THE FAMILY CIRCUS- new links-pg 152 - Page 18

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Posted: 19 years ago
i love it!!! I love how they formed a pact, its halarious! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome parts 👏 👏 👏 here i m a little bit confused if its all of their plan then how can kripa had so much blood on her body.it seems that it was a real sserious accident 😕 😕 😕 cont sooooooooooooooon. i m eagerly waiting to know abt their next step 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful part
kavya, kripa and kunal r evil 😈 😈 😈 lol 😆
planned accident...poor angad thinkin its real
cont soon

Prediction
*i think that somehow kripa is gonna find out angad is zaib
*angad, anjali and nimmo mite find out abt kripa and bro's plan and they mite make k n bro's the emotional fool instead (dat wuld be preety nice) 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

wonderful part
kavya, kripa and kunal r evil 😈 😈 😈 lol 😆
planned accident...poor angad thinkin its real
cont soon

Prediction
*i think that somehow kripa is gonna find out angad is zaib
*angad, anjali and nimmo mite find out abt kripa and bro's plan and they mite make k n bro's the emotional fool instead (dat wuld be preety nice) 😆 😆

wow gr88 prediction loved it 😆i hope this happens and they fall inlove bcz if they dont then one is gonna kill the other person😆

😆

Saraa

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Posted: 19 years ago
CONTINUE SOON APRA ME WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE NEXT PART!!!!!!




Saraa
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Posted: 19 years ago
cont soon
i love this story... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev_eijaz

wow gr88 prediction loved it 😆i hope this happens and they fall inlove bcz if they dont then one is gonna kill the other person😆

😆

Saraa

falling in love thats a big question mark

i won't say a word just keep my mouth shut

all of u will be stunned with this story that is my prediction😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey apra
thats a fantastic part

👏

angad was looking spo handsome yaara 😳 actually i m gonna be one who droled over him

luved his look and personality
😳

kripa is an evil............ 😕

and kavya and kunal........both r same........bad boys bad boys..........how can they do this
😡

hope they will realise there mistake........

dump guys

on the other hand kumud, nimmo , anjali and angad have a good friendship

luved there sequences 😉

now whats happen to kripa..........

song on kripa, kunal and kavya

bach k rehna ray baba
bach k rehna ray
bach k rehna ray baba
tujh pay nazar hai

angad, nimmo and anjali...........bachoo yaar

b/w i too love singing

lolz
ana

frist of all ramzaan mubarak mere yaara

then awesome song just appropriate for the situtation

per kaun kis se bachega yehi hai sawaal

and the song for angad will be

tune abhi dekha nahi dekha hai toh jaana nahi

jaana hai toh mana nahi mujhe pechanan nahi duniya

deewani mere peche peche bhagi kisi main hai dum yahaan ther re

jo mere aage mere aage ana nahi dekha takrana nahi

kisi se bi haare nahi hum!!!!!

well jo samj daar hai use ishara h kaafi hai😉

love

apra

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Posted: 19 years ago

Thank you so much for your lovely comments I just loved them thanks a ton as they really boost my morale to write more and more.

Part 7J

RecapJ

Zaib concert and a planned accident by kripa, kavya and kunal

ContinuedJ

Angad rushed to the hospital with kripa bleeding heavily in his arms

"It's an emergency please call the doctor" he requested to the receptionist

"Sir it's an accident case so u have to first report to the police for it" spoke the receptionist

"Yes I will ask the police to come but you first get her admitted here"

"Sorry sir rules are rules first call the police and then we will get her admitted" she spoke in a real stubborn manner

"Ok" but suddenly an idea struck him

"Lady Do u know zaib" he asked her sounding casual

"Oh yes I am a big fan of him I love him"

"So do you want an autograph from him?"

"Yes of course why not but where is he right now"

"well lady I am glad to introduce myself I am zaib and now you don't want to see me in trouble rite and please don't tell this to anyone if you don't then I will take you on a personal date just you and me "

"Omg!!!! U are zaib, sir I am one of your biggest fans please hold while I fulfill the formalities and don't worry I will call up the police personally so that you don't need to take any trouble sir please make yourself comfortable"

The receptionist kept her words she handled the situation really well leaving a stress free angad, anjali, kumud and nimmo

"Are u mad angad" asked nimmo

"Why do you ask this?"

"How can u just reveal your identity to anyone?"

"Nimmo just relax I can trust her because she is one of the most stupid fans of mine and she is quite good looking" she said as he waved to her

"What ever you are impossible" nimmo huffed

"Hey chill sweetheart there is nothing wrong in this I just used my other identity"

"Well you used this identity for this kripa, angad how could you"

"Nimmo we are at fault in this case and I have no shame in accepting this"

"Ok there is no use talking to you anyway but I am still worried, by the why have you informed at home"

"Yes I asked anjali to do it I think she has done it"

"Ok then lets wait for the others to come"

Abhay and the others arrived at the hospital

"What happened" asked kumkum

"Aunty actually it was raining really heavily and that is why I could not see kripa and ran the car over her" said angad as he bent his head down

"How could u angad" asked abhay

"I am sorry dad but the road was not visible"

"But still can't u see and drive"

"Oh leave it abhay it's not a time to quarrel, I know it's not angad's fault" said sumit

Just then the police also arrived

"Mr Angad khanna we are told that you were responsible for this accident and thus you are under arrest" said the inspector

"But sirs I dint do anything it's not my fault"

"We will see to it only after what the victim says" the inspector restored

The doctors had also come out of the operation theatre

"Doctor how is my daughter" asked sumit

"Oh she is fine all she needs is a bit of rest"

"Can we see her" enquired kumkum

"Yes of course u can"

"Thank you doctor"

Just then the inspector interfered

"maam let us first meet the patient"

"Ok you may do your formalities"

"Thank you"

And then the inspector went inn and recorded what kripa had to say about the whole incident… as suspected kripa agreed to what angad had to say that he was not responsible for this incident... it was not his fault

The inspector then completed the formalities and released angad, by that time all family members had left and kripa was alone in the hospital…. Angad just walked into the hospital room and saw kripa fully awake

"Thanks" he muttered

"Oh you are welcome anyways it was not your fault" she said

"You are alone rite now"

"Ya bhai has to come he will be here with me for the night anyways how come u came here"

"Well I just came to see if u are alright"

"Oh"

"By the way what were you doing in that road?"

"Oh the fact is I had been following kumud and the others because I herd of some zaib concert was being held and they were going for it so"

"So you risked your life for a silly concert"

"The concert was not silly my zaib was performing for it how can it be silly"

"Oh zaib's concert can never be silly for you"

"Ya they can never be silly anyways u must have also gone for the concert rite"

"me no actually kripa there was no such concert we just planned to party and as u know zaib is in Malaysia how can he come here" another story was constructed by angad to keep kripa away from him

"But I herd and I can never be wrong"

"But u were this time" and he said this quite convincingly

Kripa was now confused she worked on such a silly plan and put her life to danger just for a silly party in which zaib never ever came

"How can I be so stupid" she thought

Angad watched her while she was thinking and he was happy that she was now convinced that zaib never came he praised himself by thinking that he was a good story teller

"But anyways thanks for everything" he said once again

"Oh you are welcome" said kripa "angad" she stretched

"Hmm"

"Actually will u be my friend and guide as I can not trust anyone except u, u see I am new to Mumbai and I am not aware of the roads etc"

"Oh does this need to be said kripa we are friends from today and will remain friends till we die"

Angad then took kripa's hand and held it tightly

"Promise" he said

"Thanks" said kripa

"Ok now I will leave got some work"

"Bye"

Angad left giving kripa a friendly look and kripa also returned the look to him

"Plan one accomplished" she said to herself

Angad then went to the receptionist who was by now looking gorgeous, he had planned a date with her and he too came to his zaib look and made the receptionist skip her heart beat

While angad thoroughly enjoyed himself with his pass time kripa started working on her next plan

Hope you all like it please post your comments

Coming up:- nimmo feels uneasy about angad and kripa's friendship and anjali and kavya come close to each other

I will be posting the next part by Saturday so just wait to read the story has just begin and it will take a huge change after a major twist on kumud's wedding

Love

ApraJ

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Posted: 19 years ago
its wonderful! i wonder wat her next plan is gonna b!

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