remainder of my OS's. 😉