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Posted: 20 years ago
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1st of all welcome to KTH forum...n 2ndly thx 4 liking my story😳...but agar app yeh forum dekho gi to app ko is se 1000000000 gunaa zayada achi storiez milen gey😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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very nice story rajeev fan👏👏
i like it😊😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow rajeev_fan ur story is just tooooo good👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey sehar! reali enjoyn it!! keep it up 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#15
Great story.I can't wait to read the next part.😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
#16
gr88 story👏👏👏 post the next part soon 😳😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ok guyz i m back

GAREWLAZ:

After breakfast all go to their respective places and veena getz busy in kitchen....

SINHAZ:

They too go to their respective placez....nd mohini goez to kitchen but today kashish has to go for shopping to buy a gift for her firendz sister....but 1st she goez to office wth her bro.

Now itz 1:30 pm

Kashish decidez to leave to buy gift as she dont hv much work in office...so she leavez..

Here sujal is busy in doing his work in office...suddenly he remeberz tht tomorrow is archiez b'day. Sujal thinking:

Oh my GOD kal to archie ka b'day hai...mujhe abhi ja ker ous k liye gift lena chahiye...or ajj office main zayada kaam bhi nahi hai...lakin i think i shd inform to rishi....then sujal callz rishi

rishi: hello

sujal: arre rishi actually main bahar ja raha hoon to agar to imp kaam a jaye to mujhe call ker dena main a jaoyun ga

rishi: ok big b lakin app ja kahan rahen hain????

sujal: haan woh kal archie ka b;day hai na bas ous k liye gift lene ja raha tha

rishi: ok big b itz fine...ok bye

sujal: ok bye

Then sujal hangz up and goes to buy a gift....by a coincedence sujal n kashish goes into same shopping mall...when sujal is going in kashish is coming out...and oun dono ki takar ho jati hai....nd kashish bags fall down they both sitz down to pick those bagz n their headz hit eachotherz lightly...kashish was having sth sharp in her hand (now dont ask me wht was tht) tht hitz sujalz hand and in other min there was small cut on his hand...........

sujal: ouch..ahhh

kashish: (now she lookz up n sujal look at her n her gaze just fixz on her) oh i m really sorry..wo actually..kheir app theek to hain??oh God yahan se to khoun nikal raha hai liye main yeh rumal (taking out frm her bag) bandh deti hoon

but there is no response frm sujal..he is busy in looking at her...

kashish: excusme me

but still no response frm him so he shakez him n say: r u alright...mr???

sujal: sujal...sujal garewal

kashish: ok mr sujal...app k hath se khoun beh raha hai liye main rumal bendh deti hoon

nd she tiez rumal on sujalz hand...after tieing sujal sayz

sujal: thx alot...nd i m sorry mujhe dekh ker chalna chahiye tha

kashish: no i m sorry actually galti meri thi

sujal smilesz nd say: chalen letz leave it...wasie app ka naam kya hai???

kashish: kashish...kashish sinha

then kashish lookz at clock nd sayz: oh my God i m getting late (actually she has to attend a meeting)...ok mr.sujal bye..nice to meet u

sujal: ya same here bye

then kashish goez out of mall but sujal is still looking at her n smiling..now kashish have sat in car nd hv gone but our bhudu is still looking there n smiling...after 1 or 2 minz salezman comez there

salezman: excuse me sir

but no response frm him..after saying 2,3 timez finally he shakez him and sayz: sir

sujal: (comez to real world n seez kashish has gone) oh yes?

sm (salezman): sir app ksis ka intezeer ker rahen hain:

sujal: nahi to kyun?

sm: actually u r standing here like this so i thought tht.......

sujal: nahi..wo...(then he askz) where is ladiez corner??

sm: (pointz his finger to upstariz n say) yahan

sujal: thx

sm: itz ok sir

then sujal movez towardz ladiez corner n buyz a beatiful dress of archie n comez back home

tulsi seez rumal on his hand nd worridly askz: sujal arre beta yeh haath per kya huwa???

sujal: kuch nahi mumma chota sa cut a gaya tha

tulsi then rumal utarti hai nd sayz: hai ram ise tu chota sa cut kehta hai??? varun beta jaldi se first aid box le ker a

(varun was sitting there on sofa too)

sujal: arre mumma kuch nahi huwa hai

by tht time varun hv come nd give box to tulsi

varun: leen mumma

tulsi: acha beta zara yeh rumal (giving to him) phank de

varun: (taking tht) ji mumma

sujal: nahi...(both look at him)

tulsi: kyun beta??

sujal: woh main khud hi phank doon ga layo varun mujjhe do (varun givez to him n leavez)

tulsi: lo beta main ne dua laga di hai ab yeh jaldi theek ho jaye ga acha main abhi atii hoon

sujal goez to his room nd tulsi to kitchen

NOW ITS NIGHT:

All r siting to table for dinner...

rishi: big b app ko yaad hai na k him mr.rohit sinha k saath project karne ja rahen hain

sujal: haan lakin woh to papa karne ja rahen hain na?

mihir: nahi sujal mujhe achanak london jana per raha hai so u will handle tht

sujal: ok papa

priya: big b app ko yeh bhi yaad ho ga k kal archi ka b;day hai gift lya k nahi?

sujal; arre baba mujhe achi tarah yaad hai or main ne gift bhi le liya hai...n varun rember is baar tum bhi ja rahe ho

varun: lakin big b...

sujal: koi lakin wakin nahi main ne keh diya to keh diya bas

varun smilez n sayz: ok big b

so guyz tht it hope u like

luv

sehar

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Posted: 20 years ago
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guyz i think zayada lambi ho gaye hai😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Itz a nice story plz keep it up👏👏👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ok herez part 3:

itz morning...sujal, rishi r in office...yesterday night mirhir hv gone to london...tulsi is asusual busy in kitchen...varun in univeristy n priya in collage

NOW ITZ 5:30pm

sujal is still in office n working...he lookz at his clock

sujal: oh my GOD yeh kya sarre panch (5:30) baj gey...main ne to arhie se promise kiya tha k ous ki help karoun ga or ous k liye dress ouse party se pehle doon ga takke woh party main pehan sake...mujhe abhi jana chahiye

he callz rishi nd tell him tht he is going to arhiez house.

sujal goez to archiez house....he seez tht prepartionz r going on...nd 1st of all gauri greetz him

gauri: arre sujal bhaiya ab a rahen hain app...archie app ka kab se wait ker rahi thi buhat naraz ho rahi thi..ab jaye or maniye ouse

sujal: oh my God...chalo dekh leta hoon...wasie pratham kahan hai?

gauri: woh actually koi imp meeting a gaye thi to yahan gaye hain

sujal: oh thtz fine...main archie se mil ker ata hoon

gauri: ok

then sujal goez upstair to archiez (remember he dont know tht archie lovez him) he goez in room archi is sitting on bed

sujal: arre archi kya baat hai ajj tumahri b'day hai or tum yahan bethi ho..cum downstair

archie: mujjh se baat mat karo

sujal: ok baba i m really sorry woh actually ek imp meeting a gaye thi thtz y late ho gaya

archi: lakin mera gift meanz dress maine party k liye kuch nahi liya

sujal: haan baba main laya hoon here it is (he givez her dress) kasa laga?

archie: (seeing the dress) woh itz really soo beautiful sujal

sujal smilez n sayz: ab to neechey chalo

arcie: ok

nd they both go downstair...sujal too startz helping them in prepartionz nd before 2 hrz of party he leavez frm there as all the prepartionz are done n he also hv to get ready for party

so guyz now letz see wht kashish is doing

she is getting ready in her room...she is wearing white n looking gorgeous..she comez down...all r siting in hall

kashish: bhaiya mujhe ane main shaid thori deer ho jaye gi

rohit: itz ok lakin driver ko zaroor le jana

kashish: ok bhaiya

nd she leavez

PARTY:

pratham is welcoming the guestz...nd sujal comez to party

pratham: (he hvnt seen tht itz sujal) welcome welcome enjoy the party

sujal: arre yar uper dekh main hoon...aur main bhi tere sath welcome karne aya hoon to mujhe to welcome karna band ker

pratham: arre yar tu hai chal ab tu idher khara ho or main jata hoon

sujal: haan lakin ek baar mujhe archie ko wish to ker k anne de??

pratham: nahi main welcome karte karte thek gaya hoon or...

by the timez archie comez there sujal seez her n sayz

sujal: happy birthday archie

acrhie: thx alot..lakin tum idher kyun khare ho ander ayo??

pratham: (before sujal can say anything he sayz) nahi ji ab yeh yahan khare ho ker guestz ko welcome karen gey or main tumahre sath chalon ga

archie want sujal to b wth her but cant do anything nd goez wth pratham

sujal is standing there nd welcoming guestz...n there comez kashish

she is looking amazing...sujalz gazez just fixez on her...she is looking stunning........

so thtz it guyz

sehar

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