An ArHi Fairy Tale#2*Completed - Page 79

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Posted: 13 years ago
This is my first fairy tale in IF.I like this story very much.
It was her touch or power of apple bring her back. OH God Khushi sacrifice her life. But I am sure there is a war a head.. Arnav will bring his Khushi back as soon as possible.Waiting just waiting for that..

May be Anjali might help her. Akash and Lavanya was also there... I like the way Akash told her about his feeling. Lavanya will help her because she already smelled trouble black magic there...

Arnav had no idea about her life..Please help Khushi..

Thanks for pm. Amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
what a heart wrenching gut wrenching update.

you managed to effect a complete change in the tone of the story but was the self sacrificing really necessary?

why do teenage girls or those just out of their teens feel or think or assume that they alone have all the answers.

arnav may have lost his parents and khushi's may have sucked at the job but really was there no experienced adult around with whom she could discuss, confide in?

is a hormone driven female teenage brain really the best judge of circumstances?

whatever happened to the wise old crone of every fairy tale?


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..so well wriiten..i love llavanya's character..the nest was aakash and lavanya pair..thy r a gud pair..i oved ittt
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh no! The clock stuck and the princess is lost! :(

What is going to happen now? How selfish is Anjali? Will a kiss save Khushi? Gah, so many many questions!

Can't wait to read more! My heart is still thumping!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update
Both Arnav and Khushi are willing to sacrifice for each other.
Can't believe this is coming to an end.
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww... what a cliffhanger... please update fast...cant wait to find out what happens next

Loved the Arshi fairy tale... one request... what are u ending it so soon???
I wanted to see the crowned king and queen and their romance.. cant u add few updates on their happily ever after????
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rasgulla,

Thanks for the PM :)

Awesome update. This chapter was so heart racing and dramatic...I couldn't take my eye off till the end.

Oh what happened to Khushi...please make her ok. This looks like a mix of Cinderella and Snow white...the glass shoe falling off and her biting the apple and falling lifeless. I guess Arnav will kiss her bring her back to life.

Khushi did the right thing I would say...because Arnav won't be happy seeing his sister like this. He would be living a life of guilt forever.

Hope his love for Khushi can bring her back to life.

Pls cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonder what happened to khushi
hope she is okaay
and love how you showed her and arnav turmoil
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the conflict raging within khushi and arnav's guilt at wanting her over his di... khushi's fear that choosing her over anjali would make arnav unable to face himself and might embitter their future is a very real possibility... their love for each other can't be questioned as each wants the others happiness... lavanya is equally selfless in trying to bring happiness to these two and her admonition of khushi's behaviour is what a friend would do as she doesn't want to see either of her friends to be in pain... akash may have spoken too soon methinks! loved you combining the cinderella and snow white stories! will you be adding sleeping beauty to the mix? now it's anjali's turn to come to khushi's rescue... also kay shouldn't be allowed to escape unscathed... things are getting more and more interesting... really impatient for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Khushi ... She really is an angel... So selfless, sacrificing ... And sooo in love with arnav... And arnav ... I really do understand HIM ... Loving Someone sooo Much... And let her get sacrificed... That is the most hardest thing to do... Oh the Apple... Anjali is Oke now i guess but please please i hope not khushi has left arnav Alone...fairy tale is My favorite story and i am sooo depressed it is ending... I really Loved every chapter and every Word of your story... I dont have WORDS to describe ... But do continuewoth another story... Dont leave us Parched... Good luck honey:)

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