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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#481

wow lovely scary update.. after reading i stood numb for secs, oh god.. geet why u went to meet tat bitch and now u traped, oh god.. maan pls save ur geet i cant see like tis.. no never..

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Zariya

@zariya123

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#482

painful
never thought this type of ff it will be.
maan come soon nget her
hope so she will be still virgin

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#483

gosh..it was really hard to read

my heart beated fast reading this..

omg..

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

neha they r my frnds issiliye mere thread pe aate hai...its not sm deal😆

tu unko jaanti bhi hai kya?

they r my frnds too varshu...

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#485

hey...!!!

i jst read both parts today itslf...!!!!

i have to muster courage to read this story...

but d title is really amazing...!!!

~BLEEDING HEARTS~

title had made me shiver...i won't had enough courage to read dis...dat's why i hadn't read dis 1 till now...but today i read it...

and after reading d prologue...i was scared...!!!

i mean so much terrifying prologue...

i didn't had strength to read further...

bt again curiosity is sumthing which forced me to read it...!!!

n when i read part-1 i was so sooo happy...

lyf was so smooth for dem...

dey were surrounded by luv n happiness...

first part shows d lyf which was dreamed by every1...

dadimaa is also sweet...

n wat to say about maaneet...

dey are jst awesum...wid dier never ending love...

d precap- babaji...i was startled...i mean everything was going fine...in deir paradise den form where darn dis storm will b coming...

i was really petrified...

den d storm came...

n destroyed our maaneet's paradise...

here is part-2...which snatches everything from every1...

from sameera...humanity get snatched

from maaneet...deir peace, paradise, deir happiness...get snatched...

sameera is wat typ of girl...yaar...

how could she fall so low...

n our innocnt geet fell into her trap...

how i wish maan had stopped geet to go dere...

bt thanx to u...in last u had given us sum relief...

is it really happens in real lyf??

how could a girl ditch her friend...leave frndship...

how could she decieve a girl dat too for such cheap thing

i really can't wait for nxt part...

plz plz...pretty plz...update nxt part soon...!!!

Edited by deepali1022 - 13 years ago

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#486

OMG...hope geet is fine...but am really scared...
maan reached but his heart will bleed seeing his jaan in this condition...
that sameera..😡

Please update soon...

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Eza_analyst

@Eza_analyst

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#487

Mummmyyy varshh kyaa kar rahi haii yaaar
m stunned totally shocked...
Nd to be honest by the time I completed the reading my book was containing two drops of water I. E. March tears :( :( so much painful but I loved itt...

Eagerly waiting for next part jaldi se dena dnt make me wait so long nd boht hi painful maaneet moment hona chahiye ITS READERS DEMAND AFTERALL hehehegeee