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reshkn

@reshkn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

wonderfully described...

i loved this ss to my heart but still i need to tell u...this part(end) has turned out to be my favorite...

nd at the end...just WOW..!!!!👏👏

it dont think this could have had a better ending...!!!! and wen he rote he was involved wit another woman...i was like.."Oh so they have a daughter..!!!"😆😆

this ss has truly brought out "the power of love" as u mentioned...

and finally...will miss this ss badly...and thank you for the wonderful ride😊

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jisa

@jisa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

it was such a beautiful ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it!!!!!!!
this is my second favourite one after khusis's letter to arnav part...
and the lines at the end..
they were superb!!!
will be waiting for another story from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

*sniff* *sniff* That was beautiful. That's the only word to describe it... Thank you for this wonderful story and for the PMs!! :) I hope you decide to write more! :)

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Iamyself

@Iamyself

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Trust me, the emotions you manage to put into words, really is impressive!

Hope you start another soon!

You've got me hooked onto your writings! :)

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

That was really superb, you spun your magic once again with words forming sentences that one has come to expect from your literary skills. Nice to see NK and Lavanya got mentioned too... The truly deserve each other... even in labor she had to know if the affair was true, so pagal like of Khushi... A baby to seal their love...

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#196

i fell in love with your writing juhi awesome ending awesome details like always all is well

though not many people in this world are brought of the traumas of the assaults they go through only a few are able to but our society shuns them as untouchables and unwanted sad

in the country where women are called as devis and mahatmas and mothers every river is named after a lady or a girl

girl or woman still bear the stigma of lesser being still assaulted still ill treated still shunned still deprived of so many rights and freedom

yet we still have few men who support their mother, sisters, daughters, wifes to a better future to stand strong i salute all the men here who do that and all the women who stand strong to fight injustice

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narcy24

@narcy24

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Wonderful...wonderful...wonderful
I am SPEECHLESS...
I will tell you more after i come back from 9th cloud

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Fantastic and awesome update, the epilogue was beautifully written, so Khushi had opened a victim support centre which was wonderful, but totally understand Arnav's point of view for not wanting her to work there.

The following sentence, was so breathtaking, it just describes the reason for him writing the journal so beautifully.

"My journal.

A record of evil, a tale of repentance, and a tribute to the power of love.."

Awww it was so adorable the teasing letter writing at the end, poor Khushi thought Arnav was having an affair and they had a baby girl which made Arnav fall in love again, a beautiful moment.

Thanks for the PM and giving us the opportunity to read this outstanding, wonderful, brilliant and amazing story. Hope you will be writing more, cant wait to read more stories from you xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 13 years ago