SS: LOVE+HATRED+LOVE=RIMA STORY PT 12-76 ND 13-77 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

Nice cs
do pm me wen u update


thanxxx dear... i will surely pm u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anna_77

Too good start...

plz add me and pm me ...


thnxxx dear...i will surely pm u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: jeenia123

nice start.continue soon... so madhu is already in love...


thnxxx dear... yup madhu is in love...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: smdosi

Lovely dear...please pm me whenever you update...would love to read..


thnxxx dear i will surely pm u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting dear do continue soon...👏 and i have given the next part of my SS Dil...do read it and leave feedback...thank u...😊
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

interesting dear do continue soon...👏 and i have given the next part of my SS Dil...do read it and leave feedback...thank u...😊

THNXXX DEAR...I WILL RAD UR SS SOON...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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FIRST I WANT TO THANKS ALL D PEOPLE WHO COMMENTED AND LIKE MY CS AND PROLOGUE...THANK YOU TO ALL OF THEM...
TITLE AND 1ST PART IS UPDATED...AS 1ST PART MOSTLY CONTAIN INTRODUCTION OF RIMA THEN ALSO I HV TRIED TO MAKE IT INTERESTING...HERE GOES D 1ST PART...

1st part :- NORMAL DAY TURNS TO ABNORMAL

IN KUNDRA MANSION

AS NORMAL DAY RK WAKE UP AT 7:00 AM IN MORNING, GOES INTO THE BATHROOM TO TAKE BATH…AFTER 15 MINS HE COMES OUT OF BATHROOM, WALK TO HIS WARDROBE AND SELECT A FORMAL WHITE KURTA PYJAMA…HE COME DOWNSTAIRS AFTER 10 MINS AS USUAL LOOKING SO HANDSOME IN DAT SIMPLE WEAR ALSO…

RADHAJI WAS DOING POOJA, RK COME TO HER AND TOUCH HER FEET FOR BLESSINGS AND RADHAJI PUTS HAND ON HIIS HEAD THEN RK STANDS RADHAJI DO A TIKKA ON HIS HEAD AND GIVE HIM PRASAD…AFTER DAT RK SPEAK..

RK:- GOOD MORNING MOM…😊

RADHAJI:- GOOD MORNING RISHU… TODAY IS UR FIRST SHOOT FOR UR NEW FILM??

RK:- NO MOM THERE IS ONLY MEETING TO DISCUSS ABOUT THE FILM WID DIRECTOR AND ALSO ABOUT D HEROINE OF FILM…MEETING IS AT 8:00 AM I M GOING FOR CHANGING…

RADHAJI:- RISHU COME FAST I M ARRANGING D BREAKFAST DO IT THEN LEAVE…

RK WENT TO HIS ROOM REPLYING RADHAJI "YUP MOM"…BITTUJI ENTER IN D HALL AND SAYING "GOOD MORNING AUNTIJI"…RADHAJI REPLY TO HIM "GOOD MORNING BITTUJI COME HV BREAKFAST RK IS JUST COMING ONLY"…AFTER 5 MINS RK CAME WEARING RED T-SHIRT AND BLACK JEANS LUKING SOOO MUCH "ADORABLE"…

THEN DEY HAD THEIR BREAKFAST… BITTUJI AND RK LEFT FOR D MEETING AFTER SOMETIME DEY REACHED TO D STUDIO…RK CAME OUT FROM D CAR AND THROWS D KEY TOWARDS D WATCHMAN AND ORDER TO PARK D CAR…AS HE WENT INSIDE D STUDIO HE WAS SHOCKED AND SHOUTED…😲

RK:- BITTUJI!!!😡

BITTUJI CAME RUNNING AND ASKED…

BITTUJI:- WAT HAPPEN CHIEF???

RK:- WAT D HELL SHE IS DOING HERE??

BITTUJI ALSO SHOCKED WEN HE SAW SIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM AND SAID…

BITTUJI:- I DON'T KNOW CHIEF Y DEEPALI IS HERE??? CHIEF U JST CALM DOWN I M FINDING OUT Y SHE IS HERE, U PLZZZ GO TO UR ROOM CHIEF…

RK ZOOM AWAY FROM THEIR AND WENT TO HIS ROOM…SOON ALL HIS PAST COME INFRONT OF HIS EYES…HOW DEEPALI BETRAYED HIM…FLASH BACK…RK HAD SINGED HIS 1ST FILM AND DEEPALI WAS HEROINE OPPOSITE TO HIM…AS D FILM SHOOTING CONTINUED DEY FALL IN LOVE WID EACH OTHER BOTH WERE VERY HAPPY…BUT WEN D FILM RELEASED IT WAS FLOPPED…RK LOSTED HIS OTHER CONTRACTS ALSO AND DEEPALI STARTED TO SHOW HER TRUE COLORS AND LEFT HIM WEN HE NEEDED HER D MOST…AFTER SOME DAY RK CAME TO KNOW DAT DEEPALI IS IN RELATION WID ANYOTHER GUY HE ALSO KNEW DAT SHE JUST WANTS FAME AND MONEY IN HER LIFE…LOVE DOESN'T MATTERS FOR HER…RK WAS SOO MUCH HURTED ALMOST BROKEN INTO PIECES…AFTER DAT SHE DON'T WANT TO SEE HER FACE AGAIN IN HIS LIFE… FLASHBACK OVER…BITTUJI COME INSDE D ROOM AND TOLD RK DAT...

BITTUJI:- CHIEF …DIRECTOR HAS SIGNED DEEPALI AS MAIN LEAD HERIONE OPPOSITE TO YOU…I ALSO FIND D REASON BEHIND DIS DAT Y DIRECTOR CHOOSE HER…

RK:- WAT D HELL BITTUJI??? HOW CAN SHE BE HEROINE IN MY MOVIE??IS DIRECTOR IS NOT KNOWING ABOUT HER??? WAT IS DAT REASON TELL ME BITTUJI???

BITTUJI:-ACTUALLY CHIEF DEEPALI IS GIRLFRIEND OF SIKKI BHATIA SON OF D DIRECTOR KUKKU BHATTIA…DAT'S Y DEY R RELAUNCHING DEEPALI AS MAIN LEAD IN UR FILM…

RK:- HMMM…I SEE DIS TIME U R GONE DIPS….🤢WHERE IS DAT DIRECTOR BITTUJI??? I WANT TO TALK WID HIM…

BITTUJI:-IN HIS OFFICE CHIEF…

RK GOES TO MEET MR. BHATTIA…

RK:- SO MR. BHATTAI WHO TOLD U TO SELECT DEEPALI AS OPPOSITE TO ME…DON'T U KNOW ME???

DIRECTOR:-I M SORRY RK I DIDN'T GET IT WAT R U TALKING ABOUT???

RK:- OH PLZ DON'T PRETEND INFRONT OF ME…(WHOLE INDUSTRY KNOWS ABOUT RK AND DEEPALI)…

DIRECTOR:- YA!!! I KNOW DAT RK… PLZ BT JUST FORGET UR PAST AS SHE IS GOING TO BE MY DIL AND FOR MY SON SAKE I WANT HER TO BE LEAD HEROINE…

RK:- OK THEN BEST OF LUCK TO COMPLETE DIS FILM ONLY WID UR WOULD BE DIL AND TELL HER TO PLAY A MALE LEAD ALSO…I M SURE MOVIE WILL BE SUPER HIT… AS I M QUITTING FROM DIS MOVIE…GOOD BYE…

DIRECTOR:- RK PLZ DON'T DO DIS U CAN'T QUIT MOVIE LIKE DIS…😕

RK:- I CAN DO DIS (RK SPEAK WID HIS EVIL SMIRK)…😈AND U KNOW DAT MR.BHATTIA…U NEED ME, I DON'T NEED AND I HV MANY OTHER FILM TO DO….SO CHOICE IS UR'S…WAIT!!! I HV AN OPTION FOR UR WOULD BE DIL…

DIRECTOR:-WAT'S DAT…❓

RK:- I WILL ARRANGE HEROINE MYSELF FOR DIS MOVIE U DON'T TAKE TENSION ABOUT DAT…AND FOR UR LOVELY AND EVIL DIL DEEPALI I HV GOOD IDEA…SHE CAN DO AN ITEM SONG IN MY MOVIE…FOR HER ITEM SONG IS ONLY PERFECT …IS DAT OK FOR U AND UR SON???

AS MR.BHATTIA HV NO CHOICE HE NODDED YES…RK LEFT FROM THEIR SMILING…AS HE WAS GOING OUT OF D STUDIO SOMEONE TOUCH HIS SHOULDER FROM BEHIND…HE JUST TURNED AROUND TO SEE …IT'S DEEPALI…

DIPS:-HI HERO HOW R U???

RK:- DON'T DARE TO TOUCH ME AND STAY AWAY FROM ME U ITEM GIRL…

DIPS:- WAT D HELL R U SAYING??😕

RK:- YUP I M SAYING TRUTH AND ASK ABOUT DIS TO UR FIL…

DIPS WENT AWAY FROM THEIR FUMING….😡RK ALSO LEFT FROM THIER SMILING…😃

IN MALIK HOUSE

EARLY IN D MORNING, RAYS OF D SUN TOUCH D MILKY SKIN OF A GIRL SLEEPING IN HER BED…SUDDENLY ALARM RINGS AND SHE GET UP BY STRECHING HER HAND AND SHE IS NON ANOTHER THEN MADHUBALA MALIK…SHE OPENS HER EYES AND SAID "GOOD MORNING BABAJI"…THEN SHE TOOK UP A PHOTO FRAME FROM D TABLE WHICH WAS BESIDE HER AND SPEAK AGAIN "GOOD MORNING MY SUPERSTAR RK"…BY SAYING DIS SHE HUG D FRAME AND SAID "HOPE DIS DAY WILL BE GOOD FOR U AND FOR ME TOO"…AFTER DAT SHE WATCH D CLOCK IT WAS STATING 8 O'CLOCK…SHE PLACE D FRAME ON TABLE AND WALK TOWARDS D WASHROOM…AFTER HALF AN HOUR SHE COMES OUT WEARING A PINK COLOUR ANARKALI AS ALWAYS LOOKING SO GORGEOUS DEN SHE COMBS HER HAIR AND GO DOWNSTAIRS…

MAID:-GOOD MORNING MADHUJI, SIR AND MADAM LEFT EARLY IN D MORNING AND UR BREAKFAST IS READY…

MADHU:- OK!!!😊

MADHU GOES TO DINNING HALL ALSO TAKE NEWSPAPER WID HIM…AFTER SETTLING HERSELF IN CHAIR SHE START TO READ NEWS OF D DAY…AFTER TURNING TWO OR THREE PAGES SHE JUST STOPS AND A BIG SMILE APPEARS ON HER FACE AND SHE SPEAKS TO HERSELF "OH MY SUPERSTAR'S NEW MOVIE RELEASING AFTER NXT WEEK HOPE I GET A CHANCE TO SEE D MOVIE DIS TIME AS NXT WERE EXAMS I COULDN'T WATCH HIS MOVIE…U R LOOKIN SO HANDSOME MY SUPERSTAR LOVE U SOO MUCH"…FLASHBACK... AFTER COMPLETING HER 12TH BOARD EXAMS SHE WAS ENJOYING HER VACATION AT HOME ONLY…ONE DAY AS USUAL SHE WAS READING D NEWSPAPER AND SAW D ARTICLE OF RK'S 1ST MOVIE AND AT FIRST SIGHT SHE FALL IN LOVE WID HIM THEN SHE DECIDE TO WATCH HIS MOVIE…THOUG D MOVIE WAS FLOP BT IT DOESN'T MATTER TO HER SHE BECAME A BIG FAN OF RK AND FALL IN LOVE…AFTER DAT SHE ALSO WANTED TO JOIN D INDUSTRY TO BECOME A HEROINE AND NOT ONLY HEROINE BUT RK'S REAL LIFE HEROINE ALSO…BUT HER PARENT'S DIDN'T ALLOWED HER AND FORCED HER TO STUDIES ONLY…AND SOON HER DREAMS BROKEN UP INTO PIECES🥺…AS D TIME PASSED SHE GOT ADMISSION IN D PHARMACY COLLEGE AND GOT BUSY IN HER STUDIES ONLY…BT SHE LIVES WID RK IN HER DREAML WORLD…SHE ALWAYS PRAYED FOR HIM TO BE A SUCCESSFUL PERSON AND AFTER SOMETIME RK BECAME D SUPERSTAR OF D INDUSTRY…FLASHBACK OVER

MADHU TO HERSELF:- BABAJI I WANT ONCE TO MEET HIM IN MY LIFE…BT ALSO KNOW DAT I M SIMPLE COMMON GIRL LIVING ON EARTH AND HE IS A SUPERSTAR IN D SKY UP ABOVE SO HIGH TO WHICH I CAN NEVER REACH…(AS A FACT STARS ALSO FALLS ON D EARTH)….SUDDENLY D DOORBELL RINGS…SHE COMES OUT OF HER DREAMLAND…

MADHU:- WHO IS THERE??? BUT MAID DIDN'T ANSWER…DEN SHE FELT HANDS COVERING HER EYES FROM BEHIND…

MADHU:- HI!!! TRISHNA…

TRISH:-HOW DO U KNOW IT'S ME???

MADHU:- BCOZ SUCH ACTS R DONE ONLY BY U WID ME…SO IT'S SIMPLE TO RECOGNISE U…COME HV BREAKFAST…

TRISH:- YUP !!! I WAS SOO MUCH EXCITED TO MEET U AFTER 1 MONTH I FORGET TO HV BREAKFAST ALSO…

MADHU:- I KNOW DAT TRISH… BTW HOW WAS UR TRIP WID UR FAMILY???

TRISH:- YA IT WAS GREAT…I ASKED U TO COME WID US BT U WANT TO GET BORED IN DIS HOUSE FOR A MONTH…

MADHU:- IT'S NOT LIKE DAT TRISH U KNOW I LIVE IN HOSTEL AS MOM AND DAD STAY OUT FOR MONTHS BUSY IN THEIR PROFESSION…SO I JUST DECIDED TO SPEND VACATION WID DEM AS DEY ALSO HV NOT SO MUCH WORK LOAD IN DIS MONTH…AND IF I WILL NOT COME HOME IN VACATION DEN ONE DAY I WILL FORGET MY OWN ADDRESS ONLY…(BOTH LAUGHED)😆😆

MADHU AND TRISH R DOING B.PHARM AND BOTH R IN LAST YEAR OF IT…IT IS D 1ST OF COLLEGE AFTER ONE MONTH VACATION…

TRISH:- AGAIN COLLEGE STARTS AND WE HV TO ATTAIN DAT 3 HOUR LONG PRACTICALS AND 3 HOURS OF LECTURES TOO… IT IS SOOO BORING MADHU AND ALL DIS BCOZ OF U…

MADHU:- WHY ME???

TRISH:- U KNOW I JUST CAN'T LIVE WIDOUT YOU AND YOU ONLY WANTS TO STUDY IN PHARMACY AND THAT'S Y I ALSO HV TO JOIN IT…

MADHU:- VERY GOOD…NOW JST FINISH D BREAKFAST WE R GETTING LATE BLAME ME AFTERWARDS…

THEY BOTH FINISH THEIR BREAKFAST AND LEFT FOR D COLLEGE…BOTH COME OUT OF D CAR AND MADHU ORDER DRIVER TO PLACE HIS LUGGAGE IN HOSTEL…THEY BOTH WENT INTO D COLLEGE SUDDENLY A SOUND CAME FROM BEHING DEM…"MADHU TRISH WAIT FOR ME"..

MADHU AND TRISH:- OH COME MR.FLIRT WE R LOOKING FOR U ONLY ASHISH…😛

ASHISH:- DON'T CALL M ASHISH IT'S ASH…GET DAT..

BOTH NODDED YES AND HEADED TO THEIR CLASSROOM…

ASH:- I M NOT ATTENING 1ST LEC IT IS OF CHEMITRY AND U KNOW I DON'T LIKE DIS SUBJECT AND SIR TOO…SO I M GOING TO CANTEEN ANYONE WANTS TO JOIN ME???

TRISH:- WAT??? 1ST LEC IS OF CHEM…OH I DON'T WANT TO BE SHOWERED WID QUES OF DAT SHARMA SIR ON 1ST DAYONLY…I M COMING WID U ASHISH…

MADHU:- OK U BOTH GO TO CANTEEN I WILL MEET U AFTER DIS LEC…

TRISH AND ASH GOES TO D CANTEEN AND MADHU GOES IN D CLASS…AFTER 1 HOUR D LEC GET OVER EVERYONE IS GOING OUT OF D CLASS AS ANOTHER LEC WILL BE AFTER 10 MINS…MADHU ALONE SITTING IN D CLASS WAITING FOR TRISH AND ASH…SHE IS READING D NOTES AND SUDDENLY SHE HEARD A VOICE…

RAJ:- HI!!! MADHU..

MADHU:- HI!!! WHO R U?😕

RAJ:- U DON'T KNOW ME? I M IN UR CLASS FROM 1ST YEAR…DON'T TELL ME U DIDN'T NOTICE ME ONCE IN DIS 3 YEARS…

MADHU:- SORRY BT I REALLY NEVER NOTICE U AS I M BUSY IN MY STUDIES ONLY…OK TELL ME WAT DO U WANT?

RAJ:- HI!!! I M RAJ… I JUST WANTED TO SAY DAT "I LOVE YOU MADHU"…

MADHU:- WHAT??? (SHOCKED)😲

RAJ:- I REALLY LOVE YOU MADHU SINCE 1ST TIME I SAW U…

MADHU:- SORRY BT I M NOT INTERESTED IN U…(BY SAYING DIS SHE GET UP FROM HER SEAT AND WALKS AWAY BT RAJ HOLDS HER HAND AND TURN HER TO FACE HIM)…WAT D HELL R U DOING JUST LEAVE MY HAND IT'S HURTING…

RAJ:- NO I WILL NOT… FIRST U SAY DAT U ALSO LOVE ME DEN ONLY I WILL LEAVE UR HAND…

AT D SAMETIME TRISH AND ASH COME THEIR AND BY SEEING DAT RAJ IS HURTING MADHU ASH GET SOO MUCH ANGRY AS HE ALSO LIKE HER HIS BLOOD BOIL…HE PUNCH RAJ ON HIS FACE AND START FIGHTING WITH HIM BY SAYING.."HOW DARE U TO TOUCH HER???"

RAJ:- I WAS JUST SAYING DAT I LOVE HER…

TRISH:-OH REALLY U WAS SAYING DIS WORDS TO A GIRL BEFORE ONE MONTH ON OUR LAST XAMS ALSO REMEMBER U STUPID…

BY HEARING DIS ASH BEAT HIM VERY BADLY… IN BETWEEN MADHU SHOUTED "STOP DIS ASH JUST LEAVE HIM AND LETS GO FROM HERE" SHE STARTS CRYING…😭😭 BY SEEING TEARS IN HER EYES ASH STOPS AND LEAVE HIM…MADHU RUNS OUT FROM THEIR TRISH FOLLOW HER…

MADHU GOES TO HOSTEL IN HER ROOM AND SEAT ON D BED STILL CRYING…😭TRISH COMES AND TRY TO STOP HER CRYING…

TRISH:- MADHU PLZ DON'T CRY ALL IS OK AND I WILL SURELY TEACH A LESSON TO DAT STUPID RAJ FOR HURTING U…

MADHU:- NO TRISH U WILL NOT DO SUCH THINGS…U KNOW IF MOM AND DAD WILL COME TO KNOW ABOUT DIS THINGS DEY WILL CHANGE MY COLLEGE… U KNOW DAT DEY R SOO AGAINST OF DIS LOVE AND ALL FOR THEM D MOST IMPORTANT IS MY STUDIES ONLY…AND I DON'T WANT TO GET SEPARATE FROM U TRISH…

TRISH:- OK!! OK!! I WILL NOT DO ANYTHING U ALSO STOP CRYING AND NO ONE WILL SEPARATE US…NOW JUST GIVE A SMILE DAER...😊

AFTER DAT MADHU STOPS CRYING AND GOES TO FRESHEN UP…THEN DEY BOTH LEFT TO ATTAIN OTHER LEC AND PRACTICAL…WHOLE DAY PASS BUSY IN COLLEGE AND MADHU WAS QUITE FOR WHOLE DAY…

AT NIGHT,

BOTH RK AND MADHU AT THEIR PLACES LOOKING OUT FROM WINDOW AT MOON SAYING…

MADHU:- WAT "AN ABNORMAL DAY" BABAJI...😔

RK:- WAT "AN ABNORMAL DAY" GOD...😔


PRECAP:- MADHU CROSSING ROAD SUDDENLY A CAR COMES….


HOPE YOU ALL LIKE AND DO COMMENT...I WILL NXT PART SOON...


THANKS AND LOVE

ZOHRA (SURU)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc start cont soon...will be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Loved the update Suru.
This RK is so much better who Gave it back 2 Dipali.😆
MB-Trish-Ash Friendship is adorable.😳
So next part may be we gonna see Rishbala's confrontation.
Cont soon & thanks fr PM.
Edited by colorsluv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tooo good...
carry on...
thanks for pm...

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