Dark Virika FF:Ye Kya Hua?!? llPt6-Pg19..28/7/13 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Second honeymoon!

It sounds so much fun.

This update was nice. :D

Can't wait to read further. x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Wow!! Second honeymoon!!
Loved it!!
Awesome start!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
brilliant start
im in love with ur stories
continue soon😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Part 2:
Guyzzz sorrry but I won't be sticking to the precap and the airport scenes infact I'll be skipping the airport scenes sorry!
Sooo veryone hugs their siblings a tight good-byeee :)

Virika leave the house :)
In the Car:

Jeevika:Virenji,You are sooo sweet...You listen to everything I say and fulfill all my wishes :)
Viren:Why wouldn't I???...Meri aeklauti biwi :)
Jeevika blushes
Driver:Viren Baba airport aa gaya
Viren:Haaan Thaaanks Kaka :)
Both of them get down ,get in the flight and reach Bahraaaiiin...
Jeevika as soon as she reaches
Jeevika:Sorry Virenji,
Viren:Why sorry??...What happened??
Jeevika:I chose the wrong placeee its too cold here..
Viren:Maybe,this might help :)

Sooo they catch a cab and reach Hotel Sheraton :)
Viren:Yeaaa we'd like to book a honeymoon suite please
Receptionist:Yes,sure sir :)
She grabs a bunch of keys and gives it to him
Viren:Thaaank Yoou!
And they leave for their suite...
Jeevika:Wooowww! Virenji...I loveee this
Viren:Ikr! Its amazing :)
Sooo they settle down...Jeevika goes to set up the cupboard she keeps the suitcase on the bed and keeeps moving to get the clothes...Viren sees a balloon of flower petals sooo he bursts it and she embraces all the petals on her...

Both of them rest...
Viren:Jeevika we'll go out for dinner in the evening alright?? :)
Jeevika:Suree! :)
Viren:K
Precap:
Dinner Date and further plans :)
Questions...
Pleaseee answer these in your comments :)
1.How was the update??
2.Is adding pictures a good idea or not??
3.Any suggestions??
Edited by kushalkidewaani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Loved it the update was amazing and adding pictures is a good idea it's releaving the memories and sorry I don't have any suggestions
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Amazing Sarah

Nice pics

Don't want to spoil this ss with my stupid ideas :P

Cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
awesome update
its a good idea to add up pics but the update is damn short
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
loved it
and the pictire adding is a good idea
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

superb updates pictures bought back loads of beautiful moments please keep doing them

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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
nice update & adding pics is really an idea

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