#2 Forever Yours-A Swaron FF chp 21 pg 65 28th may'14 - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

431

Views

67k

Users

86

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

ky2fanfictions thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#91
tired of thinking what wud happen nxt
plzz jldi post krna
waiting
senoritashweta thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#92
u need 2 update soon...!

cnt wait 2 read d further updates...!

it was vry nyc...expressed well !
--Rumeli-- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#93
I had thought so that swayam is preetha's fianc!!swayam is being a total jerk for not reciprocating sharon's immense love!finally sharon knows the truth and has decided to move on practically but in reality she still lives around his memories!!hope they
get together real soon n we get to see swayam taking the command and takes away all the bitterness 4m sharon!
Sneha beautifully penned down the emotions!!do update soon M looking forward for a long update like dis one loved reading each bit of the upd
Edited by --Rumeli-- - 12 years ago
_Deepika_ thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Beautiful update dear...

Honestly...i knew swayam is preetha's would be husband...

this was so painful for HER to take...poor soul...

M yet curious about his side of story...

Why he is away from her...if he loves her...

Only parental pressure...is keeping him away...

loving kriyansh character as well...

the story is getting more interesting...

Can't wait for the next update...update soon dear 😳

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
Lovenarbhi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Beautiful work yaar, plz continue fast
Joshua_TANHA thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#96
i read it for the first time and loved it ..
DO Pm me
ShenzK thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#97
okay might be I am unable to search ur PM in the heep of PMs.. which is like a great burden to me.. yet I received the link you know how..

okay I better get to the update review part or else you might kill me..

--review--
I had a feeling it is none other than HIM.. Swayam Shekhawat..
and its really him.. okay I know why.. daddy's preassure.. but why this breakup.. this mystery is getting on my nerves..
I can now publicly announce 'I hate Preetha' at least for now till the time she is Swayam's fiance..
I like the sibbling bond of ShaRey.. n Kriya being a caring freind..
ShaRey's mom is a typical Indian mom but I wish she was a bit understanding..
I love her dad n Nanny..

but u better solve this mystery.. or else I might get mad..
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago
amandadsouza95 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#98
@damonelena: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
-Snehaa- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#99



Chapter 15:


Recap: Sharon sees Swayam as Preetha's fianc.

Sharon had a tough time falling asleep the previous night. She had to be strong. She woke up unwillingly and put on a comfortable t-shirt,jeans, uggs,a coat which kept her warm and a scarf. It was freezing outside. Christmas was nearing ,and she had to go get gifts for her family and friends. She also had to set up the Christmas tree. She took her car keys, house keys, her bag and started to leave. She locked the door behind her and started walking when she heard someone calling her. She froze when she heard HIS voice. She turned around to find him leaning against the wall. When did he come? Sharon thought. He walked towards her. She could have ran from there without talking to him. But she didn't know what stopped her. Maybe her love for him. She was finding it hard, so hard to just stand there and pretend like she didn't feel anything. "Why are you here?" Sharon asked, turning her face away from him. "Sharon, you're not even going to say HI?" he asked. "What do you want now Swayam? I'm getting late for work, I have to go." Sharon said. "Who are you kidding? I know what time you go to work. There's still an hour left." Swayam said. "Oh, so you know me very well. I see. Can you leave now?" Sharon asked. "Sharon, please I need to talk to you." Swayam said. "But I don't want to. So please leave." Sharon said. "Sharon you have to listen to me!" Swayam screamed. "SWAYAM SHEKAWAT, you are not my boyfriend anymore. You don't have any right to talk to me like that! It's my wish whether I talk to you or not. Right now I don't want to."Sharon said. Swayam held Sharon's hand. "Shar, please. Just listen to me once." Swayam said. "What do you have to say? If you've come here to apologize, then I'm sorry. I don't want to hear it." Sharon said. "Sharon, please. Just once." Swayam said. "Fine. Shoot. I don't have time." Sharon said. "Can we please go inside?" Swayam asked. Sharon had already locked the door. "NO." Sharon said. "Please, I don't want your neighbours to see us." Swayam said. "Oh, so now you don't want to be seen with me. My neighbor is not in town. So you're safe." Sharon said. "Why can't we go inside?" Swayam asked. "Because we can't. Will you please get to the point?" Sharon asked. She was trying to be rude, but in reality she wanted to hug him tight. "Sharon, I know I made a lot of promises and I couldn't keep them but you should know that I really loved you..but.." Swayam started, but Sharon cut him off when she heard the word "LOVED." "Wait..what did you say? Loved? As In past tense? Does that mean you don't love me anymore? Then you didn't mean it when you said that you loved me, in the voicemail? I should've known. You never loved me Swayam, never." Sharon said. "Shut up Sharon. Let me finish. Yes, I did say I still love you in the voicemail. Then I thought about it. And I decided to move on. And I think you should move on too." Swayam said. "You decided to move on…in one day? Is this a joke?"Sharon asked "No Sharon it's not a joke. I really mean it. I've moved on. I'm with Preetha now." Swayam said. Sharon couldn't bear this but she controlled somehow. "I get it, Swayam. I'm sure you'll forget those 11 years too, in sometime." Sharon said. "Sharon..I'm.." Swayam started, but Sharon didn't let him finish. "Swayam, atleast tell it now. The real reason why you broke up with me." Sharon said. "Sharon, please let's not talk about it. It's over now. You are free. You can date whoever you want. You don't have to wait for me." Swayam said. "I can't believe it Swayam. I just can't believe it. Those 11 years meant nothing to you?" Sharon asked. Swayam sighed. "No, Sharon. Now that I think about it, it was just a waste of time. We should have been only friends." Swayam said. "You don't remember anything? Even that night of 11th December doesn't mean anything to you?" Sharon asked. "What happened on that day?" Swayam asked, even though he very well knew. It was the night they had done it for the first time. Made love. "So it didn't mean anything to you. I should've known. I was just your toy. You just played around with me. You wanted to use me, is that why you slept with me?" Sharon asked. For a second, Swayam couldn't lie to Sharon anymore. Without thinking he answered. "Sharon, do you really think I used you. And we didn't sleep together. We made love to each other. We both know that was the best night of our lives." Swayam said. "Oh, so you remember. But I should've listened when Kria told me to stay away from you in the beginning. I was foolish not to listen to her. And now, I'm bearing the consequences. And you knew that Preetha was my friend, didn't you?" Sharon asked. "I swear I didn't know Sharon. But preetha is a family friend of mine. My dad and her dad are childhood friends." Swayam said. "And so you couldn't say no to the marriage. And like an idiot, I've been fighting it out with my mom saying that I want to marry only you. I won't do that anymore." Sharon said. Before Swayam could say, Sharon's phone rang. It was Preetha. "Oh, look it's the person you love. Your fianc. Do I tell her that her soon-to-be husband is standing with his ex-girlfriend and wasting his and her time?" Sharon asked. Swayam took sharon's phone and cut the call. "Sharon, stop talking like this. Sarcastic. It's irritating." Swayam said. "Oh, now even the way I talk irritates you. Then why the hell are you here?" Sharon asked. "To tell you that you have to move on. I don't love you anymore Sharon." Swayam said. "Stop saying the word LOVE. Did you even like me? I don't think so. You can leave now." Sharon said. "I am leaving. And you are coming for the wedding,aren't you?" Swayam asked. "I won't Swayam. I won't. Why am I waiting for you to leave? I'll leave myself." Sharon said, and ran down the stairs without taking the elevator. She went to her car and slammed the door, after sitting inside. "Why Swayam? Why did you do this to me? Didn't you ever love me? Don't you think about me like I do?" Sharon asked. She rested her head on the steering wheel, and cried her heart out. After a while, she drove to work.

She didn't pick up anyone's calls. She was very upset. But she shouldn't show it.her phone beeped. It was a text from kria.

Sharu, sorry. Couldn't stop by. Come home in the evening. Have to tell you something. –K.

What could it be? Sharon thought. In the evening, Sharon went to Kria's and Rey's house. "What did you want to tell me?" Sharon asked, as they went inside. Sharon stopped at that spot when she saw Preetha and Swayam there too. Rey was there too. Obviously. "What are they doing here?" Sharon asked. "Preetha came with him half an hour back. I didn't invite her I promise." Kria said. "It's okay."Sharon said. Sharon went and hugged Rey. She waved to preetha but said nothing to Swayam. "What did you want to say?" Sharon asked. "Me and Rey wanted to share some good news….There's gonna be a new member in our family soon." Kria said. "Oh okay…….wait what?" Sharon asked. "Really? OMG! I'm sooo happy ! I'll have a nephew/niece soon….ahh…I'm soo happy!" Sharon said, and hugged Rey and Kria. Swayam smiled at her childish behavior. This was the Sharon he fell in love with. "Congrats dude! Congrats Kri!" Swayam said, and hugged them both. Preetha congratulated them too. They sat talking for sometime. Sharon was the most excited among the three even though Kria was the one who was carrying. Sharon kept telling Kria that she'd come to take care of her, check on her every single day. Kria asked her to chill and agreed to what she had to say.

After sometime, Sharon remembered something. She looked at the time. Still an hour left. "Okay, Kri, Rey. I have to leave guys! I have a date. Gotta meet my guy." Sharon said. "What??" Swayam said, and stood up. "What's wrong? I can go on dates with people, you know?" Sharon said. "No, nothing's wrong. Nothing at all." Swayam said, and sat back down.


*************************************************************************************

I know it's a really short update. I'm really sorry about that. My schedule's been hectic. But i hope u enjoyed the update. Next update on Page 30.I know it's a longgg demand. But you'll do it right? Please? 😊

Edited by damonelena - 12 years ago
-Snehaa- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Nisha's comment :

Awesome update as usual 😃
loved it...
Awww poor sharon...
um...I wanted to ask...
umm...swaron made love...
so did they used protection...or😆
that could be new twist...
sharon fainting on swayam and pteetha's marriage...
then 🤣
dude u write so well...
nothing could maka me hate swayam...
but m hating this swayam
jerk.. 😡
m happy with the way sharon is talking to him rudely
well deserved on his part
..wow kriyaansh gonna be parents 🥳...
n page demand is nt much...
i m gonna spam away..once everyone comments😎
Edited by damonelena - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 8 months ago

Parth,Adnan and Ketaki version I dedicate this to my friend Sydell who wants the Parth,Adnan,Ketaki version of the movie Hum dil de chuke sanam...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz · 5 months ago

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".