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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg omg omg i feel like iam goona faint its super mindblowing and extremly excellent part... I wish i could kill the roy nainas... dia she is such a cheap women and roy he is a jerk mental jerk yukkk and natasha is truly a bitch... Poor arshi i hope they meet soon and plz keep the baby safe. Hate nainas again. Thnkx for pm. Precap is horrible and picture is to scary waiting for next part. U R SUCH A FABULOUS WRITTER.
Edited by meeshamalik - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG
I did not expect that
this is very CREATIVE
and terrific writing
left me hanging til the end

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Posted: 13 years ago
Whoa!! Talk about unexpected.. You said it would be too long, hah!!

Never knew when it got over, it was sooo engrossing!!

So Aman played double agent. The end of the first part shocked me, i mean Aman cant be disloyal!!

Dia, so so twisted, could not imagine!!

Eagerly waiting for the next part!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
every word was worth reading...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
wht an update. seriously hw can they be this twisted i get Roy is insane, but Dia to love someone who is so low is beyond insanity
i was shocked to even imagine a person can be that low to hv such kind of relation with a man when he thinks abt someone else all the time. yuck
hope Arnav reached soon.
loved it
thanxs for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
MINNND BLOWINGGG
U KNOCKED OUT EVRY1 OF US TINA
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Posted: 13 years ago

It was a super duper thrilling update. From the beginning till the end, the update was full of shocks & surprises and twists and turns. Loved each & every line of the update & a big thank u for giving us such a huge update but my thirst for more only kept on increasing while reading it.

This was the best chapter of 'Shamless'. I have already been addicted to this story & this chapter has only increased my addiction to it beyond bounds

The revelation of each & every character was astounding

  • Her every guess and theory had been wrong

Arnav? The almost causual way the woman said her husband's name hinted she knew him''' But her memories remained impenetrable

I sympathize Khushi who was literally squeezing her brains to figure out the face behind the mask of a woman

  • Hurt and anger filled Khushi whenever she looked at her husband. He'd promised to love and cherish her. Nothing could have prepared her for his betrayal.

How heart-broken Khushi must have felt to see the man she loved distancing himself from her & hating her, right after the wedding

  • Dia is a disgusting lady trying to betray Khushi in the name of friendship. Dia using friendship as a coin to win over Khushi's trust in order to keep her informed about the status of Khushi's relationship with Arnav was well written
  • Dia & Roy concealing their hatred in the name of friendship & ditching Khushi was a low or rather a cowardly act
  • Uncertainty and confusion pulled at Khushi as she watched the flames lick the picture of a smiling Arnav and Natasha, his arm draped around her slim waist.

In depression, friends, wrong advice & anger combined together Khushi landed up taking the wrong route & fell into the devils' trap.

  • How had she sunk so low, she wondered disbelievingly? Pretending to be someone she clearly was not just to get a response from her unfaithful husband?

"'Millionaire's Wife: the scandal, the scoop!' 'ASR's Wife's Boyfriend Spree' 'CEO's Wife's New Lover (details page 15)!'"

Each word burned into her with pain and humiliation.

Khushi nodded. "You are my friend, Dia, my closest friend. But still, I think it would be best if we didn't meet for a while. I want to fix my marriage on my own."

Your fairytale love story has ended long ago, Khushi. It's time to face reality."

It turned out to be pretty late when Khushi decided to mend things her own way without the interference of the Raina siblings & even her last attempt to discover the person who defamed her turned out to be disastrous which cost her life. This has made me infer that proper analysis of close people around u & decisions regarding mending life has to be proceeded with great circumspection

  • Tina, u have astoundingly framed Dia & Roy's deceitful ways they resorted to, to feed Khushi with lies, keep her mind occupied & in totality strike her hard at the right moment when she didn't even have traces of the evil living along with her in the name of friends
  • In all this I feel, Arnav should have been a bit alert, trying to locate the reason for Khushi's weird changed behavior & tried to make things right in their married life. If Arnav had taken up things seriously to jot out the causes of the hassles in their married life then things would have been different & they wouldn't have rooted this way. I believe a marriage will work only if both the husband & wife trusts the other & keeps a check on the issues surrounding them
  • "We both know you'll come.

I pity Khushi b'coz she had not even a single soul trustworthy enough to turn to & seek help from when she got the phone call inviting her to Dock 51

  • He grinned at her and then threw her down roughly, "Not Roy, you shameless girl! Alice!"

He just laughed manically. Wiping the lipstick from his face, his eyes closed for a moment.

When he opened his eyes, the glazed look was no longer there.

"Liyana!" raged the hollow, high-pitched voice, "HOW DARE YOU COME HERE, YOU SHAMELESS GIRL! I TOLD YOU TO STAY AWAY! I HATE YOU! I COULD KILL YOU!"

The speedy transformation at lightening speed between the two nasty characters - ROY, the man in love (or lust) with Khushi & ALICE, the woman in need of motherly love was carved out excellently that both facets of Royal Raina brought cold shivers in my spine. The brutal acts of Alice at Dock 51were horrifying

  • It was the only plan she could come up with: keep this deranged woman, whoever she was, occupied with questions till help arrived

Play along, Khushi, she told herself, Keep him talking. Help will come. Help will come.

Khushi's act of keeping Roy engaged by distracting him with her incessant pack of questions was a brilliant and moreover a timely act

  • "That was all an act. I could care less if my husband lived or died. I never loved him. He was just a convenient pawn for more money.

It felt like bile was rising in Khushi's throat with every passing word. Dear God, these sick people had wrecked her world for their only beastly desires..

After reading Dia's narration of her sick lust story, I feel my head is spinning ....Dia ...sticking to her husband for money....lusting a man who is a beast cheating his wife & lusting another married woman (who supposes to share the relation of a brother -- jijaji)

  • Previously while reading the older chapters, I thought it was Natasha who was the harsher one & had the most hatred towards Khushi of the two sisters
  • Arnav grabbed Akash by the shoulders, "Listen to me, Akash, such things do happen. Sometimes danger comes right to our doorstep and we don't recognize it, but welcome it inside. Sometimes our closest friends and family turn out to be monsters, their dark thoughts and plans disguised behind charming smiles. Sometimes, terrible things happen to people who don't deserve it."

I'm completely speechless & awestruck after reading these splendid lines & wonder how u managed to pack so much of reality with just few words to perfection

  • If you don't believe me, that's your choice. All I know is that time is running out. I have to find Khushi."

Take your wife and half the detectives. Find my Khushi.

Loved the way Arnav meticulously ruled out the killer to be ROY despite Akash's ranting. OMG Akash cannot be more dumb than this. He is of no help to his brother even in the most crucial situation. I wonder who will lend a helping hand to Arnav - Akash not of any use; Aman injured badly & the detectives very few in number

  • "Where are you, love?" he whispered, "Where the hell has that monster taken you?"

"You can take whatever I have, JUST TELL ME!"

"Hold on, love, hold on.."

Though I was upset with Arnav for not mending things initially but now his overwhelming love & care he has for Khushi has made me love this fictional character the most ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

  • "What?" And then his eyes blazed with anger. "You're playing these games now? Now, when my life has been literally snatched from me?"

"And I won't be able to marry you ever either. I'm a married man, get that through your thick head."

"Just because I love you, I'll change my terms: kiss me and I'll tell you where Roy is."

And then Arnav threw her off of him, wiping his mouth as if he'd just touched dirt

"Believe whatever delusions you want, Natasha. '..Then keep your end of the bargain."

Natasha trading Roy's hideout to Arnav in return for a 'bond of marriage' & finally reducing the price to 'atleast a kiss' sounded beyond disgust😡 🤢 The only good thing Natasha did in her life was to foolishly spit out the truth

  • "Run, Mrs. Boss," gurgled Aman, sinking rapidly, his eyes darkening as Roy stabbed him once more, "RUN!"

Kept wondering why Aman who knew of Roy's plot long back & wanted to play along with him in order to save Mr.&Mrs.Boss hadn't informed Arnav. Why did Aman choose such a dangerous path when he was well aware that Khushi was heavily pregnant??? Aman could have helped Arnav solve the mystery with ease, by informing Arnav & the detectives about these vicious criminals in time. Anyhow, Aman proved himself when he willingly fought the lunatic beast, Roy to save Khushi putting his own life in grave danger 😭

  • Blood..Roy was playing with blood as if it was paint.

"I'm the one who rescued you that night at the docks when you stupidly jumped overbroad," continued Alice, "I couldn't let you have all the fun, could I? I wanted to be the one to torture you and kill you slowly, relishing every second." She giggled with eagerness. "I was also the one who tried to strangle you in the red room..who stabbed that reporter..shot your dear Arnav..attacked you here in Nainital..set off fireworks near you.."

But did the insane need reasons?

These lines were awesomely portrayed

  • NATASHA ' a looser desiring for a married man & feeling complacent out of watching videos of Arnav and more disgustingly sleeping with her own sister's husband

DIA ' a mad woman who instead of thinking of patching up her marriage shamelessly running behind another sicko, Shyam & trying to ruin Khushi's life for no fault of hers but for the stupid lustful desire of her boyfriend, Shyam

ROY / ALICE ' a cracked nut taking revenge on Khushi just because she resembles his mother, Liyana & not being able to receive love from Khushi's end just like the way he was unable to get his mother's tender care and love

LIYANA ' the woman who gave birth to 3 lunatic fools whom she left behind to be turned into devils rather than mould them into dignified humans

Of these Rainas, I doubt which one is even worth of living... if not mistaken, I think they are competing to bag the trophy of "The most SHAMELESS & disgusting maniac" ... 'SHAMELESS' the most apt name for all the Raina siblings

  • Though the precap was scary I'm curiously waiting to find out what's the link between the title "Beneath the Water" & the picture

Edited by fleurs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update... pls update soonn and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was superduper awesome update... loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG...just cant belive...what a twest!!! ROY!!! a cross dresser!!! it was surely a dhamaka super duper maha update...

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