Arhi: Desert Rose #4 Epilogue Pg 43

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

That was a beautiful ending to a beautful story :) Loved how you described the last three years with such ease :) It was truly amazing, this journey and everything about it. I was so surprised at the end when we find out that Khushi is pregnant too :) Loved it, absolutely loved it <3

Hope to read more of your work soon :)

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

It's really nice. The whole three years journey was superb. I am glad that Arnav n Khusi took that together.
Driving through the inhospitable landscape, with miles and miles of burning hot sands and people fiercely proud of their roots, he knew one thing for sure – this is what he identified with. This was home.

So true . We could travel the whole world but at the end of each journey we have to head back home. Khusi true to her character was there for everyone , be it Payal or Anjali.
Wow she's pregnant. Life couldn't be more content and blissful for them.

Will wait for your new story.

Merry Christmas and Happy new year..

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amitra1212

@amitra1212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

I am so in love with your writing... Please don't stop writing

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tanvigarg02

@tanvigarg02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Brilliant end to a intriguing story...U depicted their journey wonderfully...

Waiting for next story...

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Awesome epilogue Charlotte. Loved it.

Missing the FF already. 😭 😭 😭

Looking forward to more SS / FF / OS from you. Please pm me when you update.

Merry XMas and Happy new year. 🥳

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Beautiful epilogue... Yaar I am impressed with your geography knowledge... Really enjoyed reading a t their US stay and travels... All I could say for the Raizada family is all is well that's ends well, all of them achieved the happiness they so deserved.

Can't wait for the new story to begin and I am sure it will be as fabulous and amazing as the lady two... Your story telling skill is just wow, the amount of detail u put in your work makes it a treat to read... Kavi why don't u start a blog since the news of forum getting closed is making the rounds.

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

wowww...
awsm ending ov a brilliant story...
lvd it...
plxxx continue writing on arhi...
thnxxx...

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gabby123

@gabby123

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Commendable job!

This goes down in the list of my favorite ffs..

Thanks

Will read it again n again

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Beautiful... Can't believe it's over !!!! :(

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toblerone

@toblerone

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Posted: 13 years ago

#300

very nice ending 😊

wow, they did a lot during the last few years!! when mentioning their europe trip, you listed only cities, and then "switzerland"..haha, just a tiny little observation 😃

i enjoyed reading your ff a lot, and i hope you will create another wonderful story soon!!

wish you a merry merry christmas and a happy new year!!