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Aditi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#421

For Update-32

Ah-mazing..

Their morning after, it was beautifully explained Manu!! This morning must be so new to them and their love and want for each other was so perfectly worded. 😃

Their honeymoon started...and that too in Paris..you thought it so well..😃

Kunwar's jealousy and possessiveness for Shakti, its so nice feeling to read. Being I girl, I can imagine such a possessive boy...that means world to a girl..😳

their room..ahaaa!! The ambiance reflected a perfect honeymoon spot...

You explained each and every details with so much care...😃

That kiss in balcony!! I can imagine a tight and hot kiss in city of romance...so perfectly thought of!! Couldn't be better...

My favorite part:😳

Shakti's feelings about herself after their consummation...

A girl always think about it and herself...I really found it so realistic...Her defintion of Woman..it seems so real to me...really well put..😃

Then came the spoiler...Shakti!! Arghhh..I was too mad on her after reading it..how come she spoil her honeymoon with that news!!😡

But then wooo!!! The way she wooed him...it was extremely high temperature..☺️

I seriously found it ticklish to read their CON...☺️

You are good at shaping CONs in most subtle words...you are maestro in it...for me..I don't feel like "shy" or guilty when I read your way of explaining them...😳

Lovely update as always Manu!!😎

Heading to other one!!

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Aditi

@NxtRockstar..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#422

For Update 33

Manu!! It wasn't short..it was the shortest...😡

But this was purely blissful..

I really loved the way you piled the most normal and small moments into a sack of socks🤣...lolz...sowiee for lame humor..😆

Honestly!! It was one of best put household scene...I mean!! Most stories are about big things and emotions..and few dare to write about small still lovely moments..you are experimental with contents and that's why you are successful...really lovely update..

I loved wife SHakti and Husband Kunwar...Kunwar seems to be perfect for Shakti only as for others he is just angry bird...😆

Story of socks was so entertaining to read...😳

I loved the way they ruined the place with socks around...😆

and then ended up kissing in closet...who else could think of that???!! Manu only..😉

Loved it to core..😃

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar
For Update-32
Ah-mazing..
Their morning after, it was beautifully explained Manu!! This morning must be so new to them and their love and want for each other was so perfectly worded. 😃
Their honeymoon started...and that too in Paris..you thought it so well..😃
Kunwar's jealousy and possessiveness for Shakti, its so nice feeling to read. Being I girl, I can imagine such a possessive boy...that means world to a girl..😳
their room..ahaaa!! The ambiance reflected a perfect honeymoon spot...
You explained each and every details with so much care...😃
That kiss in balcony!! I can imagine a tight and hot kiss in city of romance...so perfectly thought of!! Couldn't be better...

My favorite part:😳
Shakti's feelings about herself after their consummation...
A girl always think about it and herself...I really found it so realistic...Her defintion of Woman..it seems so real to me...really well put..😃

Then came the spoiler...Shakti!! Arghhh..I was too mad on her after reading it..how come she spoil her honeymoon with that news!!😡

But then wooo!!! The way she wooed him...it was extremely high temperature..☺️
I seriously found it ticklish to read their CON...☺️
You are good at shaping CONs in most subtle words...you are maestro in it...for me..I don't feel like "shy" or guilty when I read your way of explaining them...😳

Lovely update as always Manu!!😎
Heading to other one!!

Awww...Adu...what do u mean by this?

Being I girl, I can imagine such a possessive boy...that means world to a girl..😳

Ahem Ahem 😉

Lol it wsn't her it was me who spoiled their honeymoon

so all the jootas n chappals in my direction

Lol i catched one hehee 😆

Kya karu thodi naughtiness dalni thi na toh used this plus Ek hafte ka honeymoon likhti toh i would have gone bonkers...😆

Thank You Adu, you never cease to amaze me with your energy boosting reviews..🤗

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#424

See I'm such an instant reply-er

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar
For Update 33
Manu!! It wasn't short..it was the shortest...😡
But this was purely blissful..
I really loved the way you piled the most normal and small moments into a sack of socks🤣...lolz...sowiee for lame humor..😆
Honestly!! It was one of best put household scene...I mean!! Most stories are about big things and emotions..and few dare to write about small still lovely moments..you are experimental with contents and that's why you are successful...really lovely update..
I loved wife SHakti and Husband Kunwar...Kunwar seems to be perfect for Shakti only as for others he is just angry bird...😆
Story of socks was so entertaining to read...😳
I loved the way they ruined the place with socks around...😆
and then ended up kissing in closet...who else could think of that???!! Manu only..😉
Loved it to core..😃

OMG! Comment shuru hote hi bum-baari 😆

Me taking it...

I had such a bad day that day *sigh* 🤢

Hahhaa ne re ye to MaDi humour ki pehchaan hai 😆

LoL This is something I practically run in my house

Throwing socks and Spilling surf ka paani is toh my identification 🤣

Yes it was experimental, Yeah I did it!

Thank you once again Adu 🤗

*wondering y laymark kiss not working*

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha
the update was beautiful

Thanks 😊

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha
awesome

Thankew 😊

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha
mind blowing

Thanks again 😃

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Aditi

@NxtRockstar..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

For update-34

One year passed???!! OMG!! 😲

Their first anniversary...WOW!! You know Manu!! I just realized while reading your update that everything haapens only once in life time...I know that sounds blonde😆 but really..I never gave it thought first...lolz...😆

Kunwar is such an amazing husband..I want one...parcel me ASAP..😈

He planned so well everything...but mess he spread-ed is worth killing...😡

But after that..ahaa!!! It was most beautiful way to celebrate anniversary..

That small note and then CD...she was crying..awww...ought to..😳

then that letter..I skipped a beat...it was so beautifully written...so truly said..it was Kunwar not mere letter..❤️

Shakti is so lucky..eager to read next...and excited about what Shakti will do for him on their anniversary...😳

beautiful update...