Ariya ff : HUM-TUM(PART 49 PG 153 OCT 5) PM LATER - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
just read all the 3 parts nd its amazing
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg how cute she s sleeping on him😉😳
sssooo ssswwweeettt
so romantic
loved her innocence yaar😛🤗
ariya forever😊👍🏼
liked shree riya convo
& love birds 😛
loved ur ff 😛👏🤗so cute so romantic
pls update next part soon😃
(a kindly request pls try to write ur stories in english - 4 all writers)
pls don't take me wrong, just a request
thk u

Edited by madmadona - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
after reading this update I have mixed feelings..in one side i am happy for Ariya 😃 & in others hand sad for Roshni

}she needs to be handled very intently..hope Rathod & suhani get succeed in that 😕


love Rathod-suhaani's nok jhok..they are too cute 😛


love how shree & riya's friendship blossoming up..😊

WHAT??? 😲 Arjun neva use SYS infront of riya!! now thats called 8th miracle 😆

lolz shree what?? rakhsahs & pari 🤣

woh last scene on bed reminds me of Barfi 😉


update soon di & sorry for late comments 😕

*Merry Christmas* & congrats for being writer of the week..you truly deserve it 👍🏼

Edited by -sree13- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
but pls dont show roshni negative

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Posted: 13 years ago
plz update na waiting...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dr y ur taking so much time come soon waiting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 19
Next DAY AT 7:30AM
Someone enter into Arjun's room , and see Shree sleeping peacefully in wrking condition , his spects nearly comes to fall , he hold some papers close to his heart , his laptop lay down in his lap. The person smile at himself & bend down , caressing Shree;s hair softly , calle him. . Shree , Shree uth jaa bachaa." after repeated calling Shree slowly open his eyes & see his best friend Chotu standing there. Shree put his glass on his eyes correctly , while Chotu put d laptop in his bag , Shree also keep papers in his bag carefully.
Shree streching his hands & look at Chotu.
Shree : (still yawning ) Hmmm... Good Mrng Papa.
Chotu : Good Mrng Mera Bachha. (Bth smile at each other & hug )
Shree : Pata nahi kab meri aakh lag gayi , acha hua Riya thi yaha , varna Rathod Sir to mujhe ...
Chotu : Kya , Riya ... kaha hai vo (he scardly ask him , while looking here & there)
Shree : (Signals him towards Arjun's room)
Chotu : (Peep in , shocked to see the sight in front of him) Ye to Arjun Sir ke bed pe hi ...
Shree : Ha..
Chotu : To chal mai nikalta hue
Shree : Kyu dar gaya (he naughtly ask him)
Chotu : Aur nahi to kya pehele mazak bada mehnga pada tha mujhe. vo abhi bhi naraj hogi mujhse.
Shree : Are nahi re baba , vo bada achi ladki hai. Vo to ab tak bhul bhi chuki hogi.
Chotu : Sacch na , varna pichli baar ki tarh tu mujhe suli pe chda dega.
Shree : Nahi , hum use baat karnge.
Chotu : Are ha mai to bhul gaya , teri report taiyyar hai na , Rathod Sir abhi aane wal hai , vo lene ke liye.
Shree : Kya , Rathod Sir , are inhone Riya ko aise dekh liya to... vo to margi hi , saath saath hum bhi le dubegi.
Chotu : To ab ???
Shree : To ab hame use uthna hoga.
Chotu : Kya nahi re baba , tu hi jaa , mai yahi theek hai. (He scardly says Shree )
Shree : Theek Hai , jaisi teri marzi. (He goes to Arjun's room & see Riya pecefully sleeping on Arjun's hand , By her one hand she hold Arjun's hair & another one she hold him , she rest her head on his collerbone , her hair touch his cheeck & her mouth little open )
Shree smile to himself. And call her slowly call her , "Ri , Ri , utho.. , bt he receive no response. He goes near her & shakes her , "Ri , Ri plz wake up , plz Ri.. " Suddenly Riya raise her hand & thuddd,,, Shree rubbed his cheeck , He can't believe Riya slapped him.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing chapter manali di

liked shree chotu ki convo

jaldi next part update karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
wa wa wa
liked shree and chotu's conversation
and riya by mistaklly slapped shree 😆
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey ...
that was wonderful :)

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